VN Ren'Py Hero [v0.2] [A Mob]

[Incognito^]

Meh - a short game, very little sexual content, and not much to recommend. I'll pass thank you. Maybe tone down the MC a bit, and come on, a giant black dick on a white guy? Not something for me.

well ok but white looking man do have a black dick like me and about sexual content next version going to be blast i do sex stuff when it is really necessary otherwise I focus on story still you have ur own expectations I will try my bst to reach with v0.3

See ya

 

[Incognito^]

Hello how you doing

this is the game dev and also if any F95 staff seeing this please

Change my itch store to this link

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and also add this guy CN_69 as co dev if you can it would be a big help for me

this version come of as a satire like mc being constant trash talker and dick
I'm going in that way

I want mc to be a dick but the circumstances are the reason his actions seems great

for example he wants to fuck the queen a wife of someone, but it is ok here because queen is in a fucked up relationship

Like i'm aiming for that blur line between being good and bad

and comes to sex scenes next version going to be blast I'm not kidding those scenes are already in the works and by my plan we have 10 scenes not clips if we go by clips it easliy reaches 30

please give us time We will make your time worth a while

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take care guys and thanks for playing my game and your comments

 

[CN_69]

Spoiler: Well fuck off

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well at last we released this version
I'm the artist who make everything in this VN, as he said the next is just a minefield, instead of mine it filled with sex scenes and also if you like story but worried about it direction going in a different way like mc getting cucked or he getting a realization he doing something wrong. That is not happening in this story, when mob narrative this story on discord call it really hooks me up


if you like the how narrative going the VN, you going to every bit of it in future version and also if you see lesbian scenes it is on me not him.

comes to main picture this version I thought we not going to release it. I completed render, animations by January and we are ready to release by feb I don't what is happening in his life he stopped calling me and no communication I thought the VN was never going to release but as a last attempt I went his home and gave some ass kicks to do his work

whatever guys next version on its way and also there is this new game we going to release by next week and also my personal projects in works

if you subscribe to us, you have so much entertainment in your hands, trust me it is worth your time.

BYE GUYS

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

The dialogue could use some English-friendly interpretations. But overall, a good effort by this team.
The Graphic Violence tag is very warranted in this game. My jewels are still frightened.

Spoiler: A cuck question for the ages.

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[Mr handyman]

Well harem and on top of that netori that's my type of game I will always play a ntr game if I am the one doing ntr

 

[AinzOoalGown1]

well the englisch is stronk

 

[Incognito^]

well the englisch is stronk
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please send a line where you have prob

and if you have prob with how they talk in throne room at the start of the VN it is just a choice of style

they are in a royal throne room, they talk in a royal manner and everything about it feels off it is just a choice I took but when you come across mc it is all clear

 

[Tyrranus]

man the engrish is bad here

 

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[OhGodNotAgain]

Meh - a short game, very little sexual content, and not much to recommend. I'll pass thank you. Maybe tone down the MC a bit, and come on, a giant black dick on a white guy? Not something for me.

Ok first of all his dick isn't for you, it's for the LIs and second is his dick the color black? or just huge dick like black guys have?, the distinction is very important here.

 

[Incognito^]

man the engrish is bad here

what im not understanding was
Grammerly give full script 85 points

u saying English is bad
is that means i'm not good with english or u don't know how to talk english

 

[Tyrranus]

Ok first of all his dick isn't for you, it's for the LIs and second is his dick the color black? or just huge dick like black guys have?, the distinction is very important here.

both, tho its more horse sized

what im not understanding was
Grammerly give full script 85 points

u saying English is bad
is that means i'm not good with english or u don't know how to talk english

the english in this is terrible, grammerly failed you. Worse than the english and bad 3d art tho is just a terrible, shallow, concept and piss poor lazy writing.

 

[Phase_01]

both, tho its more horse sized


the english in this is terrible, grammerly failed you. Worse than the english and bad 3d art tho is just a terrible, shallow, concept and piss poor lazy writing.

I haven't played this game yet but considering they literally asked you to clarify what's wrong, maybe instead of just throwing insults you could just give actual constructive criticism and specific examples of where the writing/art is bad.

Insults isn't gonna help them improve or make the game better lol

 

[Incognito^]

both, tho its more horse sized


the english in this is terrible, grammerly failed you. Worse than the english and bad 3d art tho is just a terrible, shallow, concept and piss poor lazy writing.

haha

yeah u just a dude who was butt hurt
but who knows why
fuck it
u play how you want I don't give a fuck anymore and also you support tyrant a game that has one of the worst graphics and 3d art compared to that my game is next gen

I'm not looking down or saying bad stuff about tyrant dev jusat saying what it was

as I said you play how you want i don't a f about it anymore
(My mind just messing with me , I need to get it out isn't tyrant a cuck a game??) is a cuck genre lover mocking my netori game now (is that why he is butt hurt? that my game is netori)

I haven't played this game yet but considering they literally asked you to clarify what's wrong, maybe instead of just throwing insults you could just give actual constructive criticism and specific examples of where the writing/art is bad.

Insults isn't gonna help them improve or make the game better lol

play and say what you think

 

[Requah]

Pale ginger MC in need of a haircut with a Big Black Cock ?
What's next a black MC with a tiny white cock? DA FUQ?

 

[Incognito^]

Pale ginger MC in need of a haircut with a Big Black Cock ?
What's next a black MC with a tiny white cock? DA FUQ?

am I the only with a black one and white skin in the world or what??
I swear brother I took my body as a reference and exaggerated it really there is nothing stereotypical or racial motivation if I really want to do that I can really do that I don't give a fuck but really what you trying to say it not my motivation here

 

[Requah]

am I the only with a black one and white skin in the world or what??
I swear brother I took my body as a reference and exaggerated it really there is nothing stereotypical or racial motivation if I really want to do that I can really do that I don't give a fuck but really what you trying to say it not my motivation here

Your dick might be a shade darker than your skin tone but the thing on the MC is abyss black, void of colour black.

 

[goulet1995]

well at last we released this version
I'm the artist who make everything in this VN, as he said the next is just a minefield, instead of mine it filled with sex scenes and also if you like story but worried about it direction going in a different way like mc getting cucked or he getting a realization he doing something wrong. That is not happening in this story, when mob narrative this story on discord call it really hooks me up


if you like the how narrative going the VN, you going to every bit of it in future version and also if you see lesbian scenes it is on me not him.

comes to main picture this version I thought we not going to release it. I completed render, animations by January and we are ready to release by feb I don't what is happening in his life he stopped calling me and no communication I thought the VN was never going to release but as a last attempt I went his home and gave some ass kicks to do his work

whatever guys next version on its way and also there is this new game we going to release by next week and also my personal projects in works

if you subscribe to us, you have so much entertainment in your hands, trust me it is worth your time.

BYE GUYS
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is the lesbian/bi/girl on girl stuff avoidable?

 

[Incognito^]

is the lesbian/bi/girl on girl stuff avoidable?

yeah sometimes but if it is involved with mc everytime we give choice to take it or leave it

 

[Thedude715]

what im not understanding was
Grammerly give full script 85 points

u saying English is bad
is that means i'm not good with english or u don't know how to talk english

Dude...... just get some help/translator/proofreader.
No offense but your grammar and sentence structuring is so bad it looks like it has been run through google translate. Like as in its so bad I barely understand what you are trying to say.