RPGM Holdcraft Chronicles: Aki [Ch. 6] [Seez]

[maraudershields]

Does this work on joiplay now or it's no good for android?

 

[star12341]

I played this and really really enjoyed it. I am kinda anxious to see where it goes - it was really wholesome at the beginning which felt really nice. The 'NTR' felt very natural and you kinda wanted to see the relationship between Aki and Nichole go forward. By the end it got a lot more and dark and messed up and I am kinda doubting how much of what Nichole had been saying was honest.
I am kinda disappointed because I really was enjoying the wholesomeness and it feels like it could have gone down a consensual route...now I am just waiting to see how fucked up it gets. Obviously, Jake is being absolutely abused in a really disturbing way.

 

[star12341]

Yeah I mean in the latest part the mom confronts the demon about how if she tries to ruin/destroy the wife then she will kill her but that it's okey to ruin/destroy the husband which is seemingly the plan after the demon tells it to the mom. So I am pretty sure the game will just lean more and more into NTR and shaming/ruining the husband.

That was my impression too which kinda sucks (maybe), I really liked how supportive and chill he seemed at the beginning. I think that was a big part of why it read as wholesome. So I am kinda curious whether I'll enjoy future updates as much as I enjoyed the work so far. I was up till 3am cause I was so engrossed in it.

 

[Mommysbuttslut]

Obviously, Jake is being absolutely abused in a really disturbing way.

Everyone keeps saying that but there's no real evidence of it. If Jake didn't want to be turned into a futa then he'd stop. If Jake didn't want to get cucked by his mistress then he'd stop. Would I be happy going through what he's going through? No. That's kinda what he gets for cheating on his wife and letting a demon corrupt him though. At the end of the story do you think Jake's going to be mourning what he lost, or treasuring what he gained? He wants to be dominated, he wants to be used, and it sure as hell looks like he eventually wants to be in the middle of a cock meat sandwich. Let the dude do what makes him happy without inserting your own ideals about it.

The real one upset is gonna be Aki's mom. She's getting so hyped up to get fucked by futa Jake without realizing he's a terminal premature ejaculator.

 

[star12341]

Everyone keeps saying that but there's no real evidence of it. If Jake didn't want to be turned into a futa then he'd stop. If Jake didn't want to get cucked by his mistress then he'd stop. Would I be happy going through what he's going through? No. That's kinda what he gets for cheating on his wife and letting a demon corrupt him though. At the end of the story do you think Jake's going to be mourning what he lost, or treasuring what he gained? He wants to be dominated, he wants to be used, and it sure as hell looks like he eventually wants to be in the middle of a cock meat sandwich. Let the dude do what makes him happy without inserting your own ideals about it.

The real one upset is gonna be Aki's mom. She's getting so hyped up to get fucked by futa Jake without realizing he's a terminal premature ejaculator.

He literally says he wanted to be big and with a huge cock to fuck Aki with. He more than anyone is being lied to and corrupted. He is being feminized and being made into something he explicitly said he didn't want. Clearly, he isn't becoming more pleasing to Aki - by being into a premature ejaculator- which was as I understand his main goal in accepting the body modifications. He wasn't secretly trans or wanting to be a futa. There was a world this could have worked and been wholesome with them opening up their relationship and having threesomes and sex with the demons but clearly it's not going there and no one, even Aki less and less, gives a fuck about him. That's fine, it's just that the early chapters were wholesome and it's not looking like its going to stay that way.

I think the word cheating is used loosely here - Aki and Nichole literally set him up against a sex demon that used magic and his insecurities to get him to fuck her.

I don't think he wants to be dominated but he is being gaslit/traumatized into thinking he wants that as it the nature of the lewd demon magic.

If it had been written as you portray I am all for it - that just isn't how it was written and we know what is being done to him is dangerous and abusive or so it seems right now.

I guess this is more heavy than usual (and I'm not saying it's badly executed - just that I was enjoying the wholesomeness) because the cuck is usually an irredeemable loser and that wasn't my impression of Jake at all. He read to me as really supportive of Aki - so his abuse feels so out of blue and unnecessary. Again, that is fine, just not the same vibe as the early chapters.

