VN Ren'Py Abandoned I Want to Dream [v1.0] [Yost]

[gigan]

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I fixed a mistake in your script file.With your original script file is in the game written like the screenshot 1 that lisa is thinking that but it should be the mc.You see the fix in the second screenshot.The name will me changed of course in how you name the mc.And i create a second variant where i changed a few sentence too.You or other people can test that and can give me some feedback.Keep in mind english is not my nativ language

 

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I fixed a mistake in your script file.With your original script file is in the game written like the screenshot 1 that lisa is thinking that but it should be the mc.You see the fix in the second screenshot.The name will me changed of course in how you name the mc.And i create a second variant where i changed a few sentence too.You or other people can test that and can give me some feedback.Keep in mind english is not my nativ language

Thank you very much, just yesterday that I was continuing with the game I realized that error, and thank you also for fixing mistranslated sentences

 

[gigan]

Thank you very much, just yesterday that I was continuing with the game I realized that error, and thank you also for fixing mistranslated sentences

you´re welcome but i´m not sure if the changed sentence from are better or not because english is not my main language

 

[Incest games fan]

What kind of description is that? Are you joking? What kind of incest is this?