Seconding what's the person just before me said. Protag not knowing what to do with her dick ; and the training part is nice!
And I have to add, I don't hate IA art, better than nothing at all (and I'm not ashamed to say I don't hate that style at all). Please give us more futa!
As for my own opinion (WARNING: skimmed throught the game yesterday pretty late at night, so it was not the most attentive read. And warning² : ost of the thing i'll say are a matter of taste)
- definitively voting for longer scene. If a scene can be replaced with "and they fucked" and a picture, it's definitively too short. If a scene is endend when youre just entered a kinky mood, same!
- I did like the start first sex (as in penetration) scene ; it was pretty neat with the character insecurity. I would have liked if the scene continued like that, which would have been a good moment to do some more emotional sex scene + give the player some hinsight on how the character are and behave - instead of it finishing on a more "sex going well" scene
- I'm not sure what the game want to be, with the part that are immersion breaking (the jab about foot fetish and the patreon censoorship). Both were fun, but can be immersion breaking / frustrating more than anything else. Overal, I personaly dislike 4th wall break when it's a more kinetic novel (and don't mind them if they are hidden behin weird choice)
Moving the patreonblock part after the sex scene may make it even more silly ("of it even missed the timing") and would keep the mood of the sex scene
- Will the game be a kinetic novel (in which case it would be great to remove the choice of "what will you do today"), or will it have some farming added to it? (it feel like the scene with draggal could totally fit point when you reached some high enough xp, but since you have zero choice..)
Overall, it's a kinda rought first version, but it show a promise behind that. Thanks for your game, and I hope it'll cotninue and improve!
And I have to add, I don't hate IA art, better than nothing at all (and I'm not ashamed to say I don't hate that style at all). Please give us more futa!
As for my own opinion (WARNING: skimmed throught the game yesterday pretty late at night, so it was not the most attentive read. And warning² : ost of the thing i'll say are a matter of taste)
- definitively voting for longer scene. If a scene can be replaced with "and they fucked" and a picture, it's definitively too short. If a scene is endend when youre just entered a kinky mood, same!
- I did like the start first sex (as in penetration) scene ; it was pretty neat with the character insecurity. I would have liked if the scene continued like that, which would have been a good moment to do some more emotional sex scene + give the player some hinsight on how the character are and behave - instead of it finishing on a more "sex going well" scene
- I'm not sure what the game want to be, with the part that are immersion breaking (the jab about foot fetish and the patreon censoorship). Both were fun, but can be immersion breaking / frustrating more than anything else. Overal, I personaly dislike 4th wall break when it's a more kinetic novel (and don't mind them if they are hidden behin weird choice)
Moving the patreonblock part after the sex scene may make it even more silly ("of it even missed the timing") and would keep the mood of the sex scene
- Will the game be a kinetic novel (in which case it would be great to remove the choice of "what will you do today"), or will it have some farming added to it? (it feel like the scene with draggal could totally fit point when you reached some high enough xp, but since you have zero choice..)
Overall, it's a kinda rought first version, but it show a promise behind that. Thanks for your game, and I hope it'll cotninue and improve!
