Ren'Py Inanna Revenge [Ep.2] [AtemX Games]

[Zanmori]

Liked it very much. Good storytelling, characters and hot models!
But I have three important nitpicks:

If virginity is important in this world, which is obvious by the dialogues (And I don't have a problem with that, quite the contrary), the hymen should not be shuned by the men, but a guarantee instead (in the case of a slave, a guarantee of what hes buying). "Some nobles don't like the hassle"... well, so make it a "ritual" to break the hymen when executing the "delivery", and the buyer decides what is done with it. I'm saying this because it didn't make much sense in the story breaking the hymen by themselves. It seems just a excuse to not put defloration in the game, so not upsetting some players. Make it optional, honestly.

Second nitpick, the selflessness vs pragmatism axis. It's confusing at the begining and I noticed that I was not the only one. It's clear now that they are like alighments related to the goddesses. But I don't think their names match well with the actions they try to represent. So, I suggest to make it Kindness vs Ruthlessness. I think it describes better what their intentions are and the goddesses they are related to.

Third... Why don't we have a creampie shot with Sylvia? I find it a sacrilege when the game shows more the mc dick than the LI's pussies. And it lacks creampie shots (by shot I mean image, framing, scene, not the acting of shooting your shot... you got it)! And I'd give it more stars for gaping pussy creampie.

But great game, specially the women. Pretty and hot models. (But unfortunetely, slutty milfs are not my thing... So, I'm sorry Camen... But your daughter though )

 

[DressedToThrill]

VNs are more like chicken, so you're just asking for salmonella.

Salmonella is in salmon. You're thinking about chickonella! I get your point though, even if I disagree! My stomach can handle it!

let him cook till the finish line. so far he has proven to be a master of the kitchen

Agreed, but as he is a master of the kitchen, I see myself as quite proficient at the dinner plate. Like I almost never choke on fish bones, or drop spaghetti from my fork, and feel that I could have a some say in the preparation of food!

Look, guys, I just miss my not-really-a-slave Sylvia, and can't wait to go on more adventures with her and be wholesome+ together! (That pluss there is doing a lot of heavy lifting for my intentions with her, let me tell you!)

 

[retrograde80]

This is such a good game. Can't wait for 0.2 to drop

 

[Taebaek1913]

The dev is an absolute legend, bro — seriously, keep doing what you're doing. It's been a long time since I looked forward to a game update this much. Just straight-up sublime."

 

[sp4ckj4rr0w_420]

Mmm...


Shouldn't it be; Selfish - Pragmatic - Selfless?

Because pragmatism is about being practical, what should work best reflected in reality. In my opinion, it shouldn't be the opposite of selfless or selfish, since it has both; sometimes selfless or selfish, depends on what's more practical in the situation.

 

[Silwith]

Mmm...
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Shouldn't it be; Selfish - Pragmatic - Selfless?

Because pragmatism is about being practical, what should work best reflected in reality. In my opinion, it shouldn't be the opposite of selfless or selfish, since it has both; sometimes selfless or selfish, depends on what's more practical in the situation.

I mean, in a sense, yeah, pragmatism is mainly about making efficent choices, those can be selfish, but don't necessarily have to be (pretty sure they are never selfless though, because selfless only applies if you sacrifice something I would say, so I wouldn't say pragmatic is the "neutral" option)

But maybe a complete selfish approach isn't planned? So far the choices would fit a "pragmatic" approach, like with the smith, the most efficent method to get the information, yeah, but not really selfish necessarily. True tho, the opposite of Selfless would be Selfish... the opposite of pragmatic is dogmatic though, so, in theory a different scale alltogether

 

[Zanmori]

Mmm...

Shouldn't it be; Selfish - Pragmatic - Selfless?

Because pragmatism is about being practical, what should work best reflected in reality. In my opinion, it shouldn't be the opposite of selfless or selfish, since it has both; sometimes selfless or selfish, depends on what's more practical in the situation.

It's an option, for sure. The way it's now, it's strange... Pragmatism is the philosophy that tries to unify praxis with theory, praticality married to foundational knowledge, saying that we need to observe the reality of things before getting to a conclusion, parsimony being the virtue it preaches.
But I think Ruthlessness x Kindness reflect better their meaning in the story down the line.

