RPGM Holdcraft Chronicles: Aki [Ch.9] [Seez]

[akinit]

who do you play as in the game ??

Aki, the wife.

 

[Deleted member 36687]

Ch. 5.5.1

 

[OmniCatastrophe]

I had to go back and check, but the first time that Aki and Nicole are in the bar at the resort or w/e you call that place, Nicole says to that barkeep girl who likes BBC how "Aki" will be ready for their parties soon enough. This is still very early on, and the time at the beach as well when she came on Aki's back had a similar moment. Aki for whatever reason decides to eat the cum unknowingly, and Nicole mutters to herself "Yes I did it!".

These two events really throw a wrench in Nicole's feelings for Aki being genuine, she fully intended to corrupt her from the beginning, kind of makes the whole "I never wanted you to end up like Garnet" spiel a bit jarring. I dunno if it's a bit of retcon or more accidentally forgetting what lines were written, but eh.

 

[Creator Seez]

I had to go back and check, but the first time that Aki and Nicole are in the bar at the resort or w/e you call that place, Nicole says to that barkeep girl who likes BBC how "Aki" will be ready for their parties soon enough. This is still very early on, and the time at the beach as well when she came on Aki's back had a similar moment. Aki for whatever reason decides to eat the cum unknowingly, and Nicole mutters to herself "Yes I did it!".

These two events really throw a wrench in Nicole's feelings for Aki being genuine, she fully intended to corrupt her from the beginning, kind of makes the whole "I never wanted you to end up like Garnet" spiel a bit jarring. I dunno if it's a bit of retcon or more accidentally forgetting what lines were written, but eh.

I'd have to go back and check but I'm pretty sure that line is in reference to her hiding her cock before Aki "saw" it. Basically saying "Yes I managed to put it away!" Not "Yes I managed to make her eat my cum."

Aki being "ready" doesn't necessarily mean corrupt. You could also interpret it as her being desensitized and aware of the true nature of the resort. Now whether or not you think that is the case is another story.

There is always the option that Nichole is actually just a terrible person. You could read it either way.

 

[icollectsouls]

To me, the majority of the characters all feel like decent-to-good people who just fall victim to their desires easily. Aki and Jake still love each other despite the whirlwind of adultery and debauchery they've found themselves in. Nichole has her "moments" but I feel like her characterization has made it pretty clear that she's genuinely pretty nice, and is even trying to learn from past mistakes (the effectiveness of which is up for debate, but...)

 

[Spoonton]

To me, the majority of the characters all feel like decent-to-good people who just fall victim to their desires easily. Aki and Jake still love each other despite the whirlwind of adultery and debauchery they've found themselves in. Nichole has her "moments" but I feel like her characterization has made it pretty clear that she's genuinely pretty nice, and is even trying to learn from past mistakes (the effectiveness of which is up for debate, but...)

Initially I thought the same as the start of the game was, at least in comparison to most others, a welcomed slow burn into the sexual content. But the floodgates to Aki and Jake's corruption didn't really "erode" how I felt it was leading up to, they were bombed from orbit. Aki started chugging liters of semen from a horse dick in like, a week or two, while barely recalling she has a husband she's in a loving relationship with. Then Jake gets pulled in, sprouts a few extra inches, has amazing demon magic infused sex with his wife, then in what feels like a 180, immediately gets manipulated into becoming a spineless femmy cuck, the femmy part of which he expressed not having any interest in.

I'm not trying to call the writing bad outright or anything, I still like it (though I could have loved it) and I want devs and authors to make the stories they want to see, but personally I got some feeling of betrayal and disappointment with how the story seemed to be shaping up in the beginning only to do a backflip and start walking in the other direction. I wanted a slow, tense, guilt filled descent into absolute debauchery where both parties try to retain some level of control over themselves and their love and commitment to one another that I thought I was getting. Instead it became more of a ""teehee, oops!" *forgets husband and sucks 38 cocks over the weekend*" kind of story.

Maybe I just got the wrong initial impressions. Still hot though.

