7empest5teele

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Woah, is there an editor scheduled to fix the broken english here like in World?
Holy shiit, reading that was just comical.
At best I was laughing at things like "bring me to the outside and upside down" or something to that effect, then there is bring it on brotherfucker, and some parts that were so illegible and jumbled it reads like a dozen words were thrown in a blender and spewed out on the screen.
I would recommend an editor donating their time to just doing a once over for the dialog, or at the very least use google translator.
I like humor in novels and games, just not laughing at the dialog itself.
 

JAYJAYHAY

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So the dev stopped hero for some story issues
now its been solved he's continuing the renders with a partner so yeah
expect next update in 2 months and it will be a big update with lots of stuff :BootyTime:
 

Porthas

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Interesting, a paywall. The only paywall I want to see is "game completed, please buy my game." :LOL:
 
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Diddy Futazone

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Interesting, a paywall. The only paywall I want to see is "game completed, please buy my game." :LOL:
What paywall as I had a talk with Dev himself he never talked about any paywall??
he was clear that he released what he made no patreon exclusives
 

kazeiheikaya

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i enjoy an OP mc story, I thought the VN looked neat, but ngl dev i seen all your comments referring to the black dick and well you might just be a fucking anomaly in the world LOL.

I've seen many of cock in my life, school days from people just whipping out their shit randomly, locker room showers, been to literal prison even, porn, never ever seen a white guy with a dick that dark lol. I've seen a white guy with a dick thats like, a few shades darker than them, could pass off as like maybe a latino dick or something but nah, not like that lmao. Hell I'm Italian so I got a bit of color even.

Hell even alot of AVNs have a darker model for the crotch area, it never usually matches the skin tone, but we're talking like Thin Ginger white guy with a dick named Tyrone right now. That shit is crazy dark lol. If it was brown like middle eastern/hispanic/hell even some asian dudes I'd be on board but that shit is black. Just comes off more of parody than anything, idk. MC is literally walking around with a demon dick lmao.

Alright I'm tired of unseriously talking about dick now :KEK: Anyways goodluck with future releases.
 
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5tops

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dicks really a issue I agree with dev perspective that people have colored dicks but the texture is just looks weird I think that is what people trying to say in this thread but they are kind of going after dev

whatever man if you're watching this try to fine tune the texture
the dick looks so charcoal that is the issue for me. it can be black or white but texture is important
 

5tops

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haha Dev actually admitted his defeat, I'm exaggerating it but he actually said they working on make the dick right here is the patreon post i saw on his X profile

 

fitty543

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if the mc didnt talk like a dude whos mad every girl rejected him all his life this possiblely could have been something. of courser with alot better sex scene or none at all...whatever you call the ones in it noone getting off to that lol
 
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