louisamay
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Hmmm... just got to the little scene btw MC and Lucy in the laundry room, and whaa? At first I thought, hah, MC will tell her what his thinking is here, but then... not. Just a complete 180 from the smarter writing that had preceded. Like, after how many episodes of 'wait', all of a sudden he's 'yeah, baby, let's do it on the dryer!' Really stupid. Took MC's IQ down 50 pts there (which is dangerously duh territory). I know you want the Lucy/MC relationship to not seem like a one-way street, but come on! That was a terrible approach. Bad. WTF happened with that?? Aaaand then just leave it to the reader, right? Yeah, I kinda THOUGHT it was coming by the way the writing got less fluid. Oh well. Ya can't figure it out, throw it to the fish. Well, I guess save and re-load. Unless there's another remake around the corner!!
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