 

[Creator Seez]

Initially I thought the same as the start of the game was, at least in comparison to most others, a welcomed slow burn into the sexual content. But the floodgates to Aki and Jake's corruption didn't really "erode" how I felt it was leading up to, they were bombed from orbit. Aki started chugging liters of semen from a horse dick in like, a week or two, while barely recalling she has a husband she's in a loving relationship with. Then Jake gets pulled in, sprouts a few extra inches, has amazing demon magic infused sex with his wife, then in what feels like a 180, immediately gets manipulated into becoming a spineless femmy cuck, the femmy part of which he expressed not having any interest in.

I'm not trying to call the writing bad outright or anything, I still like it (though I could have loved it) and I want devs and authors to make the stories they want to see, but personally I got some feeling of betrayal and disappointment with how the story seemed to be shaping up in the beginning only to do a backflip and start walking in the other direction. I wanted a slow, tense, guilt filled descent into absolute debauchery where both parties try to retain some level of control over themselves and their love and commitment to one another that I thought I was getting. Instead it became more of a ""teehee, oops!" *forgets husband and sucks 38 cocks over the weekend*" kind of story.

Maybe I just got the wrong initial impressions. Still hot though.

This is a common criticism that I think is totally fair. When I initially wrote the story I wanted it to be a slower corruption, but I quickly realized that doing that would make the story far far longer than I wanted it to be. So I cut it down and sped it up significantly.

This game was only supposed to be my way of learning the basics of RPGMaker engine. I’m close to releasing CH6 out of 10 chapters and I already feel like I’ve learned what I needed. At this point the goal is to finish so I can continue the story in the next game and add real mechanics to it.

(If you want to see some teasers for the next game, check my

You must be registered to see the links

. Currently the teasers are free for everyone to see.)

There is also another reason that I chose to speed up the story. Despite what a few people here and on other sites have said, the silent majority of players are here for the porn. My gut instinct was that I should get to that sooner rather than later. Looking at the analytics that I have now, I was completely correct. So I don’t regret that choice, even if the story overall suffers a little because of it.

The nice thing is because the support from the audience has been so generous, this will allow me to take things slower in the future. If it keeps growing as it has been I’ll be able to do this full time soon.

I feel like I have written something to this degree in here before but it’s worth repeating.

 

[Spoonton]

This is a common criticism that I think is totally fair. When I initially wrote the story I wanted it to be a slower corruption, but I quickly realized that doing that would make the story far far longer than I wanted it to be. So I cut it down and sped it up significantly.

This game was only supposed to be my way of learning the basics of RPGMaker engine. I’m close to releasing CH6 out of 10 chapters and I already feel like I’ve learned what I needed. At this point the goal is to finish so I can continue the story in the next game and add real mechanics to it.

(If you want to see some teasers for the next game, check my

You must be registered to see the links

. Currently the teasers are free for everyone to see.)

There is also another reason that I chose to speed up the story. Despite what a few people here and on other sites have said, the silent majority of players are here for the porn. My gut instinct was that I should get to that sooner rather than later. Looking at the analytics that I have now, I was completely correct. So I don’t regret that choice, even if the story overall suffers a little because of it.

The nice thing is because the support from the audience has been so generous, this will allow me to take things slower in the future. If it keeps growing as it has been I’ll be able to do this full time soon.

I feel like I have written something to this degree in here before but it’s worth repeating.

That's totally fine and what I had a suspicion of being the case. The masses are gonna want sex, sex, and more sex, and there's nothing wrong with that. Not trying to make anyone feel guilty for appealing to the majority of the audience either. Even though it turned out to be something different from it's beginnings, I still really like what you've made. I just gotta hope you get to make the content you really want to make, and maybe that it just happens to align a little more with my tastes.

 

[Versace217]

continue the story in the next game and add real mechanics to it.

