VN Ren'Py Homelander [Ch.5 P1] [JabbonkGames]

[Uthuriel]

"The Twins" need a bit more work because it does come off as a last minute band-aid sort of fix as it stands.

That's what happened... The twins aren't the problem though.
Adopted incest is bannable by Patreon too.

 

[dixoncider88]

That's what happened... The twins aren't the problem though.
Adopted incest is bannable by Patreon too.

Did the earlier chapters get a rewrite too then? I just continued from my last save. But in either case, while I would like the original relationships to remain unchanged, if they do end up getting reworked, it needs to be match the rest of the writing.

If the dev admitted that it was a last minute change that they hoped wouldn't stand out(they did, you replied to that post), then I think it's fair to say that they should take a little extra time to properly adjust script for future updates.

I called out the the bit with the twins cause it was what I saw myself, and like someone else pointed out earlier, the narration still referred to them as sisters after the fact.

 

[Uthuriel]

Did the earlier chapters get a rewrite too then? I just continued from my last save. But in either case, while I would like the original relationships to remain unchanged, if they do end up getting reworked, it needs to be match the rest of the writing.

If the dev admitted that it was a last minute change that they hoped wouldn't stand out(they did, you replied to that post), then I think it's fair to say that they should take a little extra time to properly adjust script for future updates.

I called out the the bit with the twins cause it was what I saw myself, and like someone else pointed out earlier, the narration still referred to them as sisters after the fact.

No. MC still gets adopted. That makes Olivia his adopted mother and Ari his adopted sister.
In the eyes of Patreon that would be incest. It also makes the rewrite of the twins unnecessary.
I'm glad the Jab decided to make a SubscribeStar so in the case of someone fucking him sideways he still has some income.

 

[DarkDaemonX]

If you select variety at the beginning, it also has a male gender symbol too, does that mean there will be femboy LIs too? It only mentioned transgender LIs, so it confused me.

 

[Jabbonk]

If you select variety at the beginning, it also has a male gender symbol too, does that mean there will be femboy LIs too? It only mentioned transgender LIs, so it confused me.

Yeah, there's going to be just about every kind of love interest at one point or another. Both fem and butch boys included, for any who choose to explore those optional paths.

 

[Havik79]

So TS, femboys, gay guys, lesbians, and the MC will be top and bottom, certainly covering all bases, smart to be honest.

 

[VaerShyr]

So just got to the start of Chapter 4, and first off I'm really glad to see this continued on. There aren't enough heartwarming stories out there, so whenever a good one comes around it's always nice.

Now onto the meat of the matter, MC's next spell needs to be another spatial spell, like his pocket dimension, but able to cast on the ladies. Make 'em bigger on the inside. I mean, if he can make a spell that adjusts it so that each lady can perfectly fit him, he'll become the most famous mage ever. People would line up from the whole world over, and world peace would be reached. Everyone would want a crystal with a spell that adjusts the vagina's size perfectly to her partner.

 

[Jabbonk]

So just got to the start of Chapter 4, and first off I'm really glad to see this continued on. There aren't enough heartwarming stories out there, so whenever a good one comes around it's always nice.

Now onto the meat of the matter, MC's next spell needs to be another spatial spell, like his pocket dimension, but able to cast on the ladies. Make 'em bigger on the inside. I mean, if he can make a spell that adjusts it so that each lady can perfectly fit him, he'll become the most famous mage ever. People would line up from the whole world over, and world peace would be reached. Everyone would want a crystal with a spell that adjusts the vagina's size perfectly to her partner.

Saying "I love this romantic, heartwarming story" and "Mc needs to learn the big pussy spell" in the same post genuinely made me laugh out loud. Thank you and I'm glad you're enjoying the game so far

 

[Uthuriel]

Saying "I love this romantic, heartwarming story" and "Mc needs to learn the big pussy spell" in the same post genuinely made me laugh out loud. Thank you and I'm glad you're enjoying the game so far

The "big pussy spell" leads to uterus explosion... I don't think MC is ready for that yet...

 

[VaerShyr]

Saying "I love this romantic, heartwarming story" and "Mc needs to learn the big pussy spell" in the same post genuinely made me laugh out loud. Thank you and I'm glad you're enjoying the game so far

Hey now, it's also the little pussy spell, hence why it'd be so popular with everyone. Boyfriend has a small dick? Shrink your pussy. Adopted Prince has a dick half the size of your body? Make it bigger. Gonna have a kid? Airplane hangar time, and that little shit just falls right out. Then you just transition the game into a shop management simulator as he sells these crystals and bam, game complete.

Yes, I took my meds. Yes, they're kicking in. Yes, you can be jealous of my amazing ideas.

 

[Spider-Venom]

I would've allowed him to kick my ass -- and laugh after he's finished. to see his face when the truth is revealed... it would be priceless

 

[Britfinder13]

Has anyone got a link to Android port that isn't that dodgy mix drop that won't open
Cheers

 

[S1nsational]

I would've allowed him to kick my ass -- and laugh after he's finished. to see his face when the truth is revealed... it would be priceless

That would have been a very funny way to deal with him, bait him into assaulting a member of the royal family, the punishments for that can't be fun.

I do like the flaunting stealing his family from him though

 

[Spider-Venom]

That would have been a very funny way to deal with him, bait him into assaulting a member of the royal family, the punishments for that can't be fun.

I do like the flaunting stealing his family from him though

Actually, I would reveal in stages -- tease him. Revealing my royal statues would be last.

 

[Spider-Venom]

That would have been a very funny way to deal with him, bait him into assaulting a member of the royal family, the punishments for that can't be fun.

I do like the flaunting stealing his family from him though

tell him that I'm being trained -- personally, by the head of the royal guard '' I see that does not impress you. how about my mage training? no? well, fuck. I guess it's for the coup de grâce... I am also the prince of Homeland.''.

 

[Aioto]

I am also the prince of Homelander.

The name of the queendom is Homeland, homelander is the name given to the people of Homeland.

 

[Jabbonk]

Heyo...

Here's

You must be registered to see the links

!

And here's the TLDR:
-Trying new dev strat and I'm working on everything in order
-Scene 7 is being coded, rendered and tested
-That's it, honestly...

Much love!
JB

 

[Adoringfan]

you're a young man who lost his family at a very young age

Why can't it ever be lost his family like Joe Dirt? Devs are always in a rush to put them in the ground, especially dads.

 

[MidnightKing]

Just started playing this, could anyone give me a little more context on how much the choices for the weapon and stories effect things? Like does a weapon choice effect my characters personality? Does the story choice completely alter how the game plays out? Maybe I'm thinking too hard about it, but it's hard to make these choices when I'm not totally sure what they actually do

 

[HiHaHo]

Just started playing this, could anyone give me a little more context on how much the choices for the weapon and stories effect things? Like does a weapon choice effect my characters personality? Does the story choice completely alter how the game plays out? Maybe I'm thinking too hard about it, but it's hard to make these choices when I'm not totally sure what they actually do

i haven't really seen one in the current content
but one could assume it will matter somehow ( like the spell you choose later on)