- Dec 17, 2017
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MoistSponge Girls look cute. Some suggestions, purely based on looking at the OP:
- At first glance, that banner made me think this was a gay game. The naked dude and the tiny chicks don't say "harem game" to me. De-emphasize the dude, put some clothes on, and show the girls.
- In English, text reads left-to-right and top-to-bottom. The text going right, left, right in the banner is confusing; it doesn't look like the name of the game.
- Put your dev name on the banner.
- You marked this as a VN. If it really is, you should switch to Ren'Py. Ren'Py is vastly superior to RPGM when it comes to making a VN. If you're writing an RPG, go ahead and stick with RPGM.
- Don't forget that people also play on Mac, Linux and Android.