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filosoff89

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she's not sidepiece.
Lucy's path is a bit boring for me. It's too easy. She throws herself into MС's arms, and then what? What's the intrigue? They are happy together. There are no problems in their relationship. There is no rival for MС. There's no reason for Lucy to be jealous either. Suzi has adopted a new "uncle". So did Emma. Charlotte was genuinely delighted when she found out. In general, it's boring.
In Kayla's case, there is an intrigue. How will "sex without commitment" develop into something more? How MС will put up with her career. How will she tell her entourage that she has a relationship with a bodyguard? Interesting. With Lucy, there is measured happiness.
 

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Lucy's path is a bit boring for me. It's too easy. She throws herself into MС's arms, and then what? What's the intrigue? They are happy together. There are no problems in their relationship. There is no rival for MС. There's no reason for Lucy to be jealous either. Suzi has adopted a new "uncle". So did Emma. Charlotte was genuinely delighted when she found out. In general, it's boring.
In Kayla's case, there is an intrigue. How will "sex without commitment" develop into something more? How MС will put up with her career. How will she tell her entourage that she has a relationship with a bodyguard? Interesting. With Lucy, there is measured happiness.
kaylah won't be li. simple as that.
 

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Why can't the author create problems with Lucy that they would have to overcome? There are opportunities for this.
that you need to ask from dev, occasional visits here to tag dev with your questions.
 

filosoff89

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that you need to ask from dev, occasional visits here to tag dev with your questions.
For example. Developing a relationship with Emma won't be easy. She will need to see in father's figure a guy she wants to sleep with. And he needs to see a woman in a child. Given the story of the murdered actor and the age difference, there will be a lot of problems with this.
 
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filosoff89

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that you need to ask from dev, occasional visits here to tag dev with your questions.
It's not a question. More like a feeling. By no means a claim. However, secondary paths are indeed developing slowly. Suzi. Agent Fox. Jenny and Hannah are completely forgotten.
 

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It's not a question. More like a feeling. By no means a claim. However, secondary paths are indeed developing slowly. Suzi. Agent Fox. Jenny and Hannah are completely forgotten.
Jenny and Hannah will become important on Emma and Suzi's paths - Emma because she won't know how to get a man's attention and Jenny has got that down and can help her, and Hannah will help Suzi come to terms with the fact that she's attracted to MC and needs to jump his bones ASAP or some other girl is going to snag him (probably Hannah).
 

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kaylah won't be li. simple as that.
As a story evolves, things can change. Which is what I love about good writers. Most will never set their story in stone until it is done. They adapt as the story unfolds and is written, as once you officially put "pen to paper" ideas and stories are tweaked, refined, and changed to better tell their story.

Some details just don't work in your head like they think they will on paper/screen, new ideas crop up to better tell a side of the story.
 
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