VN Ren'Py Holding On To [v0.1.0] [JBeeGames]

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Doggs133

Newbie
Dec 30, 2017
58
17
Played it till the end.

1. It is pretty short.
2. Renders are nice, but there is better stuff here.
3. The story is all over the place, feels more like random scenes thrown together. With the additional nude spiced in, which looks good but has nothing to do with what just happend or will happen in the next scene.
4. One (skipable) lewd scene, which also is out of context. Someone (not the MC) fucking someone.
5. Dialogues are ok. Nothing to write home about.
6. Close to no choices.

All in all I am not sure what I just played.

Maybe I'll try a later version, if I can (or cannot) remember I played the first release.
This is a perfect summary of what I just went through.
This game is so disjointed. I can only hope the random scenes are joined together soon or I'll quickly lose patience with it.
 

xXwankerXx

Engaged Member
Jul 21, 2017
2,048
12,168
Not much here yet. The only scene is a random dude (not mc) fucking his secretary and only if you choose to watch it.
Damn. First and only sex scene in the game and it's a random idiot fucking his attractive ASSistant, instead of the MC doing it for him, who seems to be an OP motherfucker hunting mutants or whatever.:whistle:

Would've been real disappointed if that was the MC, cuz apparently, according to some devs' 'flawless' logic you need to see random idiots bang attractive women or LIs for the 'plot', while the MC is just a spineless idiot peeping on them and jerking off. Not here, but in most cases, that's how shit plays out. Skipping the scene means exactly jack shit if it still happens, but you, the player, choose not to see it instead of preventing it from happening.

Hope that assistant was the only attractive woman involved with idiotic NPCs, cuz the complaints will start rolling in and the income won't increase any time soon if she wasn't. Anyway, this minus aside, there are clearly a lot of things that could be improved, but the story seems promising, the MC, for once, doesn't seem to be a spineless, wimpy jackoff, and we already have a few attractive women being shown, so things should, hopefully, get better in next few updates IF the game won't be abandoned.
 

battali0n

Active Member
Oct 30, 2021
887
1,634
I am not interested in any sex scenes that the MC is not the one doing the fucking.
If I want voyeur scenes I can go look at porn anytime I want to.
This scene just kills any interest I had in your game.
If you decide to make it optional, as in the player decides whether it happens or not instead of skippable it would go over a lot better.
Good luck with your game. I'll check back in the future to see what you decided to do.
 

Firaxius

Active Member
Aug 13, 2020
703
811
For starters, not a bad VN, somewhat weird with all those lose fragments, but geuss that is ment to be mysterious part about some superpowered humans. The renders and characters are pretty well done, the story not sure where it will go or what the concept yet, but I'm sure intrigued to see it unfold and become more clear over next updates. Don't give up and it could be a real good VN.
 

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Feb 23, 2023
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Saint Blackmoor

Saint and Sinner
Donor
Oct 26, 2017
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Wandering in the night, you helped a girl from a bad situation...
Of course, she invited you to her house, and you are in her house with two beautiful ladies.
In the meantime, the city is becoming a mess! and you will slowly get involved in this mess.
This is where you will come into play. You will have to... Fix this mess!

Wait! Don't go. I will give you a clear view of the game now.​
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The game looks interesting. :giggle:
Thanks for the share. jbeegames
 
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Raziel_8

Engaged Member
Dec 4, 2017
3,431
8,740
Well, 'a mess' is a good description for this...
The story feels completely disjointed and jumps from one scene to another, but not long enough to make much sense of anything you see...
Overall it feels like you switched in a movie which is already at the halfway point and now you have to make sense of it.
 
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OnlyFriend

Member
Donor
Nov 10, 2019
288
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Damn. First and only sex scene in the game and it's a random idiot fucking his attractive ASSistant, instead of the MC doing it for him, who seems to be an OP motherfucker hunting mutants or whatever.:whistle:

Would've been real disappointed if that was the MC, cuz apparently, according to some devs' 'flawless' logic you need to see random idiots bang attractive women or LIs for the 'plot', while the MC is just a spineless idiot peeping on them and jerking off. Not here, but in most cases, that's how shit plays out. Skipping the scene means exactly jack shit if it still happens, but you, the player, choose not to see it instead of preventing it from happening.

Hope that assistant was the only attractive woman involved with idiotic NPCs, cuz the complaints will start rolling in and the income won't increase any time soon if she wasn't. Anyway, this minus aside, there are clearly a lot of things that could be improved, but the story seems promising, the MC, for once, doesn't seem to be a spineless, wimpy jackoff, and we already have a few attractive women being shown, so things should, hopefully, get better in next few updates IF the game won't be abandoned.
dang..... very disappointed indeed :sick:
 
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bentalos

Newbie
Aug 5, 2017
92
155
Prob not, I expect this one will get abandoned too. The vast majority of AVNs good enough for Patreon's censors tend to suck anyway. Besides legit reviews whether that link is in the OP or not is a good measuring stick.
Not sure these are actually going to be games. Looked at his other games, one is the same game, this looks more like some playing around trying learn rather than someone actually making a game.
 
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Call of Booty

Well-Known Member
Mar 21, 2020
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I hope from next update PIXELDRAIN and GOFILE will be available.
EDIT: Never mind,don't bother
 
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