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considering the previews from the comic page. i honestly think this should just stay a comic and dev should make a new game altogether. i mean the comics i imagine are kinetic and from the previews the girls have been through some shit so maybe not good for harem fans.

that being said the game tags don't give much. is the protag male? is (further) NTR avoidable(since one girl was already tentacle raped in the comic at least i assume rape)? what are the missing tags?
Thank you for your interest! It's true the comic was what I originally envisioned telling this story through, but after 4-5 years it only picked up 10 readers max. No one reads comics anymore... Well I do. Least of all online. It's also very possible that it's because my comic just wasn't any good.
So I have 4 main arches planned for the book, what's going into THIS VN, will be the "filler episode" elements I had planned to jump the gap between the first and second. Meaning alot of time to just "play" with the characters.
The end best ending will be to get all three of the main girls in bed together, but there is a big ass ship full of hot girls to mess with on the way, and some of the trio will enjoy playing. Some wont.

To summarize the comic though:
Main Character is a apprentice warrior, goes into battle, everyone he knows dies, and he's marooned for 80 years.
In the mean time the galaxy dies.
Princess Sasayaki "Help me Obi-wans" his ass, sucks him off then the go off to save what's left of the galaxy.
I do a really bad plot contrivance and the go rescue Hikari (Which fun fact, I rendered 75% of the images for but never wrote. So... fuck me.)

That's it. Well the do go through some shit, but for the comic, I was going for a story before something to beat the fuck outa our dicks with. This will be different. There shouldn't be much, bleh... Character Development.
 

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The undead girl (I'm presuming that's the pale skin gothy one) looks good. Might have to check out this comic first before trying this if she's in it.
She's a space Vampire. She's gotta suck dick instead of blood... I thought it was terribly clever when I was like 10. But it's a good excuse for her to want to fuck all the time. ^^
 

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Hi. Can we get Mac version also?
This is my first time messing with Ren'py and do not have a mac environment to test it in, so it might be buggy/broken. Next version I can put it up blind if you'd care to validate it for me, that would awesome.
 

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Avoidable?
Always.
The point is to go around stealing the Captains Wives. And some of his daughters. And sometimes at the same time.
The player can easily fuck up though and get to watch his fat ass do dirty things to your girls. But those paths will quickly lead to a bad end.
 
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Always.
The point is to go around stealing the Captains Wives. And some of his daughters. And sometimes at the same time.
The player can easily fuck up though and get to watch his fat ass do dirty things to your girls. But those paths will quickly lead to a bad end.
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On a more serious note... your models look great which is basically the main thing and since you have that the rest is up to you. The only problem I see(which might apply to the comics as well) is that the fetishes are... let's say on the less popular side of the porn spectrum, which might not generate enough interest for a larger audience and for the even smaller paying one. I'm only saying this from a bussiness standpoint and there is no reason for you not to succede even if you were to go for a more targeted audience but generally speaking numbers don't lie. If you wish to follow you heart(or maybe dick since we're talking about porn games) there is no issue with that but expect less interest in the game.

I was about to say your designs are great and wish you luck(didn't want to discourage anyone after the tastless joke I made in my previous post). Since the tags don't match my preference I was going to ignore the thread afterwards. But, considering your last few posts I'm putting it on my watchlist. As long as the NTR isn't the main focus and more of a "bad ending" thing and too many resources aren't invested into it I'll put it on my watchlist for now.

Again, good luck on your endeavor whichever route you decide to take.
 
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Please join us and meet our trio of prospective lovers: Sasayaki, the rouge princess with a secret agenda;
Tsuki, your undead servant who must feed on your essence to continue living, and Hikari, the mysterious heroine of our story whose origins are a mystery even to her.
They travel on the MFV Aquilla, one of the last cargo ferries left in the galaxy, filled with dangerous and beautiful women and commanded by a pervert who owns them all.
Will you be able to free them? Will you lose Hikari and the girls to the Captain's greed?​

I slightly corrected the overview. Use it it if you like. :giggle:
Atherin

The game sounds and looks interesting. Thanks for the share.
 
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On a more serious note... your models look great which is basically the main thing and since you have that the rest is up to you. The only problem I see(which might apply to the comics as well) is that the fetishes are... let's say on the less popular side of the porn spectrum, which might not generate enough interest for a larger audience and for the even smaller paying one. I'm only saying this from a bussiness standpoint and there is no reason for you not to succede even if you were to go for a more targeted audience but generally speaking numbers don't lie. If you wish to follow you heart(or maybe dick since we're talking about porn games) there is no issue with that but expect less interest in the game.

I was about to say your designs are great and wish you luck(didn't want to discourage anyone after the tastless joke I made in my previous post). Since the tags don't match my preference I was going to ignore the thread afterwards. But, considering your last few posts I'm putting it on my watchlist. As long as the NTR isn't the main focus and more of a "bad ending" thing and too many resources aren't invested into it I'll put it on my watchlist for now.

Again, good luck on your endeavor whichever route you decide to take.
Thank you very much. I've been putsing around the community for about 8 years now, doing fan art mostly and trying to learn from the more "Artsy" developers. Who sadly yes, tend to not generate enough of a following to continue. But I legit am just doing this for fun. Only thing I ever wanted was for people to check out what I do, and hopefully, enjoy it too!
And in that respect, so far I'm having a very good day.
 

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Please join us and meet our trio of prospective lovers: Sasayaki, the rouge princess with a secret agenda;
Tsuki, your undead servant who must feed on your essence to continue living, and Hikari, the mysterious heroine of our story whose origins are a mystery even to her.
They travel on the MFV Aquilla, one of the last cargo ferries left in the galaxy, filled with dangerous and beautiful women and commanded by a pervert who owns them all.
Will you be able to free them? Will you lose Hikari and the girls to the Captain's greed?​

I slightly corrected the overview. Use it it if you like. :giggle:
Atherin

The game sounds and looks interesting. Thanks for the share.
OH! Derp... Grammar. Thank you.
 
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I mean, probably
Guess that's how a cuc... a REAL man thinks
Eh, I think your original thought, that they love him but need to have fun without him sometime, shows the true cuck mentality here, just saying...

But hey, if that's how you wanna roll, more power to you. If you want your girl to fuck some dude without you, the question is, will you be there to hold her hand during it or not? ;) lol
 

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And these are the fucking previews, who knows how many other rapes are actually in the comics :KEK: . Since I assume the comics are canon, this will truly be the Harem of our time. *Hits watch thread*
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Hehe.. You'll probably get some outrage but most, having see the tags and the previews will simply do the opposite and hit ignore and move on. What will be left are the fans of the 3-letter fetish and the occasional moron who can't help themselves otherwise to complain about things instead of move on.
 
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Atherin

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Hehe.. You'll probably get some outrage but most, having see the tags and the previews will simply do the opposite and hit ignore and move on. What will be left are the fans of the 3-letter fetish and the occasional moron who can't help themselves otherwise to complain about things instead of move on.
Yeah, but ya know... after many years of being an angry troll myself... if having the chance to talk shit and put something down that honestly, duzn't have feelings, makes them feel good? Then in a round about way, I've entertained. And that's still a win.

I know I've just poked the damn bear right here.