VN Ren'Py Homelander [Ch.5 P1] [JabbonkGames]

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Uthuriel

Uthuriel

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Playertheguy said:
--Now, a posible problem with the story is that the mc is a Gary Stu, he is great at magic, at melee, with a bow, and on top of that he learns thing super easily. The only reason anyone is better than him at something is because he has not studied that particular thing for a long time.
Usually, if a character is good at magic, he is weaker at melee, so he needs someone to help him with that. Or if he is really strong, he is not that good with studies, making it so others can help him with the more intelectual tasks.
But the way you set him up, the only people that can beat him at anything, are the ones that have much more practice than him.
So now i think that your only option to balance him is probably to make a really big threat that his Gary Stu powers cant deal with alone... but if you do that, you will also need to make some characters also grow a lot in specific fields to be able to suport him meaningfully in the story.
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You complain about tropes in fantasy, yet you write the most cliché shit I've ever read... :rolleyes: :FacePalm:
 
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What gripes my ass is the assumption that excellence and being gifted are bad things. Toss out a name; like Chad or Gary Stu, as if they are the prototype assholes of overachievment. By god! Hell yeah! Let us all strive for mediocrity and wallow in it together. So sayeth the wimp behind the machine who never met a challenge in his pathetic life.
 
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motseer said:
What gripes my ass is the assumption that excellence and being gifted are bad things. Toss out a name; like Chad or Gary Stu, as if they are the prototype assholes of overachievment. By god! Hell yeah! Let us all strive for mediocrity and wallow in it together. So sayeth the wimp behind the machine who never met a challenge in his pathetic life.
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You tell 'em!







or....you go girl!
 
Jabbonk

Jabbonk

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Hey homies,

Here are the (identical)
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TLDR
-Made it over a small hurdle that has been tripping me up on S9
-Rendering the hell out of s12

That's all folks!
Much love!
JB
 
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motseer

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kkuroky said:
Did anyone happen to have walkthrough or something for this game?
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You don't really need one... The choices only pertain to fight or flee, eat or starve, who you want to fuck and whether you live or die.
 
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motseer said:
You don't really need one... The choices only pertain to fight or flee, eat or starve, who you want to fuck and whether you live or die.
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This, and also, the wording of the choices is pretty straightforward, like you can easily understand/imagine what choice leads to what outcome.

Oh and Jabbonk, I honestly love all the lore/info-dump scenes but I just wish it was easier to navigate some of them when they have sub-choices (?) do not know if that made sense but yeah.
 
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Hey Homies,

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Finished off S9 and S12 and now all that's left is S10. It's quite a bit longer and needs a lot more work, but it has my full attention until the chapter is finished.

No TLDR this week because the above sentence is essentially all I said in the reports anyway.

Much love!
JB
 
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Blackhearts

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Keyboard warriors/impatient fappers be the worst.

Dev is absolutely amazing. He's the only one with gives detailed info of where he's at/where he's going. Giving ample info at that too.
Plus weekly updates on progress... mind you.. he's making this quality vn on his freaking own. (Not counting the amazing testers)


It's free, gets updates on the reg and has super awesome tailor made content.
Go on and hop away if it's not your thing. Just don't come with baseless accusations and non constructive whining.
 
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Blackhearts said:
Keyboard warriors/impatient fappers be the worst.

Dev is absolutely amazing. He's the only one with gives detailed info of where he's at/where he's going. Giving ample info at that too.
Plus weekly updates on progress... mind you.. he's making this quality vn on his freaking own. (Not counting the amazing testers)


It's free, gets updates on the reg and has super awesome tailor made content.
Go on and hop away if it's not your thing. Just don't come with baseless accusations and non constructive whining.
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Bruh jokes on you, i don't even fap to these games or fap at all, on my 1yr no fap streak, i just play them for sake of playing games outside the norm with a little spice and i was actually complimenting the guy cause although i don't know him personally i still kinda know him and know he won't abandon the game and will make sure to complete it no matter how long it takes,so that was kinda a reassurance with a bit of humor(must've been a bad one) so if y'all saw it as whining or complaining, meh ‍♂
 
Jabbonk

Jabbonk

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Hey Homies,
Here's the
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TLDR
-I spent most of my time testing scenes and running sample animations
-otherwise, I kinda sucked this week. My head wasn't really in the game...

My bad, homies...
Much love!
JB
 
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Havik79

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Jabbonk said:
The goal is to have at least one variety scene per chapter, but I already have plans for a few more along the way.
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Ok good to know, but I was thinking more of, it says girls, so when do we get more than just the one girl.
 
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