laionstives

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Game Developer
Jun 9, 2020
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"Tries inflict X at (the enemy/enemies)" > Tries to inflict X on (an enemy/all enemies)
"Tries cast X at (the enemy/enemies)" > Tries to cast X on (an enemy/all enemies)
"Frozen decrease Accurace and Evasion" > Frozen decreases Accuracy and Evasion
"Cast a ice spear at the enemy" > Cast an ice spear at the enemy *("cast a magic spear at the enemy" is correct i think)
"Tires cast 3 magic arrows at enemies" > Tries to cast 3 magic arrows at ¹(the enemies) ²(all the enemies)

1, if it's three arrows total or 2, if it's three arrows on each enemy.

I'm not a native English speaker so if anyone has any corrections/suggestions feel free to voice them.
Thanks a lot for the feedback and for taking the time to point these out!
I'm not a native speaker either, but your post was really helpful. I managed to fix a lot of issues thanks to your tips and other comments as well.
Thanks again!