VN Ren'Py I Have Known You [Ch.3 P2 v2.8] [Dotty Diaries]

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I just played this for the first time and oftentimes the dialogues feel like there are renders missing.

Kinda simple things like the MC says "Hi" and the girl replying "Stop flattering me" which are just strange lol. Adding this on top of the mystery and not having the knowledge the mc has makes it too much.

Played this in one go and noticed things like these multiple times which honestly took me kinda out of the avn multiple times and if i would have to rate it would lead to it being below average while it could be an at least decent avn.
 
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I keep bookmarking games like, "Oh yea. I'll give this one a try when I have the time." Only to realize I already bookmarked it months ago and I even left a comment on the first page ... :LOL::cry:.

I'll have the time some day ... some day.
 

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I appreciate your honesty and the effort to fix past mistakes. It’s good to see that you’re listening to feedback and making changes based on player concerns. That said, my hesitation comes from how drastically the previous game changed, which makes me uncertain about this one’s future direction.

I'm not played again, i read the comments and noticed that the sandbox wasn’t completely removed—there’s still a freeroam element. Compared to a normal VN, it feels tedious with all the extra clicking, which makes the gameplay less enjoyable. On top of that, hearing that the game’s ending is being rushed because of the sandbox is really disappointing. A well-paced, engaging story is what makes a VN enjoyable, and it’s sad to see that being affected.

I’ll keep an eye on updates, and if everything stays consistent, I’ll only consider playing if I see my preferences reflected.

Lastly, Thank you for taking the time to respond. You could have ignored my comment and moved on, but you still answered my questions. I appreciate that, and I hope the game turns out as you’ve envisioned in the future.
Thank you for sharing your concerns—I truly appreciate constructive feedback. It’s hard to improve anything without it, so I always welcome it.

Yes, the current published version still has sandbox elements, but the upcoming update (once completed) will remove them.

Once you see the next update for Carnal, you’ll know it’s been removed—no sandbox and a different ending.

Thanks again, and I hope you’ll give it another shot once the update is live!
 
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So is it adviseable to restart this from the beginning given the changes...or even wait until you have reimplemented the removed scenes to get a more cohesive understanding?
I’d suggest not waiting, as those two scenes (which I’ll be adding back) aren’t crucial to the main story. If you played Chapter 2, you’ve already seen them. They mainly provide extra insight into the characters. Since they’re short and don’t affect the storyline, you can continue without them.


However, I do recommend restarting from the beginning. With scenes I added into Chapters 1 and 2, the experience will feel different and more complete because of storyline.


I just played this for the first time and oftentimes the dialogues feel like there are renders missing.

Kinda simple things like the MC says "Hi" and the girl replying "Stop flattering me" which are just strange lol. Adding this on top of the mystery and not having the knowledge the mc has makes it too much.

Played this in one go and noticed things like these multiple times which honestly took me kinda out of the avn multiple times and if i would have to rate it would lead to it being below average while it could be an at least decent avn.
Hmm... Thanks for letting me know! I'll look into it and see what's going on. Wouldn’t be surprising if I accidentally missed a few renders...


More dicks than pussy in this game so far, lol
For now, yes! Building the relationships between MC and the girls slowly was key to the story. But with the next update, I'll be adding the first full sex scene with one of the main girls.


I keep bookmarking games like, "Oh yea. I'll give this one a try when I have the time." Only to realize I already bookmarked it months ago and I even left a comment on the first page ... :LOL::cry:.

I'll have the time some day ... some day.
Hehe, same here! Hopefully, I Have Known You will make it to the top of your list some day.
 

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I’d suggest not waiting, as those two scenes (which I’ll be adding back) aren’t crucial to the main story. If you played Chapter 2, you’ve already seen them. They mainly provide extra insight into the characters. Since they’re short and don’t affect the storyline, you can continue without them.


