Seems like a really good start. I know that it's completed, but perhaps an actual game that uses this as a basis for more lesbian witch content? (I don't call VNs "games".)
a bit, if you are jumping to a fantasy theme use that fantasy otherwise it feels pointless and misleads the audience. imagine a story were you are told that a woman that can control her body size, boobs, ass, everything, it would be very dull if that character never actually changes anything. that's what it feels like to me when dev use fantasy, magic, super powers, etc. and then makes the most vanilla scenes possible.
the only reason its not that big a deal in this one is because its so short what difference does it make.
