Probably not. Zak got gutted like a pig. The guy that gutted him got killed by the "big guy" they've seen around Emma as someone who "works for her mother". Two dead for messing with Emma. Not to mention Susi beating the living crap out of the girls who harassed Emma. Do you really think anyone is going to give Emma any shit?
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Probably not. Zak got gutted like a pig. The guy that gutted him got killed by the "big guy" they've seen around Emma as someone who "works for her mother". Two dead for messing with Emma. Not to mention Susi beating the living crap out of the girls who harassed Emma. Do you really think anyone is going to give Emma any shit?
My first thought about how MC is going to get away with the ending scene:
He could drag Carter's body to the Zak and make it look like a movie superhero Zak cracked Carter's neck, but then succumbed to the knife wound. Died bravely defending Emma from crazed attacker. Media would totally buy the story.
Good point with the latest update is that now Emma is free for a romance with the MC. No more Zak worshipping blinding her view.
He could drag Carter's body to the Zak and make it look like a movie superhero Zak cracked Carter's neck, but then succumbed to the knife wound. Died bravely defending Emma from crazed attacker. Media would totally buy the story.
Good point with the latest update is that now Emma is free for a romance with the MC. No more Zak worshipping blinding her view.
Don't mind what went down but man the dev made his characters look like idiots this update
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I expanded a bit in another post, I'm not against criticism, just like you said it helps authors improve, what I don't get is people that only thrash the story and then come back on the next update to do the same thing, if the story bothered them so much why the hell are they still here? Know what I mean?
I did this with Double Homework, said what I thought would be relevant for the author at the time and then got away from the page.
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Yup. I woke up today, saw those new updates and was shocked. So many excellent games got updated in such a short time. I like to play these games all the way from the beginning whenever they get updated because they are great and have such long update cycles, but I don't think I'll be able to do that now.
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Seriously, if it wasn't for the daughter part, this would probably be one of the best VNs around. Still happy when an update comes out but then... It gets really creepy.
The FBI is likely targeting the Weinstein lookalike. You can see the path its going. The agent is likely right there, since they are surveilling him already
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I have no complaints.. great game. Looking forward to more gameplay.
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Good Riddance to fukboi Zac and officer cocksucker. Now Rapestein and white chris brown need to go
Anyone else think the writing suddenly fell off a cliff all of a sudden? I feel like the mother and daughter's writing have gone in the toilet this update, what happened? I held this game to a semi-high regard in terms of story and writing, but that just nosedived for some reason.
Hi Uzhirian, thanks for the clarification, it makes a little more (although not perfect) sense.
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Yeah I just got to the talk about the date, and up until now I have loved Emma, but right now I couldn't give a fuck if she got kidnapped, she just become such a fucking whiny brat.
If you want to believe that Emma is a whiny brat that's totally up to you, I wouldn't totally disagree. Saying Emma just magically turned into a brat though is so far gone the entire plot must have just flown over your heads. The thing you guys seem to be missing is a tiny little thing called CONTEXT. Maybe just maybe..... the reason Emma has become whiny now and not before is due to the fact she had nothing to whine about before? She was coddled and protected and has not been told no up until now. Suddenly she's in a situation where she's being denied something she wants desperately. Brat? sure! But to make out that it's out of character or she's suddenly a different person is ridiculous. Believe it or not peoples attitudes can change in different situations!