 

[Creator Seez]

Damn just got back from my vacation. There is a lot going on in here.

I’m not going to comment on story stuff in here because a lot of people are jumping to conclusions or making assumptions. If you guys want clarification on anything or just want to speculate, come join the discord.

Hey Creator Seez!

First off, thanks for letting us pet the cat! Pretty nice little update.

There are a few things I wanted to point out:
Edit:*removed* I'm just blind I guess
2. The placeholder of Nichole at the end of Ch 5 in Aki's bed was also not updated/removed.

Now on to the main part.

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Looks like I forgot to change the temp Nichole’s line to CH6 instead of Ch5.5. Oops. The 5.5 content starts in the shrine. That temp Nichole starts the CH6 content once that is finished.

And good catch on the face error. If anyone else finds these DM me here or on discord. I always end up missing a couple haha.

Thanks for playing, guys! CH6 will be out in a few weeks!

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[{Jeizaguretokanteishi01}]

Damn just got back from my vacation. There is a lot going on in here.

I’m not going to comment on story stuff in here because a lot of people are jumping to conclusions or making assumptions. If you guys want clarification on anything or just want to speculate, come join the discord.




Looks like I forgot to change the temp Nichole’s line to CH6 instead of Ch5.5. Oops. The 5.5 content starts in the shrine. That temp Nichole starts the CH6 content once that is finished.

And good catch on the face error. If anyone else finds these DM me here or on discord. I always end up missing a couple haha.

Thanks for playing, guys! CH6 will be out in a few weeks!

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hope you had a good vacation nice work on the update good quality over all like always though i will say i wish there was a little more to it that being said I'm excited to see what CH6 has in store keep up the good work

 

[Reednux]

who do you play as in the game ??

 

[akinit]

who do you play as in the game ??

Aki, the wife.

 

[Deleted member 36687]

Ch. 5.5.1

 

[OmniCatastrophe]

I had to go back and check, but the first time that Aki and Nicole are in the bar at the resort or w/e you call that place, Nicole says to that barkeep girl who likes BBC how "Aki" will be ready for their parties soon enough. This is still very early on, and the time at the beach as well when she came on Aki's back had a similar moment. Aki for whatever reason decides to eat the cum unknowingly, and Nicole mutters to herself "Yes I did it!".

These two events really throw a wrench in Nicole's feelings for Aki being genuine, she fully intended to corrupt her from the beginning, kind of makes the whole "I never wanted you to end up like Garnet" spiel a bit jarring. I dunno if it's a bit of retcon or more accidentally forgetting what lines were written, but eh.

 

[Creator Seez]

I had to go back and check, but the first time that Aki and Nicole are in the bar at the resort or w/e you call that place, Nicole says to that barkeep girl who likes BBC how "Aki" will be ready for their parties soon enough. This is still very early on, and the time at the beach as well when she came on Aki's back had a similar moment. Aki for whatever reason decides to eat the cum unknowingly, and Nicole mutters to herself "Yes I did it!".

These two events really throw a wrench in Nicole's feelings for Aki being genuine, she fully intended to corrupt her from the beginning, kind of makes the whole "I never wanted you to end up like Garnet" spiel a bit jarring. I dunno if it's a bit of retcon or more accidentally forgetting what lines were written, but eh.

I'd have to go back and check but I'm pretty sure that line is in reference to her hiding her cock before Aki "saw" it. Basically saying "Yes I managed to put it away!" Not "Yes I managed to make her eat my cum."

Aki being "ready" doesn't necessarily mean corrupt. You could also interpret it as her being desensitized and aware of the true nature of the resort. Now whether or not you think that is the case is another story.

There is always the option that Nichole is actually just a terrible person. You could read it either way.

 

[icollectsouls]

To me, the majority of the characters all feel like decent-to-good people who just fall victim to their desires easily. Aki and Jake still love each other despite the whirlwind of adultery and debauchery they've found themselves in. Nichole has her "moments" but I feel like her characterization has made it pretty clear that she's genuinely pretty nice, and is even trying to learn from past mistakes (the effectiveness of which is up for debate, but...)