It seems my guess was accurate then

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I joined the discord server (can't post anything yet cause it's not verifying my number for whatever reason) and went through the wip thread and it looks like the MCs are different from Aki and Jake. Probably adventurers judging by the equipment on the MMC. So I had a few questions:
1. Are we going to see Aki and gang in the next game?
2. If (1) is no then is the game based in a different timeline.
3. If (2) is yes then is this the hero party that Aki's mom was with?
4. In one of your descriptions, you mentioned FuMC corrupting someone for the first time. Does that mean we'll be playing as the futa? And is the FMC the FuMC or is it someone else?
5. Are we looking at a late 2025 or early 2026 realese for Ch 1 of the new game?

 

[Creator Seez]

It seems my guess was accurate then

I joined the discord server (can't post anything yet cause it's not verifying my number for whatever reason) and went through the wip thread and it looks like the MCs are different from Aki and Jake. Probably adventurers judging by the equipment on the MMC. So I had a few questions:
1. Are we going to see Aki and gang in the next game?
2. If (1) is no then is the game based in a different timeline.
3. If (2) is yes then is this the hero party that Aki's mom was with?
4. In one of your descriptions, you mentioned FuMC corrupting someone for the first time. Does that mean we'll be playing as the futa? And is the FMC the FuMC or is it someone else?
5. Are we looking at a late 2025 or early 2026 realese for Ch 1 of the new game?

I'm currently not talking about the next game outside of the discord yet. I don't want to start setting expectations for something that is still in the early planning phase. The pinned posts have some the answers you are looking for though.

 

[Versace217]

I'm currently not talking about the next game outside of the discord yet. I don't want to start setting expectations for something that is still in the early planning phase. The pinned posts have some the answers you are looking for though.

Well...let's see about getting the discord server working. I'll be copy pasting this on there
Edit: Oh and I'll check out the pinned stuff.

 

[Ethriell]

This is a common criticism that I think is totally fair. When I initially wrote the story I wanted it to be a slower corruption, but I quickly realized that doing that would make the story far far longer than I wanted it to be. So I cut it down and sped it up significantly.

This game was only supposed to be my way of learning the basics of RPGMaker engine. I’m close to releasing CH6 out of 10 chapters and I already feel like I’ve learned what I needed. At this point the goal is to finish so I can continue the story in the next game and add real mechanics to it.

(If you want to see some teasers for the next game, check my

You must be registered to see the links

. Currently the teasers are free for everyone to see.)

There is also another reason that I chose to speed up the story. Despite what a few people here and on other sites have said, the silent majority of players are here for the porn. My gut instinct was that I should get to that sooner rather than later. Looking at the analytics that I have now, I was completely correct. So I don’t regret that choice, even if the story overall suffers a little because of it.

The nice thing is because the support from the audience has been so generous, this will allow me to take things slower in the future. If it keeps growing as it has been I’ll be able to do this full time soon.

I feel like I have written something to this degree in here before but it’s worth repeating.

Ngl a "Director's Cut" type thing would be interesting for this game to see how the entire story was planned and what changes you implemented over time.

 

[Creator Seez]

Ngl a "Director's Cut" type thing would be interesting for this game to see how the entire story was planned and what changes you implemented over time.

Remind me when the game is finished and I may do that. I don't even know how I would implement that, but the idea intrigues me... I could probably just make another gallery that has my written commentary over each scene.

 

[Thechamel]

Just saw that the game has the monster tag, will we see some at some point in the game or is it an error from the mods?

 

[HATETHISFUCKINGSITE]

Remind me when the game is finished and I may do that. I don't even know how I would implement that, but the idea intrigues me... I could probably just make another gallery that has my written commentary over each scene.

If you could make it cinematic with James Earl Jones or Morgan Freeman narrating would be gold. Rip JEJ.

 

[dakamuto]

Can someone share some teasers?

 

[Erehn_Jaeger]

 

[Erehn_Jaeger]

tomorrow we hope that a Hero come to saves us with the release archive

 

[dakamuto]

No previews, no heroes, SADGE

 

[Erehn_Jaeger]

where is a hero when you need one?