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VN Ren'Py Holes 2: BBC Gangbang Wife [v1.0] [UnPlayted]

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gino.pilotino said:
In the end I was too curious. I paused my awaited update and watched yours. I thought it was good and you're improving with each release. I liked it. And in a way it connects all the episodes. I think it's a good starting point and I would try to connect everything and tell a story that has a beginning and an end. And makes the reader feel part of the story. Involved. You know exactly what I'm talking about. I don't know what your favorite games are, but they certainly had a story that began and ended and kept you glued to the screen the whole time. To keep people glued, I'd add a mystery to be solved. You're not lacking in imagination. I would start from the story.
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Appreciate your input as always! I take your input and try and implement parts of it. I definitely tried to add a bit of emotional confliction into the internal dialogue of both the husband and wife in this one.

These are all just short works I work on in my spare time. The project I have in mind will honestly probably take me the better part of a year to work through. I may have to release another short work just to make sure I can implement decisions and consequences properly in renpy, as I haven't yet crossed that bridge
 
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gino.pilotino said:
In the end I was too curious. I paused my awaited update and watched yours. I thought it was good and you're improving with each release. I liked it. And in a way it connects all the episodes. I think it's a good starting point and I would try to connect everything and tell a story that has a beginning and an end. And makes the reader feel part of the story. Involved. You know exactly what I'm talking about. I don't know what your favorite games are, but they certainly had a story that began and ended and kept you glued to the screen the whole time. To keep people glued, I'd add a mystery to be solved. You're not lacking in imagination. I would start from the story.
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I don't like futa games. I don't like futanari games. But I'll finish this one:
https://f95zone.to/threads/instinct-unleashed-ch-10-kind-nightmares.196088/page-115
It has a story and a mystery. And I can't wait for the next chapter to come out.

I don't like futa games but I love the stories.

I also think your cocks are a bit too big. It's bearable but a bit too much. You also have to consider human anatomy. You may have a meter-long dick but where can a woman put it? You'd kill her if you shoved it all the way in. It's better to find a happy medium.
 
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I read comments that you don't have much time programming games, but this, despite not having sound or animation, is too good. The model is too sexy. You're a very disciplined programmer... seeing how they destroy that tattooed white ass is simply very exciting. We hope you cook more

If you make more parts like Hole 3, Hole 4, Hole 5...
I have these ideas.
I hope you can read it, bro

-Have Hole lost in a ghetto, in alleys forced into prostitution.
-Have her husband taken to prison, and she comes to visit, and the BBC prisoners take her in the cells for several days.
-Halloween or Christmas specials usually work too well.
-Lol, but since many say that the models literally look like horses because of the size of their penises, haha, it wouldn't be bad to add a horse, haha.

I'm just leaving those ideas. You have a beautiful project. I hope you create a Patreon so I can support you, bro.
 
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