Just finished this, and have a few criticisms. There is no difference in the dialogue denoting whether the mc is speaking, or thinking something. No matter what, his text always has quotation marks around it. Make it so we can tell if he's actually talking, since some of the stuff he says is pretty stupid, so it can be hard to tell what is what. Also, I'm honestly impressed that a guy who was banished from his home and birthright could still wind up so lazy, entitled and arrogant. You'd think he would have learned at least a small bit of humility.
Anybody know if there's a way to get both elf thieves to come along, or will that happen in a later update?