However, I do recommend restarting from the beginning. With scenes I added into Chapters 1 and 2, the experience will feel different and more complete because of storyline.
Appreciate the reply Dotty :)
 
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However, I do recommend restarting from the beginning. With scenes I added into Chapters 1 and 2, the experience will feel different and more complete because of storyline.
Well...did restart and while I personally enjoy a disjointed story and not being given all the answers/information, I do think you succeeded in your aim. it does flow better now and it does all make a little more sense. A little too much in places, I still think some of the new exposition wasn't needed but then I'm most likely not your core audience so I get why you did. Either way, it is better all round for it.

Loved the use of Latin also btw, very purposeful. Definite improvement on the Lisa driving scene with the painting. Always wondered about that, excellent job all round with the extras really, a cracking update.
 
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Well...did restart and while I personally enjoy a disjointed story and not being given all the answers/information, I do think you succeeded in your aim. it does flow better now and it does all make a little more sense. A little too much in places, I still think some of the new exposition wasn't needed but then I'm most likely not your core audience so I get why you did. Either way, it is better all round for it.

Loved the use of Latin also btw, very purposeful. Definite improvement on the Lisa driving scene with the painting. Always wondered about that, excellent job all round with the extras really, a cracking update.
Good to know. Thanks Mavi. I'll definitely restart when I get to the update then. (y)
 
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How old do you think the MC is at the beginning when Death comes for him? Between 60 and 65?

When the events of the past begin, I think he must be 25 or so :unsure:.
 

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How old do you think the MC is at the beginning when Death comes for him? Between 60 and 65?

When the events of the past begin, I think he must be 25 or so :unsure:.
I would say that's pretty close PL from my own thoughts.
 
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The story begins as you return to your hometown Wildflower to help a friend investigate a mysterious ritual. But what starts as a simple favor soon unravels into something far more sinister.
Dotty changed the synopsis?

I'm playing the previous version and that's not the reason for the hometown visit :LOL:, it's because MC needs inspiration to write his second book and reconnect or let go of his past to move on for good.

Rituals and witches don't exist, do they? :Kappa::coffee:.
 

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Dotty changed the synopsis?

I'm playing the previous version and that's not the reason for the hometown visit :LOL:, it's because MC needs inspiration to write his second book and reconnect or let go of his past to move on for good.

Rituals and witches don't exist, do they? :Kappa::coffee:.
Part of the expanded and extrapolated content that has been put into the first two chapters. You really should start a new save from the start to understand what was always happening, but was not actually shown.
 

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You really should start a new save from the start to understand what was always happening, but was not actually shown.
Very interesting, do you present your work as a general vision, more omniscient (movie-like) or just from one point of view, I am sure it has been discussed a lot :unsure:.

In a game, I think I prefer to find out little by little, as if I were in the protagonist's head, but how do you tell your work well in this way? Do you reveal everything in the end? Or do you show things in a future Newgame+ that very few people start with?
Yeah, maybe Dotty did the right thing by starting to show things that we wouldn't know if things had stayed the same.
 

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Very interesting, do you present your work as a general vision, more omniscient (movie-like) or just from one point of view, I am sure it has been discussed a lot :unsure:.

In a game, I think I prefer to find out little by little, as if I were in the protagonist's head, but how do you tell your work well in this way? Do you reveal everything in the end? Or do you show things in a future Newgame+ that very few people start with?
Yeah, maybe Dotty did the right thing by starting to show things that we wouldn't know if things had stayed the same.
Well like I said before PL, personally I like disjointed stories but I do thinnk the extra content does flesh out the story a lot more and is overall a good thing and makes it much better. Sure as I said, some of the newer stuff I don't think was 'needed'...but yeah overall I do like it a lot more and it's not quite as much wtf is going on as it was before.

The cut scenes (2 iirc) are really not missed and at the point where they were originally included...while they didn't seem altogether out of place, are certainly not missed at all now. Overall Dotty has made it a huge improvement, in my opinion.
 
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