VN Ren'Py Abandoned Highway to Hell [v0.5.0] [Mad King Games]

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mytaca

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Hey, i can't click on computer, the game just crash trying to load the action, and i don' have a low end computer, so
how do i proceed?

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This is my walkthrough mod for this game. This mod will show some recommended choices. Enjoy!!.
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P/s: Updated to v0.5.0
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It's a decent start. I enjoyed it. Initially, I thought about taking screenshots of errors(wrong speaker, etc), typos, misspellings, grammar, but I quickly decided against it. The game's good. It'd be worth the time to fix all that stuff and maintain a higher standard from this point forward.
 
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Hi!
Thank you all for your feedback. Regarding proofreading issues, it would help if you could provide some references to look at the script, and the proofreader can take a look and see what we missed. Otherwise, thousands of lines need to be rechecked, and it would take some time, which would also make room for mistakes. It doesn't need to be a screenshot but just a reference so I can search.
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Mr.Blackwell

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I was wondering I'm at the point where I have to choose between "Solitude or Contact".What the difference and what should I pick?
 
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Mad King said:
Hi!
Thank you all for your feedback. Regarding proofreading issues, it would help if you could provide some references to look at the script, and the proofreader can take a look and see what we missed. Otherwise, thousands of lines need to be rechecked, and it would take some time, which would also make room for mistakes. It doesn't need to be a screenshot but just a reference so I can search.
If you want to send feedback regarding proofreading issues, this can be done either as a PM or in my discord channel (
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Thank you!

Yours,
MK
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Really, the entire script/dialogue needs to be read through by a 'decent' proof-reader. I'll give you a few examples of mistakes/errors at the start of the game as I've had to start it again.

  • I had before packing > I had it before packing
  • I can resist wait for a few minutes
  • I thought you were sent out to scouting for places to rob
  • prolongue
  • But nore more.
  • waist > waste
  • I for certainly won't
So the above errors were all between the time the MC got dropped off by the bus and picked up in the car at the start of the game. There are numerous similar errors throughout the rest of the game like this, not to mention the strange phrasing of some of the dialogue, although I'm assuming the writer is a not a native English speaker so it's forgivable, but could be corrected.
 
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EvilMonkey said:
Really, the entire script/dialogue needs to be read through by a 'decent' proof-reader. I'll give you a few examples of mistakes/errors at the start of the game as I've had to start it again.

  • I had before packing > I had it before packing
  • I can resist wait for a few minutes
  • I thought you were sent out to scouting for places to rob
  • prolongue
  • But nore more.
  • waist > waste
  • I for certainly won't
So the above errors were all between the time the MC got dropped off by the bus and picked up in the car at the start of the game. There are numerous similar errors throughout the rest of the game like this, not to mention the strange phrasing of some of the dialogue, although I'm assuming the writer is a not a native English speaker so it's forgivable, but could be corrected.
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Hi mate,

Thanks for the feedback! I will correct these mistakes with the next release.
 
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0.5 Update news

Hi mates,

This is the changes/updates log for the 0.5 update:
- For the first time, we will have an Android build besides a PC.
- I am redoing the intro movie to incorporate a better quality. I still use AI for the intro, but now I tend for a better quality.
- I am redoing the intro to write the main character's name.
- I am implementing a proofread text for the 0.1 update to correct the issues with the dialogues.
- New story content.
 
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