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This is getting interesting. I like how the decisions you make with the people you meet affect who will be part of the rebellion. Keep up the good work
 

PapiSupernova

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The people calling the MC a "cuck" or whatever seem to have an...interesting perspective on the story. I thought that the MC standing up for Maia, getting wounded but still fighting, and being set up as being a revolutionary leader (depending on your choices ofc) make him a much more active force than he was before. far from being a "cuck". This was all great setup for a proactive MC.

Since this example shows how people can be split on plot points, it proves that being a "crowd pleaser" may not be the best choice. I advise you to stick to your vision! your renders are great, and what you have so far in terms of story isn't bad by any means, just unexpected.
How would the mc even be a cuck? What happened to make ppl think that?
 
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SafeForSure

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The people calling the MC a "cuck" or whatever seem to have an...interesting perspective on the story. I thought that the MC standing up for Maia, getting wounded but still fighting, and being set up as being a revolutionary leader (depending on your choices ofc) make him a much more active force than he was before. far from being a "cuck". This was all great setup for a proactive MC.

Since this example shows how people can be split on plot points, it proves that being a "crowd pleaser" may not be the best choice. I advise you to stick to your vision! your renders are great, and what you have so far in terms of story isn't bad by any means, just unexpected.
People are pissed 2 li were ruined nothing to do with being a cuck. If Alex killed the queen for stupid selfish reasons she shouldn't get off so easy. We can't trust a Li who goes off killing the queen and then give her a scolding and go on like nothing happened.
 

hitman2511

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People are pissed 2 li were ruined nothing to do with being a cuck. If Alex killed the queen for stupid selfish reasons she shouldn't get off so easy. We can't trust a Li who goes off killing the queen and then give her a scolding and go on like nothing happened.
I'd rather have an option to kill her.
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halil123

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There has been several rewrites and tonal shifts. Maybe the dev is stuck in a hard place between telling his own story and keeping patrons happy.

Well I am only here for the feet renders. But I'd rather see dev's vision than a mishmash of patreon voted plot points.

The only thing that bothered me with this update was losing the hand. A mechanical contraption will look weird in future sex scenes. Hopefully we get a magical solution.
 
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cannon90

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Thank you for the encouragement! However, I'm not a writer, far from it. That's why seeing things from other people's perspectives helps me think more clearly. It also makes sense in this context. If the MC was kind to Alex, she would be more likely to hesitate and reconsider going along with the assassination. I think that would add more depth to the game and to the player's choices.
If I may give some unsolicited advice, though I genuinely appreciate you considering on changing on what happened to the queen, having observed a lot of people complaining or criticizing (regardless if correct or wrong), if the change you will introduce (assuming) is better at the long run for the story, by all means go ahead with the change, but if said change will be worse for the story at the long run then the complaints/criticisms will get worse in the future.
 
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scaryterry19

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Holy shit, are you going for the record for milking a character?



There is a character you can choose to have a magic dick, she's not trans she's cursed with penis.

She's got no content though.

She's been in the game for several chapters, her and the MC get close but the dev decides to give a big fuck you to anyone waiting for her to actually get anything.
Yeah, what's up with that? Dev even has her as his avatar on here.
 

stukablyat

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That was.. something I guess. Some thoughts on the game so far.
I like the art style. It's what made me try the game so kudos to that. The story was decent and works perfectly for an AVN. It's not great but not terrible. I do appreciate that the MC is somewhat grounded for now, with hints of big potential. The scenes are very good too. Overall I was enjoying it. But luckily I haven't played it until now so I didn't have expectations cause boy is the latest chapter something.

Let me start my critique (complain), how can you have a milf tag when you don't have a milf LI? Perhaps I am forgetting someone but the Queen and Avery were the only milfs here. I initially thought Avery would be the MILF LI cause the Queen was a one time thing. Honestly, I probably would be less disappointed with the update if there is another MILF LI but there isn't so bummer.

Now to the death. In normal medieval story, the ruler/Queen's death is normal, cliche even. But in the lens of a porn game with a plot, especially the theme of the game so far, it's nothing but a cheap shock value to progress the plot especially when the killing is done by a LI themself. It was used to up the stakes, and attempt to signal that things are getting serious.

I think the biggest issue here is that some thought the Queen was a potential LI. I certainly did cause she has a special render and a scene. So the death caused quite a stir. So despite it making sense story wise, this is a porn game with a plot, with huge emphasis on the porn aspect, killing a LI (perceived) is dumb. It may sound harsh and kinda stupid but it is what it is.

Going forward, I can think of a few things. You can ignore all these noise and carry on with your vision, which I can respect. Or you go forward with plan to add another branch with Alex and Queen which I favor. However, I genuinely hope your doing this cause it made sense to you and you want to do it and not just because of the backlash cause I fear "caving in" to these may cause you to burnout. So do what you want to do.

Rambling done, I wish you dev a happy new year.

PS; If Queen no more, add MILF LI please.
 
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