Ren'Py Idol Island [v0.05a] [Wizard's Kiss]

[longjohngold]

Other than Maeve the girls are all hot so this is a pretty good start, Nell's got the best face and I'll enjoy breaking Avery in too. But as it says the prologue is just a straight VN, so I dunno how much I'll vibe how it actually plays later with the survival mechanics and stuff.

I'm not sure how to make of the unlikelihood of it all... gets a job and they check nothing, doesn't even remember putting spear skills on there (and did that in the first place), his sister is there, the boss lady overlooks everything... is it just porngame logic, or is there something weirder afoot (maybe he somehow guessed right and it's a reality show?)

 

[Havik79]

Not bad, has a stranded dick feel to it but with better quality renders, a better story, and more girls, just hope the dev doesn't fuck it up by adding ntr way into the game.

The story is so stupid it is good.

Needs QoL fixes, it was hard to read what was being said, and not everyone wants to listen to bad voice acting, it either needs to be configurable text/box or just remove the box and let us use other mods.

 

[brknsoul]

Will there be a way to turn off/avoid trans content?
It'd be nice just to do it like WVM does it, simply select whether Avery is a girl or trans.

For the internal thoughts VO, you could add a slight echo or reverb or something to set it apart from out-loud VO. Something subtle would work here.

Bug: Stone Plaque second VO sounds markedly different to the rest.

 

[Havik79]

Will there be a way to turn off/avoid trans content?
It'd be nice just to do it like WVM does it, simply select whether Avery is a girl or trans.

For the internal thoughts VO, you could add a slight echo or reverb or something to set it apart from out-lout VO. Something subtle would work here.

I could be wrong, but I think games with futa/trans on/off usually have them in a female body, I think Avery is a modded male body.

 

[brknsoul]

modded male body.

A couple of options here; 1: Simply remove Avery's content, 2: Find another similar model, or 3: Have Avery become a never-nude, and remove them from any LI content, so you can still order them around for the Survival parts.

 

[brknsoul]

stupid birds

There's an Ambient Sounds slider on the left.
Also, scrolling down gives you sliders for individual voices, you can mute all of them if you want.

Issue: Ambient Sounds slider should be placed with the other volume sliders on the right.
Issue: An adjustable transparent text box would be better than the plank of wood that's there now .;-)

 

[Havik79]

A couple of options here; 1: Simply remove Avery's content, 2: Find another similar model, or 3: Have Avery become a never-nude, and remove them from any LI content, so you can still order them around for the Survival parts.

Option 4, Accept it is part of the game and skip it.
Option 5, Don't play the game.

I am sorry but it doesn't say it is avoidable, so it is clear she is meant to be in the game.

 

[brknsoul]

I am sorry but it doesn't say it is avoidable, so it is clear she is meant to be in the game.

That's why I'm glad it's 0.01, and not like 50 versions in. If WizardKiss wants to, they can perform some (at the moment) relatively minor adjustments to the game.

It doesn't seem I'm alone on this matter, I'm just spitballing suggestions.

Anywho, that's all I'm gonna say on this matter, lest this thread devolves into a pro-trans/anti-trans mess. ;-)

 

[holaje12]

I used to think this way until I found out how hot traps are. Thanks for putting female penis is quotes because there's no such thing.

Good for you for figuring out your sexuality, but you didnt really answer my question...
And I agree theres no such thing as a female penis thus the quotations, it is just a dude that looks like a girl. It should be tagged as gay but people are delusional/insecure about what they like I guess

Thanks but it's normal for women to be attracted to males. And congrats to you for answering your own question.

Ah, so now I am the insecure one for not wanting a penis on my girls?, well you did make my laugh so lets just agree to disagree

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

Good for you for figuring out your sexuality, but you didnt really answered my question...
And I agree theres no such thing as a female penis thus the quotations, it is just a dude that looks like a girl. It should be tagged as gay but people are delusional/insecure about what they like I guess

Thanks but it's normal for women to be attracted to males. And congrats to you for answering your own question.

 

[Thesexychick]

This is an awesome game! I’ve played it!

 

[Forgotted]

Fun game so far,

Great job w the girls all having unique personalities.

Anxious for the update.
Thank you and Keep up the great work!


No offense, I just always play these games with sound disabled.
Having said that, I've had to disable the sound twice. Not a big deal.

Once was when starting the game, I went under options and adjusted
all sliders down.

2nd time. When the jet started shaking I had to go mute the sounds again.
Obviously not a big deal, just an FYI...


Cheers
Thanks again

 

[VNwhiteknight]

Humor is top tier, nice intro to the characters
Need that more of that Avery

 

[sincinbearcity]

Feels a bit premature for the rape tag (for a game, IRL has different definitions). Sexual harassment tag, perhaps; actual rape, not yet.

Even the sexual harassment

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Sounds like the beginning of a more light-hearted corruption game, rather than an actual dark path, but these are just first impressions. In addition, as some others have noted already, I would've preferred the trap content to be avoidable, but I'll keep an eye on how this game progresses.

 

[holaje12]

Feels a bit premature for the rape tag (for a game, IRL has different definitions). Sexual harassment tag, perhaps; actual rape, not yet.

Even the sexual harassment

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Sounds like the beginning of a more light-hearted corruption game, rather than an actual dark path, but these are just first impressions. In addition, as some others have noted already, I would've preferred the trap content to be avoidable, but I'll keep an eye on how this game progresses.

I think the moment he penetrates her, even if its just his fingers, it already qualifies as rape. Plus we only know that she was "ok"(lol) with it afterwards, at the moment of the fingering she is tied up with her mouth covered, and looking quite distressed at times even if she ends up liking it by the end

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So it is nice little rape scene not a brutal/dark one, but rape nonetheless. And I assume it will not be the last since MC seems to think mostly with his dick and doesnt care about consequences

 

[hoborg]

Looks good, though the survival aspects might keep me away.
I'm just here to look at digital boobs.

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

Badly needs a Futa tag (and I assume a Gay tag for later) since the game focuses and zooms in on its dick for like 15 renders. May want to add a "Unavoidable Surprise Penis in Your Face" message in big colored letters in the OP too.

 

[DanThaMan]

Badly needs a Futa tag (and I assume a Gay tag for later) since the game focuses and zooms in on its dick for like 15 renders. May want to add a "Unavoidable Surprise Penis in Your Face" message in big colored letters in the OP too.
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There's a trap tag at the top, if you couldn't be bothered to read them then that's your own fault.. there is even a picture of the trap in the OP.

 

[Krylo Zagato]

Interesting start. The voicing wasn't bad, but does need a little work. They talk fast through the dialogue even when they shouldn't. It makes it sound fake and not real.

 

[syrupu]

Couple of improvements I would like to see:

• The lust/health bars get hidden behind the textbox, move them to the top.
• Speaking of the textbox, it could be transparent, and the letters could have an outline that makes them easy to read. So that the text doesn't block the renders.
• About the pacing, I prefer slow pace corruption. I know this is not everyone cup of tea and maybe not even the point of this game specifically, but I was kinda dissapointed to see everyone naked the first release.

Nonetheless, the voice acting was good, the story was fun, and the girls are amazing. Really looking forward to this game.