VN Ren'Py Holiday for Four [Part 2] [The Amorous Antechinus]

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Eleanorduval

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well was cool game,in term of choices u was generious.I like it the fact u gived us the choice even for the swaping,i hate forced swaping.Nice suze teached the duchesse a lesson,if we choose suze not sub.I kinda loved the second vist at nancy club.Speaking of nancy,a big bush can be turn off.A small bush like judith are more acceptabe,u can even think about females with land strip instead bush.

Hope even for the velved club u let us choice with have sex,we don t want suzanne have sex with wrong people.
Hope to see some character from this game in the next game,i kinda liked it judith laura and wendy.
 
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well was cool game,in term of choices u was generious.I like it the fact u gived us the choice even for the swaping,i hate forced swaping.Nice suze teached the duchesse a lesson,if we choose suze not sub.I kinda loved the second vist at nancy club.Speaking of nancy,a big bush can be turn off.A small bush like judith are more acceptabe,u can even think about females with land strip instead bush.

Hope even for the velved club u let us choice with have sex,we don t want suzanne have sex with wrong people.
Hope to see some character from this game in the next game,i kinda liked it judith laura and wendy.
So glad you enjoyed it. I admit that the number of choices offered was partly a result of your requests and I shall continue in that vein in later games. Nancy's bush...not my cup of tea either to be honest but I like to offer variety and the common hairless Brazilian trope isn't very realistic in my view. I'm not overly keen on shaves and Brazilians because I've never found them common (even in my days when I was single) so I intend to use them sparsely in my stories. Judy, Laura and Wendy may reappear as my plans include an active and recurring cast, as you saw with Liz and Jean reappearing at the end of this story. Let's hope that you'll enjoy my next effort "The Selkie'.
 

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A Question for Ratadan:
Is it possible that the last question in the first part from MC to FMC about how she wants to behave towards the Mistress (curious or not interested) was removed ? Or have I discovered a small Mistake ?
I scroll back to max in each part to get back into the story, but I didn't get this Question in the second part, just the conversation and that she was curious about it.
 

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A Question for Ratadan:
Is it possible that the last question in the first part from MC to FMC about how she wants to behave towards the Mistress (curious or not interested) was removed ? Or have I discovered a small Mistake ?
I scroll back to max in each part to get back into the story, but I didn't get this Question in the second part, just the conversation and that she was curious about it.
Hi Korandor. I've gone back to both downloads and I can't find the question that you are referring to (although I did find a typo!), but when I finished Part 2 I did go back through the whole piece, added the music and sound effects, and tweaked a number of areas where I didn't feel the story sounded quite right. In particular the whole relationship between Suzanne and the Duchesse was rewritten a number of times as I had originally intended Suzanne to have a submission arc but in the end I couldn't justify Suzanne becoming a sub, she has too strong a character. So, you may have found a mistake, but there's usually quite a few of those as I'm still firmly in the learner developer cohort. Thanks for the question, and mistake aside, I'm delighted that some people are actually reading my stories.
 

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Hi Korandor. I've gone back to both downloads and I can't find the question that you are referring to (although I did find a typo!), but when I finished Part 2 I did go back through the whole piece, added the music and sound effects, and tweaked a number of areas where I didn't feel the story sounded quite right. In particular the whole relationship between Suzanne and the Duchesse was rewritten a number of times as I had originally intended Suzanne to have a submission arc but in the end I couldn't justify Suzanne becoming a sub, she has too strong a character. So, you may have found a mistake, but there's usually quite a few of those as I'm still firmly in the learner developer cohort. Thanks for the question, and mistake aside, I'm delighted that some people are actually reading my stories.
everything perfect just little bit work on character apparence some of them look bad.
 
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everything perfect just little bit work on character apparence some of them look bad.
Looks are very subjective, but I'm not keen on the 'plastic doll' characters that are commonly used in the hobby. I want some of the characters to look different, older, chubbier, skinnier, and so on. I'm not there yet with my artwork and I hope to improve the character appearances as I get better. Thanks for the comments, I appreciate the support.
 

Korandor

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I find it very refreshing that a developer is finally writing stories about swinging and sharing as an experience for a couple and talking about it and diving into it step by step while also respecting his partner's boundaries.
Over 90% of all swinging or sharing stories are based on NTR, almost always involving cuckolding and/or humiliation without a proper couple story. I find these stories sad because they essentially just demonstrate a negative attitude toward love and sex.

