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Any option you choose means the game is over. Help, which option doesn't mean the game is over?
 

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Atherin welcome back!
Two last scenes in gallery are bugged. They have no pictures. Guess they were not supposed to be there?
Found something weird. Why princess Sasa is using word "We" when shes talking about herself? Not "me" or "I"?
Some choices feel like they have no impact at the game. Sasa had to fucked Captain? She's fine. Shes not angry at you at all.
You wanted to give up Hikari but her friends saved her? It's ok. We are still friends. nothing happened.
But new scenes are amazing! And I like the story! Hope the next "chicken-game" will result in losing first girl.. and not another bad end :( I also feel like you tried to put to many female cast, it may result in you being overworked, or making some girls left.

Also information for NTR lovers
Yes there is some NTR but i would call it more like sharing. More like one night stands, because more "hardcore" NTR like loosing your girl results in bad end end game ad you have to choose something else
 

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Atherin welcome back!
Two last scenes in gallery are bugged. They have no pictures. Guess they were not supposed to be there?
Found something weird. Why princess Sasa is using word "We" when shes talking about herself? Not "me" or "I"?
Some choices feel like they have no impact at the game. Sasa had to fucked Captain? She's fine. Shes not angry at you at all.
You wanted to give up Hikari but her friends saved her? It's ok. We are still friends. nothing happened.
But new scenes are amazing! And I like the story! Hope the next "chicken-game" will result in losing first girl.. and not another bad end :( I also feel like you tried to put to many female cast, it may result in you being overworked, or making some girls left.

Also information for NTR lovers
Yes there is some NTR but i would call it more like sharing. More like one night stands, because more "hardcore" NTR like loosing your girl results in bad end end game ad you have to choose something else
Royalty use we to refer to themselves. Google "Royal We". It's an old tradition.
 
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So this game is a bit dumb. First we have the dumb game against captain where one of the three main girls will get somewhat intimate with the captain, just not really avoidable, so that is dumb, and kills the mood a bit.

But my other big problem, this is a fake harem too. You have to constantly choose between the three main girls and who to spend time with and how to go on dates, etc. Not only that, the booty calls in the room at night, you have like 6 choices and you can only choose 1. So this feels like the most fake harem. We should be able to spend time with all 3 girls and not constantly choose. We should also be able to do multiple encounters of the night, not just one, if this is supposed to be a harem.

Just very disappointing and a let down.
 

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Atherin welcome back!
Two last scenes in gallery are bugged. They have no pictures. Guess they were not supposed to be there?
Found something weird. Why princess Sasa is using word "We" when shes talking about herself? Not "me" or "I"?
Some choices feel like they have no impact at the game. Sasa had to fucked Captain? She's fine. Shes not angry at you at all.
You wanted to give up Hikari but her friends saved her? It's ok. We are still friends. nothing happened.
But new scenes are amazing! And I like the story! Hope the next "chicken-game" will result in losing first girl.. and not another bad end :( I also feel like you tried to put to many female cast, it may result in you being overworked, or making some girls left.

Also information for NTR lovers
Yes there is some NTR but i would call it more like sharing. More like one night stands, because more "hardcore" NTR like loosing your girl results in bad end end game ad you have to choose something else
Thank you for your comments. Yes the last three scenes are actually from v0.4.05, which under the hood, this version is. Only I put hard stops in the correct places and removed the images and videos. They would be showing a big fat "Chapter 04" in the gallery but It turns out that anyone that played a previous version and used the "Unlock Gallery" button that's sense been removed, will see them as select-able options. Lesson learned. I do apologize to everyone.
About Sasa and "We", b5anon is correct, it's comes of kind of clunky when combined with my flawless dialog skills, but it's meant to be the "Royal We".
There are a lot of girls. Truth is I had not originally meant to flesh out this section of the larger saga. It presented itself as a good place to "Mess around" as I learned Ren'py (still learning...) and has grown into a bit of a mess. The core three girls, Hikari, Tsuki, and Sasayaki are the ones that really matter and who's parts in this VN will more or less stay "On rails". Most every other character was supposed to be just background. Ayre was going to be a very brief foil to Hikari as she delt with the loss of her parents then go away. Lala-fon I made up entirely after starting this but has sense found a spot in the long story moving forward that I hope people find rewarding.
I'm glad you enjoyed the new scenes, a lot of people complained early on about hot having gotten the chance to "meet" the girls and felt they didn't know anything about them when they'd only spent like 5 minutes of auto-skip time with them anyways. The Date Night stuff in this chapter gave us a chance to start touching on who they are and what they come from. It was very satisfying for me to exercise that and I hope just as rewarding for all you players to enjoy!
 
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So this game is a bit dumb. First we have the dumb game against captain where one of the three main girls will get somewhat intimate with the captain, just not really avoidable, so that is dumb, and kills the mood a bit.

But my other big problem, this is a fake harem too. You have to constantly choose between the three main girls and who to spend time with and how to go on dates, etc. Not only that, the booty calls in the room at night, you have like 6 choices and you can only choose 1. So this feels like the most fake harem. We should be able to spend time with all 3 girls and not constantly choose. We should also be able to do multiple encounters of the night, not just one, if this is supposed to be a harem.

