Well, this is pretty promising so far. The first game in a long while where I can't complain about the spelling or grammar. Visually it's very good as well. Plotwise, we're brewing quite the mystery, though I suppose timetravel can explain quite a bit of it... Anyway, plot seems good as well.
The one thing I want to complain about has been discussed quite a bit already, but I suppose I'll add my two cents.
I love the freedom the game gives you to choose. But, yeah, the scene toward the end breaks that freedom. I personally don't like dom/sub relationships, regardless which part I'm playing. In all my favorite games, those are consistently the only parts I don't play. Like the person above me, I would have preferred an option to just say no or walk away.
I will say, though, that Octavia is exactly the kind of character I love to hate. Seriously, every time she talks, I hate her a little more, and I expect that to generate an awesome payoff when we stick it to her, metaphorically speaking.
So, yeah. I suppose I'm hesitantly looking forward to more.