My review:
1. Great rendering of the girls. They are beautiful, although they are all a bit 'samey' and could use more diversity in hair color or style. Honestly hard to tell them apart.
2. Sadly, the story was forgettable. Not in concept, but in delivery. After the first few minutes I stopped reading. No one cares about their small talk. Its boring and does not advance the story. This style is fine if you want people to just skip through all the dialogue.
3. The sex scenes are very good in terms of rendering and I like the different angles, but poor in implementation. I feel they are just shoved into the game in a way that makes no sense, so they end up being uninteresting. You need to build up to these with some sort of logic and/or expectation. The fist BJ scene was pointless since I have no idea who these people are, so got nothing from it. Also, the penis render was terrible. Maybe find some better assets for male genitalia so that it doesn't look like a table leg.
4. I like sandbox games, but you need to decide if it is the game focus or not. It seemed like a normal visual story but with sandbox added at some point. Pick one.
5. It's early in development, so hopefully this game will develop better going forward.