 

[Spoonton]

To me, the majority of the characters all feel like decent-to-good people who just fall victim to their desires easily. Aki and Jake still love each other despite the whirlwind of adultery and debauchery they've found themselves in. Nichole has her "moments" but I feel like her characterization has made it pretty clear that she's genuinely pretty nice, and is even trying to learn from past mistakes (the effectiveness of which is up for debate, but...)

Initially I thought the same as the start of the game was, at least in comparison to most others, a welcomed slow burn into the sexual content. But the floodgates to Aki and Jake's corruption didn't really "erode" how I felt it was leading up to, they were bombed from orbit. Aki started chugging liters of semen from a horse dick in like, a week or two, while barely recalling she has a husband she's in a loving relationship with. Then Jake gets pulled in, sprouts a few extra inches, has amazing demon magic infused sex with his wife, then in what feels like a 180, immediately gets manipulated into becoming a spineless femmy cuck, the femmy part of which he expressed not having any interest in.

I'm not trying to call the writing bad outright or anything, I still like it (though I could have loved it) and I want devs and authors to make the stories they want to see, but personally I got some feeling of betrayal and disappointment with how the story seemed to be shaping up in the beginning only to do a backflip and start walking in the other direction. I wanted a slow, tense, guilt filled descent into absolute debauchery where both parties try to retain some level of control over themselves and their love and commitment to one another that I thought I was getting. Instead it became more of a ""teehee, oops!" *forgets husband and sucks 38 cocks over the weekend*" kind of story.

Maybe I just got the wrong initial impressions. Still hot though.

 

[Creator Seez]

Initially I thought the same as the start of the game was, at least in comparison to most others, a welcomed slow burn into the sexual content. But the floodgates to Aki and Jake's corruption didn't really "erode" how I felt it was leading up to, they were bombed from orbit. Aki started chugging liters of semen from a horse dick in like, a week or two, while barely recalling she has a husband she's in a loving relationship with. Then Jake gets pulled in, sprouts a few extra inches, has amazing demon magic infused sex with his wife, then in what feels like a 180, immediately gets manipulated into becoming a spineless femmy cuck, the femmy part of which he expressed not having any interest in.

I'm not trying to call the writing bad outright or anything, I still like it (though I could have loved it) and I want devs and authors to make the stories they want to see, but personally I got some feeling of betrayal and disappointment with how the story seemed to be shaping up in the beginning only to do a backflip and start walking in the other direction. I wanted a slow, tense, guilt filled descent into absolute debauchery where both parties try to retain some level of control over themselves and their love and commitment to one another that I thought I was getting. Instead it became more of a ""teehee, oops!" *forgets husband and sucks 38 cocks over the weekend*" kind of story.

Maybe I just got the wrong initial impressions. Still hot though.

This is a common criticism that I think is totally fair. When I initially wrote the story I wanted it to be a slower corruption, but I quickly realized that doing that would make the story far far longer than I wanted it to be. So I cut it down and sped it up significantly.

This game was only supposed to be my way of learning the basics of RPGMaker engine. I’m close to releasing CH6 out of 10 chapters and I already feel like I’ve learned what I needed. At this point the goal is to finish so I can continue the story in the next game and add real mechanics to it.

(If you want to see some teasers for the next game, check my

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. Currently the teasers are free for everyone to see.)

There is also another reason that I chose to speed up the story. Despite what a few people here and on other sites have said, the silent majority of players are here for the porn. My gut instinct was that I should get to that sooner rather than later. Looking at the analytics that I have now, I was completely correct. So I don’t regret that choice, even if the story overall suffers a little because of it.

The nice thing is because the support from the audience has been so generous, this will allow me to take things slower in the future. If it keeps growing as it has been I’ll be able to do this full time soon.

I feel like I have written something to this degree in here before but it’s worth repeating.

 

[Spoonton]

This is a common criticism that I think is totally fair. When I initially wrote the story I wanted it to be a slower corruption, but I quickly realized that doing that would make the story far far longer than I wanted it to be. So I cut it down and sped it up significantly.

This game was only supposed to be my way of learning the basics of RPGMaker engine. I’m close to releasing CH6 out of 10 chapters and I already feel like I’ve learned what I needed. At this point the goal is to finish so I can continue the story in the next game and add real mechanics to it.

