Now anyone can write something he didn't like in history, and I will try to fix it if it is really worth it. Many people like my story, and there are a few people who need to humiliate it, instead of humiliating the story, you can just highlight the shortcomings of what you did not like.
Well, then let me highlight the shortcomings of your game:
- Buggy as fuck (can't see messages from the sister for god knows how long, and after the doc scene it said I should go to school, but it's evening, so much for following the convos for hints)
- Engrish (not the worst, but defo bad)
- Bunch of useless maps that maybe will come in play in the future, but half of them is just "under development"
- Zero hint system, which makes people click through the whole fucking game to find a small thing
- No chance of getting money which is needed for several scenes, only the Patreon code, which is a straight dick move
- Paywalling the incest content, another dick move, and if someone decides so, you could be banned from Patreon for good by the way
- Lack of cohesive story, consistent writing, notable characters, or even a likeable Main character (unless you like beta males)
These popped into my mind right off the bat, I'm sure others could list a few things as well.