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The visual are perfect. The story is good enough there is just one flaw, the content is less and it the 0.4 version ended where the story was still introductory. But cannot say anything more as I can only suggest. Great work developer if you can share from where this story was inspired or who is the writer of the story please dm me I would be highly obliged. You may reduce the nudity as the storyline is interesting and I don't see there is any need of sexual content with such a nice story. It is based against the culprit so I am obviously hoping the culprit will get what they deserve and other will live "happily ever after". Emma and her family are innocent and her mother had already gone through a lot, don't make it worst for them as it may become frustrating for some readers which tend to make players skip the content. You would never want that happening as you and your team had put in so much of hard work into it.
-anonymous game developer to the other game developer
-anonymous game developer to the other game developer
Hi. Thanks for your comment.
I am listening to feedback, so thank you to everyone that has provided it.
It is my intention to rewrite the earlier MC dialogue as soon as I can.
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Just don't listen to us too much though heh. Remember, you're the Dev with the plan, we're just deviants
Hi.
I am currently the only one working on the game so I write the story.
And I'm afraid that the MC's presence in the house has reopened Charlotte's emotional wounds. Things may get worse before they get better.
Maybe the MC can help her to find the happiness she deserves.
Thanks.
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Well, damaged people have sex too. Don't get me wrong, I want to see Charlotte happy too, but sex can be healing in her situation.
Emma is too naive but discovering love and sex with her can be really sweet and fun.
Suzy is the perfect candidate for hardcore bdsm.
Lucy looks like fun and crazy sex situations.
Emma is too naive but discovering love and sex with her can be really sweet and fun.
Suzy is the perfect candidate for hardcore bdsm.
Lucy looks like fun and crazy sex situations.
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Wow, abuse is a strong word if something is mutual imo.
This can evolve into a tender story about overcoming trauma through love or a dark one about a bodyguard turning his client into his own sex slave.
Both paths can be entertaining and have plenty of sex too.
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I see, well I see lot of potential for a vanilla story, more focused on love and romance, and for a raunchier game with hardcore kinks.
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To be fair we're only... what? 2 or 3 days in. There's no time to work out any form of relationship between anyone not within the family unit. All we are getting at the moment is the characters as they were as opposed to the characters as they are when interacting with the MC.
- Jun 11, 2017
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With every update it gets more interesting
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Charlotte comes to see you in the morning, but does she see more than she wanted to?
After recent events you need to talk to Detective Carter.
And Emma is super excited to go for her first run. But she might need a hand getting over that wall.
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Does she walk in without knocking while MC is changing? Naughty landlady!
Her butt is just too cute!
- May 8, 2018
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Can't wait for 0.5 I love this game
Man..., that wall really seems like a challenge, i hope she can make it with the little help of our good professional mc
but... c'mon look at her, she is so freaking adorable i just can't take it
for the topic of romancing the family members, my mc will try his luck only with Charlotte, i know this will be a long term proces but first she has to believe in him that he is a good guy and not some creep like the rest of them and that he can protect her family and do his job well.
After some time when she gets more and more relaxed in his company and fully trusts him who knows, maybe she will start to develop some romantic feelings for the guy and even show him her delicate side
I mean, Charlotte needs love too, i think she had enough of bad things happening to her, maybe mc is just the thing she needs to finally find joy in her life
Man..., that wall really seems like a challenge
, i hope she can make it with the little help of our good professional mc but...
c'mon look at her, she is so freaking adorable i just can't take it for the topic of romancing the family members, my mc will try his luck only with Charlotte
, i know this will be a long term proces but first she has to believe in him that he is a good guy and not some creep like the rest of them and that he can protect her family and do his job well.After some time when she gets more and more relaxed in his company and fully trusts him who knows, maybe she will start to develop some romantic feelings for the guy and even show him her delicate side
I mean, Charlotte needs love too, i think she had enough of bad things happening to her, maybe mc is just the thing she needs to finally find joy in her life
I don't see how the MC is going to be romantically involved with any of them realistically. I mean I know they will waaaaaaay down the road, because well...this is a sex game after all. But both girls have serious issues (especially the mom) only a professional shrink can help with, and the MC screwed up his last job for being involved with his client. To me, the Dev went a bit overboard with the trauma, anything involving physical intimacy with Charlotte should be impossible; Emma is a much better option (but again, he screwed up his last job for doing that, so realistically, no dice)...it feels though that the only seducing and play the MC is going to get for a long time will be LI's outside the house.
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Interestingly enough if you touch her at the end of the last update Charlotte monologue is a bit different later in her bed.I mean, Charlotte needs love too, i think she had enough of bad things happening to her, maybe mc is just the thing she needs to finally find joy in her life
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Has it been stated anywhere that the plan is to bed the daughter? It could be a case of you "thawing the heart" of the mother and becoming the new Daddy of the house.
