OK, so just DL'd & played the original and I can see the potential. I like how the original dev went straight to plot points in the dev stage preferring to go back and flesh things out which obviously never got done. Makes your job much easier to have the basic framework done.
Having said all that, not really my cup of tea. Turning bully bro into a bimbo or shemale or whatever has it's charm, it's not what I'm looking for in my adult gaming repertoire atm.
Sorry I have yet to try your revamp, but I've suffered enough for now. I was planning to do a side/side comparison, but I need to bathe in Ganges or something before I go on with stage 2.
You've got a page and a half of kudos so far, but I've gotta agree with the general consensus that announcing your patreon based on your first update on someone else's intellectual property is a bit premature and highly suspect.
OK, that convinced me to try yours now, to see how many changes you've made for a premiere release to have the balls to make a patreon & then advertise it on release 1. *fingers crossed*