Uhh I just made a card, I hope it doesn't suck.
Please don't eviscerate me too much, it was my first time.
Um... A small problem with your card. I um.. added her to a group? And one of my girls "Obeyant" kept begging me to hang out with her and well one thing led to another.
After that Yuri.. had a different glow about her..
Hmm.. Yuri.. OH! That makes perfect sense now. Well. Didn't realize the profound effect it would have.
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So critisisms..
Not much.. Tips? from IRL? If you happen to be going for realism.
Okay, quite a few but relax.. they aren't bad.. and they are based on my experience so mileage may vary on your experiences..
Breasts.. Gravity effects everyone.. YOUR BALLS AND ASS INCLUDED. So Breast of a larger size in their late teens and 20's VERY different from the knee huggers in their 40's. also angle.. and perky 60 degrees and up are good. the phrase "retrousse tits" is french. and usually indicates hasn't breast fed and perky. good angle.
Hips always 1:1 to pelvis or hips slightly larger.
Lipstick on lips.. IS a BIG DEAL..
No I'm dead serious. If it's just lip gloss or carmex.. if they aren't brain damaged they won't mess with it.
If they have finger blasted or gotten heavily fucked or dildoed they will see how SWOLE they are.. aka they will drift to a brighter and darker shade of red..
However the NATURAL color of their lips should match their areolas, also matches their labia.. Don't believe me? All humans are the same. Be it Boy or Girl... (ahem see mirror your junk will match your nipples and lips are lighter)
Nipples match outer genitals.. If a woman is in touch with her sexuality... She will wear lipstick that matches her arroused/played with nips. Lipstick is supposed to be a indicator of sexual health and willingness.
It also can mean that is how flush her nipples, natural mouth lips and lips below match when she is in heat.
(We don't have the baboon ass to stare at so.. This is the only cue we can pick up on.. just don't be a jerk about starting at lips.) If you must the only thing you can say is "I really admire that shade of lip gloss." if she corrects you and says "it's lipstick" it means it's not for you. if she says "oh.. why thank you." it's time to move forward.
Don't ask if the rug matches the drapes that's just as classless or gauche or vulgar.
Areolas, keep them at 15 or below breast size.. 1/8 of palm size.. also math? 1/8 of palm size.. If natural breasts that are D or DD or larger they can have zero nipples and can have SERIOUS problems giving milk. So with no nipples they can't breast feed. (pumps can help but... it's getting weird again)
Also a bit past B to C cup you can run across girls that have inverted nipples when aroused. Not joking like they feel awkward about being caressed and studied. Instead of perking outward they only the edges perk out but the top drops in... Just grab/tease/suckle tickle and pull it out don't make a big deal.
Nipple Width ranges anywhere from top of pinky nail to curvature of middle finger. the width is never large. Protrusion while not stipple niff is same size as width. only very rarely aroused to 1.5x.
If 1.5x nipples from normal size typically the ratio will extend to length of clitoris aroused. aka don't lick attack hood trying to get to the shaft that is fucking ghey. you have more surface area to play with below the pubis bone but again.. ignore it. Lips on hood, trace hood edges with tongue, again HS2 with no HUD or UI is a better educator about what she likes without words.
Finally cheek "blush"... Blushing matches the INSIDE of outer labia. or OUTSIDE of Inner labia. Something that HS2 never gets right because. The girls they use as models don't blush/flush. Unless you get them drunk and they have that alcohol allergy. The only thing I can really bust you on. That cheek blush wasn't good. Card has been saved with fixes already. Just notice the differences.
Blush is to highlight angles. natural blush is to indicate excitement/embaressment.. usually no one blushes in fear, unless their kind of going into a gang bang is realized.
Eyebrows.. No one has string eyebrows.. (edit.. okay, okay I'm wrong. I have been with a girl that had to shave her eyebrows fully off all the time BECAUSE she chose to have Eyebrows tattooed permanetly.. And the question of why not let the grow out was answered with then I'd have two sets of eyebrows... Yes she was a lady of the night no I didn't have to pay, not I didn't do the math, yeah I grew jealous in the end when I figured it out. I am not content with second fiddle or being a "choice". I have to be her one and she has to be mine. So yeah, I wouldn't make a good camera man. MOVING ON.)
You can play with the type and shape and angle all you like.. but a thin line? no.. not sexy. again had to fix it. Eye pupil.. Has to have color.. it's pretty much a given. Fixed. Iris aka the internal to allow light in? She aint Riddick so all light allowed in okay. Add on? Something awoke inside of her so now there is a glow.
Otherwise good model. Keep it up man. Nice work. Here are my adjustments p.s. try and get top of inner thighs to touch but not middle nor bottom. Think /datgap/ or the chive. Katya Clover? Outside thighs no.. doesn't matter. and THICC is only okay in Illusion.. because it's on the back to front access.. Width is obesity. Don't make them skinny sick. Keep the girls fit.
WARNING.. OFFSET ANGLE ON LEGS can cause problems.. it's based on width and thickness of legs. Even if she is tall/long and pelvis is wide and deep, the legs go screwy you can check if you model has defectived 360 legs if you change poses. Elbows, Arms shoulders have some wierd ghosts living in the as well.. BUT you got the Ankles and Calves right by not fucking with them, in my book that is A+ Aka Bent missionary. if I can't touch Thumb to Middle finger around her ankle during a date.. We will never fuck.
First time? Not bad. 9/10. Obeyant begged me to let her tag along.
(p.s. they have already gotten to know each other. they make a nice pair.)