I very rarely if ever post here; I'm more of a long time lurker. That I wanted to comment really shows how much of an effect this game had on me. Can't really think of a bigger compliment to hand out at the moment.
While playing through the game, I also noticed a few words that were missing or sentences that didn't sound right and I've taken the liberty of grabbing a screenshot when I noticed. I've uploaded the screenshots
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. I hope this works!
I'm by no means an expert, -English isn't my first language-, so feel free to disregard it should it not prove constructive.
I'm sad to hear that the plan is for you to tell this story, or a similar one, without any sexual interactions: as it stands, I do feel like they add a lot to the game: this feeling of the overall melancholy and loneliness that gets pushed back a little bit each time, in its own way. Not really raging against the dying of the light, but still doing...
something...
That being said, you are clearly onto something with this "Disco Imperium" game, so I'll be there regardless. Thank you!