- Feb 11, 2018
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Every one is entitled to their opinion.I had to deny Daisy but no fucking way was I going down the path with her and the story about that damn book. No way in hell. Second have a damn futa in that future world makes absolutely no fucking sense as the world is dying and they have enough money to do surgery for that? But than they can't do surgery for legs for BJ? They can't allow medicine for asthma to be made by anyone but the corporation? The story of a futa in this type of world is just so fucking out of place it removes a lot of immersion of the story when it comes to Daisy.
Futa would ONLY fit in this world if they were not so damn behind in technology that they could treat the people at least with medicine and do surgery!
Problems with story is that Daisy makes absolutely no damn sense. The world is worst off than it is now!
1. Asthma not cured
2. Most sickness not cured
3. Surgery not affordable
4. People totally oppressed thrown outside the wall to die
5. Except for the portal NOTHING APPEARS FUTURISTIC i
6. Polis looks like any other damn military installation (nothing futuristic)
Seriously it's like a horror story and if I was the MC I would of killed myself before helping such a depressed world to survive. How horrible it is... it does not deserve to survive it's just a country like China in the future with no freedom or food. Even the moon and mars is fucking as bad they refuse to take mothers and children out of that horrible place.
And I wouldn't argue your's but for one teeny weeny little thing.
As far as I can tell now I could be wrong it's been known but in this case I doubt it.
The MC is not there to actually help them survive as they are now.
Which seems to be the assumption you are alluding to.
Its supossed to be a story about him preventing that particular future from happening.
The whole thing is for the MC to stop what ever caused the depressed world as you put it.
His job is to actually rewrite history and to change that future.
To alter his and by that their entire timeline to hopefully a much better out come.
Not to aid in their continued misery and survival in the shit storm they are currently living in.
Just sayin.
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