Atherin welcome back!
Two last scenes in gallery are bugged. They have no pictures. Guess they were not supposed to be there?
Found something weird. Why princess Sasa is using word "We" when shes talking about herself? Not "me" or "I"?
Some choices feel like they have no impact at the game. Sasa had to fucked Captain? She's fine. Shes not angry at you at all.
You wanted to give up Hikari but her friends saved her? It's ok. We are still friends. nothing happened.
But new scenes are amazing! And I like the story! Hope the next "chicken-game" will result in losing first girl.. and not another bad end

I also feel like you tried to put to many female cast, it may result in you being overworked, or making some girls left.
Also information for NTR lovers
Yes there is some NTR but i would call it more like sharing. More like one night stands, because more "hardcore" NTR like loosing your girl results in bad end end game ad you have to choose something else