After not playing this VN for a year to two years I can't seem to get back into it. I also find myself not enjoying VNs with multiple paths because all I keep thinking about is what am I missing out on. I do not like replaying games often so it kind of sucks.
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- Jul 25, 2017
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I will say this works for the story not against because it is a trigger for the MC and his trauma , knowing how he failed in the past. It is a part that making him want to project the llyods no matter what.
- Jul 26, 2023
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And creates drama when Charlotte hears MC mumbling the name Emma in his sleep.
The whole thing does only really work if youre able to shut your brain down while reading. The whole mc killing the detective storyline was way more of a brainfart but its a similar cause.
Its like the story and the other characters (men) are forcefully designed to showcase the mc's awesome whiteknighting no matter how much logic, realisim or character design have to bend for that goal. The whole thing with one of the most wealthy and influential persons in the world/industry aka charlotte being a !entirely! defenseless victim against any fucking man walking around without this one guy (our mc) is already super dumb tbh.
This women would simply have a army of highly professional bodyguards. It would be one thing if she was only rich, but shes rich AND super charismatic and connected.
Bending the logic entirely to make a character look awesome happened this update too, just charlotte in this case.
The whole college fashion show cheating plot was just so hilariously dumb. Uuuhuhh what a masterplan to require the fashion designers to showcase their dresses with professional models (which is so dumb in itself in college) when the girlswho meant to have a disadvantage due to the trickery has the worlds most famous model as mom and the number 2 or 3 (kayla) sitting as fan there .................
......... this is so dumb and ONLY designed like that to make charlotte look awesome despite all logic
Yet i still liked the scene, charlotte looked awesome and i managed to not think too much about it until know
tldr: dont take the story, logic and realism too serious. Its a self insertion whiteknight/simp romance story but its still entertaining.
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- Jun 2, 2017
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I mean you should probably check out other VNs sometime
Emma could be 14 and it would all still be fair game for her. If you keep the references subtle and her model doesn't change Patreon would not even give a shit. They only lose their shit if step or adopted or cousins and such.
So thinking that at 18 she could not be a LI is extremely self-absorbed as you know many, many others (including the dev) obviously feel the opposite.
The story would be better served if Emma was the only LI because Char is damaged and suffers PTSD, and Suzi She-Hulk is too sick with Gamma Rads.
See you can see how that previous statement mirrors yours but maybe you can see now how useless they both are??
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- Jul 25, 2017
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Honestly I really liked Charlotte in this update. It feels like she might be getting over some of her issues with the MC and we can move forward and start some good romance segments with her in the next update or 2. If I recall she kind of pulled back some after initially giving the MC a kiss at the end of Ch 14 but in this update she kissed him twice and letting the MC touch her a little more than normal. So it for sure feels like a step in the right direction for her and now she thinks Jason is dealt with will put her mind as ease as well.
- Jul 12, 2020
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Do you want some more straw for that post?
She is literally written (for unknown reasons given her sister is nothing like that) like a twelve year old....and yes, Patreon would have a huge fucking problem with it. Wtf are you actually on about?
Her age has nothing to do with anything, her personality and mental age does and while popular (sorry Joshy), even I don't have a save for her because it just feels all sorts of fifty shades of weird and wrong.
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Be sure, there will never come "something hot" (even if there will be a camp fire scene)
- Jul 25, 2017
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just depends on your mindset. I don't need a sex scene to be " hot" to find it hot or be turned on. The context of a scene , build up and relationship of a character is often times enough for me to find some hot and get turned on , even if a sex scene is lacking.
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- May 28, 2017
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To me, the game is still good, but it's also clear that it has problems in the last few years where the dev is having trouble with how to move the game forward that it is not anywhere as good as it could've been.
I think the biggest issue is the decision to have Charlotte and Emma as the main 2 characters in the game but also setting them so far back in terms of relationship with MC at the start (Charlotte hated men, and Emma was 200% clueless about guys) that it'd require so much time to move them forward. Added with the slow burn approach, the overall relationship didn't progress much when compared to the game's 4 years of development despite the quite meaningful story progression. Most people would play the game for the romance/relationship and not the plot about criminals so the slow burn feels really really really slow. Up to this latest update, Charlotte is still only at the "can I trust MC?" stage.
I genuinely think that the dev simply doesn't know how they can move the relationship forward because of what the game has committed to.
This doesn't even take into consideration how Suzi is so neglected that she's even further behind and still stuck at the "MC is a perv, I don't trust him and I don't understand why Charlotte and Emma like him" stage.
I think the biggest issue is the decision to have Charlotte and Emma as the main 2 characters in the game but also setting them so far back in terms of relationship with MC at the start (Charlotte hated men, and Emma was 200% clueless about guys) that it'd require so much time to move them forward. Added with the slow burn approach, the overall relationship didn't progress much when compared to the game's 4 years of development despite the quite meaningful story progression. Most people would play the game for the romance/relationship and not the plot about criminals so the slow burn feels really really really slow. Up to this latest update, Charlotte is still only at the "can I trust MC?" stage.
I genuinely think that the dev simply doesn't know how they can move the relationship forward because of what the game has committed to.
This doesn't even take into consideration how Suzi is so neglected that she's even further behind and still stuck at the "MC is a perv, I don't trust him and I don't understand why Charlotte and Emma like him" stage.
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Suzi has finally moved in, which means it's time to tame that brat. Don't worry, I'll take one for the team and volunteer for the task... I got this
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I haven't played the update yet; my hope was that the relationship with Suzi had progressed.
- Apr 17, 2021
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Except to get on Suzi path you need to say no to Charlotte, Lucy, Emma, Kaylah, Agent Fox ... -- i.e., impossibru!Suzi has finally moved in, which means it's time to tame that brat. Don't worry, I'll take one for the team and volunteer for the task... I got this
I am still holding out hope that Lucy will be the keymaster to the secret Lloyd harem path. Show interest in her (but don't kiss her) while also showing interest to Charlotte, Suzi, and Emma but NOT Kaylah and Agent Fox. Lucy has no problem flashing MC in front of Charlotte and Emma (kinky!), sleeping nude with Charlotte, and she asks Suzi whether she has any feelings for MC before she moves in while still being interested in MC, so she has no problem sharing. And we know that Charlotte, Emma, and Suzi all need a white knight ...thus by the logic of AVNs = incest harem non-canon epilogue kthxbye
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You want progression with a Li in this game. Thats weird, we don't do that here.
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I know... it's a difficult choice, but one I'm happy to make - especially since 2 of those 5 aren't puttin' out anytime soon
Aint that the truthYou want progression with a Li in this game. Thats weird, we don't do that here.