I can relate to this story better from my own experience. My wife and I wanted to try something similar when we were younger, and we got as far as two threesomes. After that, my wife realized she couldn't handle it emotionally, so we stopped.
We've been married for almost 30 years now, and that's worth more than taking too big a risk.

Please stick to your kind of stories, and it's a shame that I'm living on the bare minimum and therefore can't support as much as I'd like. So far, I've found 5 devs I'd like to support, and you're one of them.

sry 4 my bad English, i am German, so i translate it with Google Translator
 

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I find it very refreshing that a developer is finally writing stories about swinging and sharing as an experience for a couple and talking about it and diving into it step by step while also respecting his partner's boundaries.
Over 90% of all swinging or sharing stories are based on NTR, almost always involving cuckolding and/or humiliation without a proper couple story. I find these stories sad because they essentially just demonstrate a negative attitude toward love and sex.

I can relate to this story better from my own experience. My wife and I wanted to try something similar when we were younger, and we got as far as two threesomes. After that, my wife realized she couldn't handle it emotionally, so we stopped.
We've been married for almost 30 years now, and that's worth more than taking too big a risk.

Please stick to your kind of stories, and it's a shame that I'm living on the bare minimum and therefore can't support as much as I'd like. So far, I've found 5 devs I'd like to support, and you're one of them.

sry 4 my bad English, i am German, so i translate it with Google Translator
Thank you. I really appreciate the support. When I started off I had quickly become a fan of Sad Pepper, but in particular his story paths that led to sharing rather than cheating and cuckolding ( a much overused expression)., and so I wanted to bounce off that but using experiences from my own life as a base. For the stories to work the couple, "Rob & Suzanne" needed to advance as a couple and so they needed to communicate and walk the journey hand in hand or for me it wouldn't work. I understand that some partners will engage simply to please their partner, but that leads to all sorts of tensions, so there needed to be a mutual enthusiasm for my stories to work. From personal experience I also wanted to include some of the doubts and worries that the active partner would have as well. My new story, the Selkie, will follow slightly different paths because of my love of fantasy (avid D&D player) but I'll be returning to 'Rob & Suzanne' with "A Trip up North" which is scheduled for after The Selkie. Thanks for the offer of financial support but what I need and prefer is feedback in the form of reviews or comments on the discussion forum so thank you for your contribution. Danke sehr .
 
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I really enjoyed this game and the Three Panels its great to see a married couple where both can watch or join in the action but always need to be there for it to happen or close by (There is no cheating or lying at all and consent is everything it's so refreshing to see), the only downside I find is the quality of the images they seem very grainy, I hope in the next episode the images will be crisper. Can't wait for A trip up north I hope its as good as the last two games
 
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Ratadan

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I really enjoyed this game and the Three Panels its great to see a married couple where both can watch or join in the action but always need to be there for it to happen or close by (There is no cheating or lying at all and consent is everything it's so refreshing to see), the only downside I find is the quality of the images they seem very grainy, I hope in the next episode the images will be crisper. Can't wait for A trip up north I hope its as good as the last two games
Thanks for your comments. Really appreciate it. I'm still learning with 3Daz and I think that I'm getting better so hopefully I'll manage less grainy renders going forward. I could really do with a tutor/mentor but living in the Australian bush there are few resources to turn to so I have to use Youtube to learn (Yeah, I know, it's my go-to excuse).
 

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Thanks for your comments. Really appreciate it. I'm still learning with 3Daz and I think that I'm getting better so hopefully I'll manage less grainy renders going forward. I could really do with a tutor/mentor but living in the Australian bush there are few resources to turn to so I have to use Youtube to learn (Yeah, I know, it's my go-to excuse).
Well It's still a good game nevertheless.
 
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Is it possible to get her to wear the emerald band at the restaurant?
 

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Is it possible to get her to wear the emerald band at the restaurant?
Sorry, only just caught your question. No. Laura wears an Emerald band in the second trip to Nancy's, but during the first trip I didn't want Suzanne & Rob to be confident enough to quite go that far. It may seem that they have gone a long way but there's still further steps to take, as will be revealed in 'A Trip up North' (when it's released).
 

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Sorry, only just caught your question. No. Laura wears an Emerald band in the second trip to Nancy's, but during the first trip I didn't want Suzanne & Rob to be confident enough to quite go that far. It may seem that they have gone a long way but there's still further steps to take, as will be revealed in 'A Trip up North' (when it's released).
Ok cool appreciate the response and I'll be looking forward to that parts release. Also looking forward to "The Selkie" and I really enjoyed "The Three Panels". So I commend you on your good work and thank you
 
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