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I would overhaul Dating My Daughter. Why? It's full of such quality...everything...and still seems strangely "off" to me.
I can ignore that the girls are all built like very stacked or very flat 8yo girls (lol). If you say she's 18yo I'll buy it. It doesn't bother me.
What bothers me is that the scenarios they all find themselves in are comically unreal to a degree that seems insane. I guess that's the point of Adult VNs but this game hits the uncanny valley BECAUSE of how polished it is while also being so insane and cliche.
So, it's not one thing as much as a few little things. If we can call "realism" one thing I guess I'll say that. I'd make it more real to match the quality.
Also, if not that I'd remove the rape scenarios OR develop them. Hinting a lot at rape while never doing it is a pet peeve of mine and goes for anything constantly dangled in front of a reader. Do it or don't. If you focus on a gun you better have a character use it. That's writing 101.
I can ignore that the girls are all built like very stacked or very flat 8yo girls (lol). If you say she's 18yo I'll buy it. It doesn't bother me.
What bothers me is that the scenarios they all find themselves in are comically unreal to a degree that seems insane. I guess that's the point of Adult VNs but this game hits the uncanny valley BECAUSE of how polished it is while also being so insane and cliche.
So, it's not one thing as much as a few little things. If we can call "realism" one thing I guess I'll say that. I'd make it more real to match the quality.
Also, if not that I'd remove the rape scenarios OR develop them. Hinting a lot at rape while never doing it is a pet peeve of mine and goes for anything constantly dangled in front of a reader. Do it or don't. If you focus on a gun you better have a character use it. That's writing 101.