Author, if you will read this - take a look on my saves with not shown pictures (or broken scripts )
Can you fix it in next mini update?
Your game have good setting and story, so i decided to help you a little and wrote all of this near:
Bugs:
1) and after 18.00 i still can "get a tan" on the beach
from 18.00 to 00.00+ even at night time period
its a obvious logical bug here - without sun i can get a tan
2) when you are in Sports Courts and click on Victoria image here (Victoria is playing tennis with her best friend Melissa.) need to add Melissa portrait too here, because she present here too
3) From13.00 time Lexi portrait is present in 2 locations - Park and Gym.
In Gym Melissa not Lexi. So need to change Lexi portrait here on Melissa.
4) In school coridor before Class start (before 7.20) - here on portraits are presents 2 Lexi portraits. Need 1 to remove, i think
5) If you are One time found The secret room no need to re-find it every next time
6) In Mall in 18.00, 19.00 Presents 2 portraits of Lexi.
But need to place here this band of 3 Doll girls - Melissa, Victoria and Jill
7) Player can get a loop
Click on Phone - Tips - Back to game -Back to Game- back to Game - and etc.
will be transfer from Cell phone menu to Tips and repeat.
8) My save with "sister with open notebook" - click on "Turn off" and you can get a mistake. Need to fix it.
9) The Tip for you - don't do 2-3 sex scenes per 1 page. Because the sound from them is superimposed on one another + when the Player open the page, all videos start immediately. And at the moment of reading, Player sees the 2nd video already in the middle and has to wait or rewind it, and the 3rd is already at the end and you rewind it in the same way. it is better to run 1 video at a time, and the Player will be able to watch each of them immediately from the beginning, and not from the middle, as now.
Example 1 -Sarah bathrome scene - the sound of water going from 2 videos on 1 page. Need to separate this scene on some mini-scenes too.
Example 2 - Penny first kisses page - you are just opened it and immidietly listen too many sounds and 3 video starts to play.
Better to devide them on 4 pages -for each video per page + one page with Penny starting pictures here.
Thats what you did with Penny second "kisses" scenes - ideal. 1 video per page.
10) Second tip - after Player opened new locations of each teacher and more.. Better to place 3 house per line, because there are 2 locations in a line - they stretch the page down a lot and you have to turn the mouse wheel a lot on small monitors or screen resolutions. And 3 locations in a line - you can fit more locations on the Player's screen
11) Need the button to skip the time near timer -because alternative is - sit on square, swim with buggy picture and etc.
12) When Cherry, Lisa, Phoenix and Diana ( she do it twice! about her reading club) gave you their quests - need to place the nodes about it in Phone
And if this is more further on plot - need to add node - this opportunity will open little further (because right now- i try to do second date with Carol -this quests are close for me)
13) You need to check all videos like in Erin massage scene (while she teach Player first time for 200$) -because some of them video format and Player can set pause or change timer and play any time on repeating - some of them gif format and Player cannot control this gif-video.
14) you still need the option to "jerk off" in the bathroom or in your room with future events when you are caught doing this or spying on you. What for? Horny is gaining very quickly, and there is nowhere to "blow off steam". I feel sorry for the Main Character
15) taking a bath and "looking for something" on Kitchen dont skip time.
16) When after second time of meet Carol in Library when you are invited her on date after that speech - need to add this quest node in Cell Phone too.
About where and in which time.
And need to place her portrait on map on that location if this quest is active -because i spent a lot of time trying to find her
" I have to plan this date! I have to find out what she likes! " -and after that phrase no obvious clue what i must to do next.
on 20.30 in Saturday - she is out on map . On 21.30 she sit in bar and nothing talk about with her.
17) and if here is present the opportunity to repeat teaching of massage for 200$ -need to add this in quests node too, before all quests in this line will be done.
PS:
In general, I finished the game - how to run quests with a sister who asks for protection from a bully - I still did not understand, because it is impossible to talk to a bully in any way.
I also didn't understand how to see naked sisters in the bathroom or in the pool. There is this in the game files, in fact it is not possible to run it.
you can't help the professor in the gym - so maybe some quest broke down.
So...I will wait for the fixes of the pile of bugs that I described above - the game is good, but in the current version it is too raw and buggy.