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Wow. THis VN is truly amazing, and unexpected. I am shocked by how good it is. When the weakest part is the sex scene, you know you have something special 
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I love the well developed story. After the 99% of games here where you move in with a landlady with 2 or 3 daughters or female tenants, or you are a teacher in a female only high school, I hunger for these types of games. I can't wait to see how the story develops.
This is shaping up to be another City of Broken Dreamers, really. It reminds me a lot of the book (and later movie), Millennium by John Varley. Who knew you could turn such a story into a sexy VN..
I doubt the author has read it, but even if he doesn't realize it, there are quite a few similarities. That and a few other classic sci-fi stories.
Anyway, thanks to Mr. Moon for thinking outside the box and coming up with an original story.
.I love the well developed story. After the 99% of games here where you move in with a landlady with 2 or 3 daughters or female tenants, or you are a teacher in a female only high school, I hunger for these types of games. I can't wait to see how the story develops.
This is shaping up to be another City of Broken Dreamers, really. It reminds me a lot of the book (and later movie), Millennium by John Varley. Who knew you could turn such a story into a sexy VN
..I doubt the author has read it, but even if he doesn't realize it, there are quite a few similarities. That and a few other classic sci-fi stories.
Anyway, thanks to Mr. Moon for thinking outside the box and coming up with an original story.
The real question is, is someone similar to Wolfe in this?
Easily the best character in Future Man.
Easily the best character in Future Man.
- Dec 6, 2017
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I like the idea of traveling trough time, its always a cool concept to follow, and the world building and story is looking promising as well, good first impression!
- Dec 7, 2020
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Looks very promising, I'm more interested in the story than the "other things" lol, that's how you know if its good
GL dev.
GL dev.
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The renders are very good and the gobbos look great. Storywise is too soon to say anything but I'm not a fan of time travel.
Now our twink MC is the chosen one but somehow he got pussy wipped by the gobbo Queen.
I hope we can subdue her or tell her to fuck off in the future.
Now our twink MC is the chosen one but somehow he got pussy wipped by the gobbo Queen.
I hope we can subdue her or tell her to fuck off in the future.
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I'm to early in to judge but one thing i want to ask for that always interrupts my reading and i cant be the only one that has issues with it:
Normally you get a new sentence with every click you do but then there are some games which like to extend the text on screen. I always end up clicking and reading the same text again till i realize that there is just added text to it.
It makes for a horrible experience for me.
Normally you get a new sentence with every click you do but then there are some games which like to extend the text on screen. I always end up clicking and reading the same text again till i realize that there is just added text to it.
It makes for a horrible experience for me.
I have the same issue with that. Reading the beginning of a sentence multiple times because my eye didn't catch that just something was added at the end.
Other games do this by ....dont know the correct english word for this...moving/scrolling text...one letter at a time in quick succession.
Wanted to post this myself, but I'm not yet at the end of 0.1, in case I have more things to mention.
- Apr 26, 2017
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Very interesting story with beatiful renders. Color me interested. Specially on Olga, the Sara Connor wannabe, and Octavia the Mommy Dom.
I liked that you can pretty much express doubt in those people and their mission. Good corporation? Sure i completely believe it...
I liked that you can pretty much express doubt in those people and their mission. Good corporation? Sure i completely believe it...
- Mar 8, 2018
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Ok memes aside, please tell me you guys are getting a translator/proofreader/editor?
It's not the worst English by any means, but it's bad enough to hold back the game from the potential it definitely has. I can tell the essence of the text is pretty good. The meaning behind the words have substance. The "idea" for the humor and heartfelt moments are there. However, none of this gets passed on to the reader because the delivery has big problems. Grammar errors, odd sentence structures, weird phrasings, etc. These get in the way of delivering the right emotions. It detracts from proper characterizations.
The renders are absolutely fantastic. I like the camera angles and cinematography in general. The plot seems very well thought out. It certainly looks like the plot is more substantial than being just a means for porn delivery. The pacing is great. Scene transitions are smooth with natural breaks and start to the scenes. It almost feels like a TV show or movie like Ready Player One. These are all things that can absolutely make this game stand out over the rest of the copy pasta games flooding the scene. The English needs to be fixed to reach the potential this game has though. Good luck.
It's not the worst English by any means, but it's bad enough to hold back the game from the potential it definitely has. I can tell the essence of the text is pretty good. The meaning behind the words have substance. The "idea" for the humor and heartfelt moments are there. However, none of this gets passed on to the reader because the delivery has big problems. Grammar errors, odd sentence structures, weird phrasings, etc. These get in the way of delivering the right emotions. It detracts from proper characterizations.
The renders are absolutely fantastic. I like the camera angles and cinematography in general. The plot seems very well thought out. It certainly looks like the plot is more substantial than being just a means for porn delivery. The pacing is great. Scene transitions are smooth with natural breaks and start to the scenes. It almost feels like a TV show or movie like Ready Player One. These are all things that can absolutely make this game stand out over the rest of the copy pasta games flooding the scene. The English needs to be fixed to reach the potential this game has though. Good luck
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- Mar 23, 2019
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Really? I don't remember the English being an issue. I played it a few weeks ago, but I had no trouble understanding what was going on, and the dialog seemed legitimate. Maybe a little stilted during the sex scene, but nothing worth focusing on.
Can you give an example of a section of dialog that you felt didn't deliver the right emotion due to poor grammar or phrasing?
Pretty much the whole game... Understanding what's going on isn't the problem. It's a matter of delivery of lines. Imagine watching a movie where everyone is speaking in Engrish, however mild it is. It holds back proper characterization and immersion into the world when we can constantly spot anomalies in the speech. I say this because this game seems to be going for an actual plot. And it seems like a story worth telling. If it was a straightforward porn game focused on sexual interactions, the level of English here would be sufficient.