May I ask you a personal question? Are you a serial killer? I'm kidding..... maybe...
Im going to assume english is probably not your first language. Your "game" while a little rough around the edges, did function as (I'm assuming) you wanted it too, so there's that. I can also understand being new to game development, the only strange thing I noticed was a broken Steam link, I'm assuming it will be listed in the free section, and as such I wish you luck in your future game making career. My only advice is perhaps flesh out your dialog a bit more, maybe get some female friends to do voice overs. That would be a lot more interesting than AI generated voices, but thats just my opinion.