(If you want to see some teasers for the next game, check my

You must be registered to see the links

. Currently the teasers are free for everyone to see.)

There is also another reason that I chose to speed up the story. Despite what a few people here and on other sites have said, the silent majority of players are here for the porn. My gut instinct was that I should get to that sooner rather than later. Looking at the analytics that I have now, I was completely correct. So I don’t regret that choice, even if the story overall suffers a little because of it.

The nice thing is because the support from the audience has been so generous, this will allow me to take things slower in the future. If it keeps growing as it has been I’ll be able to do this full time soon.

I feel like I have written something to this degree in here before but it’s worth repeating.

That's totally fine and what I had a suspicion of being the case. The masses are gonna want sex, sex, and more sex, and there's nothing wrong with that. Not trying to make anyone feel guilty for appealing to the majority of the audience either. Even though it turned out to be something different from it's beginnings, I still really like what you've made. I just gotta hope you get to make the content you really want to make, and maybe that it just happens to align a little more with my tastes.

 

[Versace217]

continue the story in the next game and add real mechanics to it.

It seems my guess was accurate then

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I joined the discord server (can't post anything yet cause it's not verifying my number for whatever reason) and went through the wip thread and it looks like the MCs are different from Aki and Jake. Probably adventurers judging by the equipment on the MMC. So I had a few questions:
1. Are we going to see Aki and gang in the next game?
2. If (1) is no then is the game based in a different timeline.
3. If (2) is yes then is this the hero party that Aki's mom was with?
4. In one of your descriptions, you mentioned FuMC corrupting someone for the first time. Does that mean we'll be playing as the futa? And is the FMC the FuMC or is it someone else?
5. Are we looking at a late 2025 or early 2026 realese for Ch 1 of the new game?

 

[Creator Seez]

It seems my guess was accurate then

I joined the discord server (can't post anything yet cause it's not verifying my number for whatever reason) and went through the wip thread and it looks like the MCs are different from Aki and Jake. Probably adventurers judging by the equipment on the MMC. So I had a few questions:
1. Are we going to see Aki and gang in the next game?
2. If (1) is no then is the game based in a different timeline.
3. If (2) is yes then is this the hero party that Aki's mom was with?
4. In one of your descriptions, you mentioned FuMC corrupting someone for the first time. Does that mean we'll be playing as the futa? And is the FMC the FuMC or is it someone else?
5. Are we looking at a late 2025 or early 2026 realese for Ch 1 of the new game?

I'm currently not talking about the next game outside of the discord yet. I don't want to start setting expectations for something that is still in the early planning phase. The pinned posts have some the answers you are looking for though.

 

[Versace217]

I'm currently not talking about the next game outside of the discord yet. I don't want to start setting expectations for something that is still in the early planning phase. The pinned posts have some the answers you are looking for though.

Well...let's see about getting the discord server working. I'll be copy pasting this on there
Edit: Oh and I'll check out the pinned stuff.

 

[Ethriell]

This is a common criticism that I think is totally fair. When I initially wrote the story I wanted it to be a slower corruption, but I quickly realized that doing that would make the story far far longer than I wanted it to be. So I cut it down and sped it up significantly.

This game was only supposed to be my way of learning the basics of RPGMaker engine. I’m close to releasing CH6 out of 10 chapters and I already feel like I’ve learned what I needed. At this point the goal is to finish so I can continue the story in the next game and add real mechanics to it.

(If you want to see some teasers for the next game, check my

You must be registered to see the links

. Currently the teasers are free for everyone to see.)

There is also another reason that I chose to speed up the story. Despite what a few people here and on other sites have said, the silent majority of players are here for the porn. My gut instinct was that I should get to that sooner rather than later. Looking at the analytics that I have now, I was completely correct. So I don’t regret that choice, even if the story overall suffers a little because of it.

The nice thing is because the support from the audience has been so generous, this will allow me to take things slower in the future. If it keeps growing as it has been I’ll be able to do this full time soon.

I feel like I have written something to this degree in here before but it’s worth repeating.

Ngl a "Director's Cut" type thing would be interesting for this game to see how the entire story was planned and what changes you implemented over time.