The Nook Erotica

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Kuddos on the effort with this game
The style is nice, and there is a good attempt at creating something that the writer themselves will enjoy working on, but it honestly is very grindy in its current state.
Might be a good game to come back to at a later stage, but for now the amount of effort it takes to progress the story is just too big to explain someone playing it.
Working on more content would be advisable, as is managing the in-game timeline.
 

Surprise & Delight

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I am always a bit skeptical about HTML games with open world, most of the time they end up becoming very repetitive with endless filler content to simply click through without reading it after the first time it is encountered.

There are some issues with this in this game too, but the scenes that are in the game (I have checked out the cuckold route) are very well written and really hot.

What I would like, if it is possible, would be a warning that we've reached the end of the current content in the main story line.
This will get better over time. Each update will be split between linear "events" and additional content to increase its day to day robustness so that the necessary grind level doesn't feel quite so "grindy."

A scene guide/hint system will be ready for the next update.
 
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toklap2312

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questions:
1. I took the brian route, after strip game and the wife go to brian room. Why is she saying "I fucked brian in the living room" even there is not sex scene? I want to see that scene.

2. Is there a cheat to lower my wife stats? Im going cuck route btw.

3. How many sex scenes are currenlty there for brian?

4. When will my trainer and wife fuck? wife stat is already low but i dont know how lower it can get to trigger a scene.

5. And also brian, is it just 1 sex scene?

Also can you add some sounds to the videos even only one of them per page like for example per page there is 4 videos in the current page then the last one or any one of those have videos with sound at least.

I know this is very early versions of the game, sorry if i sound demanding but i really like the game especially the cuck route. The resource for BBC cuck in games is extremely low compared to others/
 

Surprise & Delight

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questions:
1. I took the brian route, after strip game and the wife go to brian room. Why is she saying "I fucked brian in the living room" even there is not sex scene? I want to see that scene.

2. Is there a cheat to lower my wife stats? Im going cuck route btw.

3. How many sex scenes are currenlty there for brian?

4. When will my trainer and wife fuck? wife stat is already low but i dont know how lower it can get to trigger a scene.

5. And also brian, is it just 1 sex scene?

Also can you add some sounds to the videos even only one of them per page like for example per page there is 4 videos in the current page then the last one or any one of those have videos with sound at least.

I know this is very early versions of the game, sorry if i sound demanding but i really like the game especially the cuck route. The resource for BBC cuck in games is extremely low compared to others/
1. Did the husband go peek on the wife and Brian? That's where you will see that scene.

2. Nope. You don't really need to lower the stats too much at this point in the game though.

3. There are 4 different full-blown interactive ("CumPoints") sex scenes with Brian. Two of them may only appear randomly when the husband is at work though. There are also a lot of smaller non-interactive sex scenes. Basically, any time the two of them are in any room together by themselves, there is at least some chance that she is blowing him or they are fucking. There are also quite a few of these smaller scenes that occur randomly while the husband is at work.

4. Shaun and the wife don't fuck in this version. That content will be in a future update. (He is a character from my other game, so he was included early as a "familiar face.") It will not likely be in the next update as I already have that planned out to introduce some of the other routes.

5. See my answer to no. 3. Unless you meant Ricky (the dating app guy). There is currently only one scene with him, but he will be back in a future update.

I don't put the sound in my games to be somewhat more friendly to more audiences (inc. myself who frequently has to code/test with other people around). Sorry!
 

Surprise & Delight

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Workplace bug where sometime when you continue the passage is blank and you can't move forward you can spam the back and forward a few time to fix it but it's kinda annoying.
Thanks! I have encountered that one myself & should be able to fix it for the next update. You may also try just refreshing the browser page (you shouldn't lose your place), but if that doesn't work, hitting back and clicking the link again should do it.
 

bloodyasura

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So.
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when I poke to continue:
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That’s it. I can’t get off the phone.
I’ve been pushing buttons, but there’s nothing on the phone.
The other buttons too.
Could I have ruined the game by making money??
I just changed the random numbers in the code (4000 to 5500) or something.
From what I understand, everything this line does is just set up the initial money.
I don’t think she can break something?
 

bloodyasura

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So.
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when I poke to continue:
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That’s it. I can’t get off the phone.
I’ve been pushing buttons, but there’s nothing on the phone.
The other buttons too.
Could I have ruined the game by making money??
I just changed the random numbers in the code (4000 to 5500) or something.
From what I understand, everything this line does is just set up the initial money.
I don’t think she can break something?
Um. Returned the value of the initial money as it was and started again.
And now it’s working.
Could money really ruin the game?? :HideThePain:
 
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Surprise & Delight

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Um. Returned the value of the initial money as it was and started again.
And now it’s working.
Could money really ruin the game?? :HideThePain:
I don't think so. Honestly, money is such a non-issue in the game right now. I'm not even sure what it would do for you.

The only thing I can think is that when you did it you unset the return link.
 
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Terakahn

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Do you still plan to work on your other game? Or is this more or less a replacement.
 

Surprise & Delight

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Do you still plan to work on your other game? Or is this more or less a replacement.
I will be continuing the other game in a few months. Right now, I am spending time fixing some old code that was probably the source of some issues but also just want to clean it all up to reflect my own improved skills since I started that game. The next update will basically be a tech update, then after that I will be developing both of these game simultaneously (possibly alternating months or something like that).
 
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Pr0GamerJohnny

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I've agreed with S&D on other threads, and disagreed with him on others, so I trust his passion to a project...

There's no subtle way to say this, if you want this game to appeal to a broader crowd than the IR-fetish, it needs a lot of changes. Things like the vast majority of the other swinging non-ir porn categories simply being ir scenes. Or nearly every potential extra-maritial partner for the wife, described or otherwise being black. I didn't play through the entirety of the wifepov stuff, but a quick look through the image folder confirms this to be the case.

The second critique would be this odd focus on the wife doing stuff behind his back. I get that this is a partial-NTR game, so that makes sense for those paths, but on something like a pure cuck path it makes zero sense for the husband to say stuff like "Well, looks like they'll be busy for awhile, I'd better go to my bedroom alone." Again, zero sense, I've never heard of a cuckold having the chance to witness his partner having sex in front of him say "Well, meh, guess I'd better get going."

To reiterate; if your goal is to make a game that exclusively attracts NTR IR-fetish fans, I've no critique, I'm sure they will delight with the current trajectory; ignore my message and you do what you write best.

To preempt any declaration of future plans containing other elements, often I find a writer's first release best captures where their passion lies, and serves as a good predictor for bulk of future content. While they may release other updates with additional content, generally this preference gets the most attention and most content- thus my suggestions above; if you want to appeal to a broader audience, a fundamental paradigm shift is needed.

Please don't take any of this as mean-spirited, like I said, if your goal is write the stories as written and whoever enjoys them supports you, great! But if your goal is growth, I think this is an opportunity to capture a larger audience.
 
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