Thanks for the explanation! the wap thing makes way more sense now.
(on that note, IIRC you did a pretty good job at establishing pyro girl's personality early on)
Having character that are not what they are introduced as is also pretty nice.
So yea, i'll be a broken record and praise again the greatness of spending more time with a character to get familiar with them.
That's a very valid point, but not contradictory to the introduction part : introduction does not mean knowing every last bit of a character, but on the other hand having more description on how they behave/talk (cautiously, friendly, etc) and/or the thought/first impression the MC have on these could be nice. Could also be more "dynamic" introduction, like literally having a character falling out of a window for whatever reason.No one really exactly tells you their life story the moment you meet them so, it will take time again to learn more about the different girls.
(on that note, IIRC you did a pretty good job at establishing pyro girl's personality early on)
Having character that are not what they are introduced as is also pretty nice.