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I think suicide is preferable to having F95zone denizens enter your shoes lol.
This game really needs an NTR tag. First, it's not clear who is the MC here, the man who was killed or the man who commited suicide. If it is the first, then shouldn't he be NTRed by the body of the man he has possessed, since he is a spirit? And if it's the second, shouldn't he be NTRed by the spirit of the man who has taken possession of his body and acts on his behalf? And then there's some old, bald fart who has a hot blonde wife who wants his cock-that's NTR, too.
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A decent initial release—nice-looking renders (Norah is my favourite thus far), good amount of content, interesting premise, albeit a proofreader'd be useful for the next updates. Looking forward to future releases.
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Beautiful artwork and a creative idea for a storyline for a change! This has huge potential. I will also wait until there is more content but thank you for sharing and I will definitely try this in future versions. Appreciate your work.
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1) Just started and I like the story
2) I think if Monroe gets your synopsis and rewrites the overview in the OP would do the game a great service, I guess;
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Why would a demon help people on the verge of suicide, shouldn't it be the other way around?
That last scene when that bitch Paige lifted the blanket ... oh man that was hilarious! I almost peed myself !
I almost peed myself ! Isn't it NTR? You build a relationship, you fall in love, and then when your business is over and you leave this world, you continue to watch as the man in whose body you were, fucks all your women. And while you're in his body, it's him, not you, who fucks all the women, you can only look at it through his eyes.
1) Just started and I like the story
2) I think if Monroe gets your synopsis and rewrites the overview in the OP would do the game a great service, I guess;
3) let's ban right here right now every moron who starts blabbering nonsense about NTR here, there and everywhere out of the blue and most of all without any reason. FOR CRYING OUT LOUD I'VE HAD ENOUGH of these netorare crybabies.
Thank you very much. I'm very new in here and trying to figure out how to contact with Monroe to rewrite the overview.
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My thoughts exactly. Fuck me.
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Not sure why this part of original post got left off: "Mind Control", "Hypnotism", "Drugs", "Sleep Sex", "Superpowers", "Magic" are tags that, almost certainly, identify a poorly written game. If you can't even imagine how to get laid without recurring to that kind of cheap resources, probably you should not try to write an erotic game.visual novel about a person whose mission is to enter the lives of people who are about to commit suicide and give them a new chance to live a new life with happiness.... by fucking them?
Not arguing that that is often the case, but... I happen to like sci-fi/fantasy stories. Sometimes this would indicate a story in the genre I enjoy that has adult content. like Love of Magic for example. Not gonna judge until I have checked it out.
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Just report the comments. These NTR arguments are in just about every game thread lately. These snowflakes are like a new, mutated form of SJWs and have infested F95.