 

[briansanders]

I am about to start playing this game. Just wanted to ask about the playtime. Is there enough content to download it now or should I wait for a few more updates as this is just the first episode

 

[Gilber_bestram@176]

I am about to start playing this game. Just wanted to ask about the playtime. Is there enough content to download it now or should I wait for a few more updates as this is just the first episode

If you talk about time then about 2-2,5 hour iirc. If you talk about sex then there are 4 sex scene in the first release ( all vaginal sex and not just some teasing or foreplay) (or 5 scene if you allow swinging in your playthrought). Overall you can see this game as a "eternum release" type game, where each update are 6-7 months with a tons of content for each update

 

[briansanders]

If you talk about time then about 2-2,5 hour iirc. If you talk about sex then there are 4 sex scene in the first release ( all vaginal sex and not just some teasing or foreplay) (or 5 scene if you allow swinging in your playthrought). Overall you can see this game as a "eternum release" type game, where each update are 6-7 months with a tons of content for each update

Damn 2 hours for the first release is pretty good. Time to give this a go

 

[briansanders]

A really nice game. Sylvie's love route is written very nicely that you don't even think of watching the NTS scenes. Her character/scenes are really cute. Felt sad that we didn't get more time to spend with Cindy but from the LI screen it looks like Cindy will also come to this world. Waiting for that eagerly.

As many people have already said in the reviews before me, the dev is really good at world building and writing the characters. Waiting for 0.2 to drop. All the best dev

 

[Silwith]

I am about to start playing this game. Just wanted to ask about the playtime. Is there enough content to download it now or should I wait for a few more updates as this is just the first episode

If you talk about time then about 2-2,5 hour iirc. If you talk about sex then there are 4 sex scene in the first release ( all vaginal sex and not just some teasing or foreplay) (or 5 scene if you allow swinging in your playthrought). Overall you can see this game as a "eternum release" type game, where each update are 6-7 months with a tons of content for each update

It has a (reaally) good amount of content for a first release, but the 2nd release isn't far away, so, depending on how great your internet is, maybe you want to wait for that, it is worth it right now tho.

Sex scenes is slightly wrong there are 4 full sex scenes with the first girl, plus one NTS-Scene for the first girl, plus 1 scene with a side milf. So if you wanna see em all, 6 full sex scenes. (and some small voyeur, a small groping nts thing, but, proper full scenes are 6 )

 

[netcov]

so, depending on how great your internet is, maybe you want to wait for that

Order now the update via pidgeon delivery (to be delivered on a usb stick) to get the next update just in time!

 

[Vlbc]

And that's why all porn games should be 100% POV...

 

[Gilber_bestram@176]

And that's why all porn games should be 100% POV...
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Give him a break, he was in prison for a while

 

[Vlbc]

Give him a break, he was in prison for a while

He looks like a even gayer version of Netflix Alucard lol

 

[netcov]

He looks like a even gayer version of Netflix Alucard lol

Whenever I should decide to make a game, I'll make sure to make it non-pov with an ugly bastard just for you.

 

[Silwith]

PoV-Games are ugh... it has the positive of easier immersion I guess, because the MC is whoever/however you like? But it is SO restricting for scenes and stuff... no thanks, I prefer a MC I don't find perfect and getting properly laid out sex scenes and angles

 

[mehGusta]

And that's why all porn games should be 100% POV...
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oh hell no!

if every game would be POV only, you would make any kind of moresomes pretty pointless and boring!
have a girl ride mc and another sit on his face, you'd see absolutely nothing!
having POV only games is so limiting on what you can show, because you don't know what the mc feels. you always have to show it, because even describing it is not gonna do it justice!

0!
exactly 0% of all games should be POV! and i'm not even saying this because not only guys play theses games, but i also completely hate 101 cardboard main characters to "self-insert". that's basically an insult even. that's like saying "here is a character devoid of traits or quality. just. like. you!" well thanks! am i a nobody? it's much more interesting to have an established and realistic character to play as.

a game were you can realistically self-insert yourself hasn't been made yet. and i'm not only talking about porn games here!

 

[pitao]

oh hell no!

if every game would be POV only, you would make any kind of moresomes pretty pointless and boring!
have a girl ride mc and another sit on his face, you'd see absolutely nothing!
having POV only games is so limiting on what you can show, because you don't know what the mc feels. you always have to show it, because even describing it is not gonna do it justice!

0!
exactly 0% of all games should be POV! and i'm not even saying this because not only guys play theses games, but i also completely hate 101 cardboard main characters to "self-insert". that's basically an insult even. that's like saying "here is a character devoid of traits or quality. just. like. you!" well thanks! am i a nobody? it's much more interesting to have an established and realistic character to play as.

a game were you can realistically self-insert yourself hasn't been made yet. and i'm not only talking about porn games here!

Completely agree, well besides the 0% thingy because you probably meant to say "exactly 0% of all games should be 100% POV" well not even 50% POV since I guess we both like a more cinematic approach to this games with diversity of camera angles including some POV shots without the restriction of cinema sets that have to move the cameras all around.

I see some good potential directors learning by experience it (most the cases they are all roles including producer since most are solo or duo devs) in some of this AVNs including AtemX. It is a good medium for it.