We're talking about getting distracted by a super hot woman who's teasing him, a woman he'd never had expected to have within reach. No matter how professional he is, he's a human being which means he's imperfect (we all are).
So again he isn't really good at his job. Considering he worked in hillside before so he should be used to it.
Yeah, about that, I fully expected Char to lay down the law on the shopkeeper, going like "How DARE YOU throw my personal security out of the shop. Now, if you expect to keep me as a customer in the future you will do X, Y and Z, and before I forget, this merch will get a nice discount. You are dismissed."
Yes that is another route he could have taken to deal with the shop keeper. But I guess it was supposed to be a funny moment. Like i said worse bodyguard ever.Yeah, about that, I fully expected Char to lay down the law on the shopkeeper, going like "How DARE YOU throw my personal security out of the shop. Now, if you expect to keep me as a customer in the future you will do X, Y and Z, and before I forget, this merch will get a nice discount. You are dismissed."
bit like what happened on yellowstone (kelly reilly's pupil was accused from shoplifting and .......).Yeah, about that, I fully expected Char to lay down the law on the shopkeeper, going like "How DARE YOU throw my personal security out of the shop. Now, if you expect to keep me as a customer in the future you will do X, Y and Z, and before I forget, this merch will get a nice discount. You are dismissed."
I understand why you think this way, and some of the points you bring up are valid. The Suzi 'locker room' scene is a bit absurd: of course MC should have either brought Hannah with him/given her the phone to give to Suzi, or waited outside after Suzi was decent. But part of the reason that scene goes like it does is to remind people this is an adult VN. Sometimes, the genre determines what scenes are necessary.
Here are the facts of his bodyguard skill:
To be fair, he has acted competently. His clients are safer with him than without. My point was his "failings" are usually to highlight his personal connection to these characters, not to speak ill of him professionally. It's a good thing MC is not this invincible, infallible, hero with a god-complex; he's a man wounded by past trauma, trying his best to atone for his own perceived failure. That is what makes him relatable.
Hard to take this fella serious...He is such a simp...But he is ideal for this setting nevertheless. (ooh, scaary vein on his forehead, my what a tough guy.
) Sorry for spoiling things.
This is definitely not my MC because my MC has only one woman