Just very disappointing and a let down.
I mean, the first is not a criticism so much as it is an expression of your personal tastes? It informs no urgency on the developer's part, and essentially just says that the game isn't for you.

The second is a more valid point, considering expectations; in traditional Harem games you don't have to only choose one girl, after all.

However, in this game, you don't HAVE to choose a single girl all the time to keep her. So long as, out of the 6, you can win over more then 2, there is no better way to classify this game than as a "Harem" game. So that's less the dev's fault and more a tragedy for not having a tag that can express the difference.
 

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so this game let share your girls with others but it will end in bad endings?
I don't really like this type of games that just put the ntr only to get bad endings without any solid story behind...
So how this is? ntr just to be there for the views or it get seriously with story?
Also this game really need walkthrough...to many bad ends...
 
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replayed the game in the new update(sasa route), but ended in the same place as the old ver, there's no new content? how do i get to the new content?
 

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replayed the game in the new update(sasa route), but ended in the same place as the old ver, there's no new content? how do i get to the new content?
Sigh... Please read the dev notes... Hikari's route and Ayre's midnight booty call were added with this version. Go back to the choice on the bridge and choose Hikari. Or Tsuki if you haven't tried hers yet.
 
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Is there a gallery unlocker for this game?
There is an unlocker built into the subscriber versions. A few public versions ago I accidentally forgot to disable it, it would appear that toggling it with that old version will leave the flag in persistent data and unlock them all moving forward. That is if you can find an older copy. Just be careful if you go off site, I've found my project laced with malware elsewhere after getting harvested from F95. Ironically... F95 is the legit source now. How the hell did that happen?
 
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serkanak

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Hi
First of all, it feels like it was there before the game but they didn't tell us. Secondly, it would be better if it was in a sandbox structure. I can't access most of the content in the game right now. There is good content but it doesn't mean anything if you don't see it.
 

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First of all, it feels like it was there before the game but they didn't tell us. Secondly, it would be better if it was in a sandbox structure. I can't access most of the content in the game right now. There is good content but it doesn't mean anything if you don't see it.
Try focusing on of (Hikari, Tsuki, Sasa) at a time and either (Kojia or Ayre). This isn't a "Complete all the check boxes get a prize" project. Depending on the players choices different routes will be shown. In any single play-through, even using the rollback events, the player is only going to see about 52% of what's available.

I've posted these before, but I think enough people are being vexed by this that it's worth dropping again. Don't pay attention to the actual node names, these are my pseudo story boards.

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I feel like there isn't really enough here yet to leave a full review, but I still wanted to share my thoughts.

First of all, I have to say, while not wholly unique, the premise is actually pretty cool since it's a fun amalgamation of sci-fi and anime tropes and the LIs are hot. I like the non-human ones as well.

I actually went ahead and read the prequel comics first and, I have to say, I found them more interesting than what's in the game so far, story-wise. I feel like the game tries to get you to the porn so quickly, it's missing out on a lot of the cool world-building the comics set up. I also felt like the rug got pulled out from under me in terms of the POV character and some of the interesting characters in the prequel, which also means that, so far, the sexy times are limited to just your harem and then NTR bad-ends without having the chance for lots of fun sex among lots of people like the comic was portraying and, I thought, setting up for in the main game.

Continuing in that vein, I'm not really a hard NTR enjoyer (though I love me some swinging), but I do like seeing LIs getting down with other dudes. Here, it's either just an outright bad end or something that the LIs really aren't on board for, so it's just another flavor of non-con. I honestly hate sex scenes that just lead to bad ends since its then non-canon for actual game progression and, more importantly, takes time and resources away from the main route that actually continue the overall story.

Also, as others have noted, some of the story info seems locked behind specific "routes" as they are, which just sucks if you aren't one to painstakingly go back to each route to read each one.

Overall, while I do see a lot of potential here and dig the setting and the LIs, you should really reconsider streamlining the routes to at least remove sex-scene bad end stuff to keep up the pace. Also, try to limit all the pertinent main story information to the general expository sections and leave the character building/minor lore stuff to the routes themselves. Finally, and as others have mentioned, for the love of your favorite waifu, dude, learn how to proofread. Or throw it in Open Office to at least catch the spelling errors. It's wildly distracting and that's a shame since each LI has a pretty strong personality and there's a lot of opportunity here.

Best of luck with further dev! I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next!
 
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Any big events wewill see in the future updates? :O
Well... I'm just sitting down to work on 0.04.10 this morning... Chapter four starts with have some wrap up from the night before, depending on choices and affinity the player may get a bit of a threesome in the shower...
But most of chapter four is catch up for players who didn't read the comic, also filling shit in because comic #07 still isn't finished. derp... That and some serious shit with Ayre that made me uncomfortable, and I wrote it... All that queued off of Lala-Sue asking "What's it like to be a Guardia?" who then promptly gets sent off to do chores when Tsuki starts the story telling with a dirty story about sex with the main character and his master.
My plan was to put in a Hex grid mini game, spent the entire 4rth poking at it just to realize, yes I suck at python.
But chapter 4 will end with a choice between Lala-fon and Ayre, at which point the cross over between the multiple choices will end and a path towards the finish will be committed too.
 
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