I mean... unlikely... it is a porn game after all but there's nothing I can see which suggests shagging everything with a pulse is the end game
- May 28, 2017
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I don't see why not. I think it completely depends on how the romance get started. At the moment, a few people seem to be against the idea because the women have problems, and MC shouldn't be the one fixing the problems. The assumption here is that as if MC is actively trying to fix them. Yes it feels weird if a bodyguard is doing a psychiatrist's job. But it doesn't have to be. It's perfectly possible that the Charlotte gets help from a psychiatrist before the romance with MC even started. For example, she has lived the last X number of years hating men, but MC has been good and the opposite of her prejudiced views, so she slowly realized that not all men are the same and decided to get help from psychiatrist for her to heal.
I agree it'd suck if MC ended up being creepy and grooming Emma. But similarly here, it doesn't have to be presented that way.
I think dev said no harem for this game. So I'm under the impression that romance would be built only to one person at a time. This should make the romance more believable because you don't really get to choose who you fall in love with.
Don't know about that, it's not like she's underage or anything, she's going to college after all.
And IRL, the whole you don't get to choose who you fall in love with sort of fits, but in a sex game...isn't that the point? You get to choose what you want to do outside the norm or what society would frown on...I mean who cares, it's a game, not RL. It would be disappointing if you get pigeon holed into being a father figure, at least make the option at some point...puritans get what they want, pervs get theirs; everyone is happy. Just my two cents.
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I'm not going to reply to all of their cases because they're all based on the same issue. You're making assumption about the relationship being unrealistic based on their current characteristics as if they are going to stay the same until the end of the game. Good storytelling (which is what we all seem to expect from this game instead of straight up fuck em all) would also include character development, and that's my whole point. Whether the relationships become realistic or not depends on how the characters developed. If the characters are developed well, then relationship between MC and any one of the women is very plausible and can be realistic.
Also note that you acknowledged we barely even get to know Suzy but you're already making wild assumptions about how it doesn't make sense for her to be in relationship with MC. That's crazy.
Sorry if I was unclear before. The whole "you don't get to choose who you fall in love with" is meant to be something that supports why the women can fall in love with the MC. It's not meant to be taken as if I'm saying MC can't choose who he loves.
For example, sure Charlotte has been hating men, but if MC has been the opposite of her prejudiced view of what men are like, is it really that unrealistic for her to start developing feelings toward him? Not really. It's unrealistic if MC acts like a pig and then she falls in love with the pig. But it's much more acceptable if her view is slowly changed to the point that she can finally see MC as who he is as a person rather than what gender he is.
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Your first introduction to Charlotte reminded me of meeting Lexi's mother for the first time in Lexi. At least in this game you have a choice about whether or not to make the mc perv at the woman, compared to the mc in Lexi imagining what the mother looks like without clothes on as soon as he walks in the house and being caught leering in the process too.
To me neither game should have situations like that when you're playing a bodyguard, especially a bodyguard coming in to protect someone who's being stalked/sexually harassed etc, certainly not right at the beginning of the game anyway. They would make more sense being included further into the game maybe when the relationship between the mc and the other characters has developed to a point of them feeling comfortable with the mc or feeling attraction towards the mc etc.
Like i said, i appreciate the choice being there in this game but the extended handholding scenes were still a bit odd. I don't know if that will be changed in the future with the dev rewriting earlier mc dialogue but it's not a big thing and just my personal opinion anyway.
Very interesting start to the game regardless. Looking forward to seeing the story develop.
To me neither game should have situations like that when you're playing a bodyguard, especially a bodyguard coming in to protect someone who's being stalked/sexually harassed etc, certainly not right at the beginning of the game anyway. They would make more sense being included further into the game maybe when the relationship between the mc and the other characters has developed to a point of them feeling comfortable with the mc or feeling attraction towards the mc etc.
Like i said, i appreciate the choice being there in this game but the extended handholding scenes were still a bit odd. I don't know if that will be changed in the future with the dev rewriting earlier mc dialogue but it's not a big thing and just my personal opinion anyway.
Very interesting start to the game regardless. Looking forward to seeing the story develop.
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It's fair to make assumptions based on what we've been shown so far. But at the same time, it's unfair that you're then using it assume that everything will stay the same until the end of the game. The relationships between MC and any of the women would happen (much) later on where characteristics could change by then.
Let's take Suzi as the easiest example because she's the character we know the least. The achievement page said that her personality is headstrong and volatile, it also hinted that we need to bring more discipline into her life. That implies that there might be character development where she started off currently doing whatever she wants (volatile), but could then change into someone who can tamper her volatility because she's becoming more disciplined as we progress through the game.
Same with the other women. Earn Charlotte's trust. Be supportive for Emma. Watch out for Lucy. Those are the things that MC could do that would affect the characteristics of the women.
Emma is shy now. OK, so let's be more supportive to her so that she can be more confident about herself. Once she's becoming more self-confident and not as shy, it isn't unrealistic at all for her to initiate the romance with MC, especially if paired with an eye-opening bad experience with Zak to show her that her "dream guy" is not really that good of a person.
There are many different ways to make the relationship between MC and any of the women to work. It depends on the quality of writing later on. It's far too early to dismiss it as unrealistic.
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