The graphics and grammar are good. The text is hard to read on some backgrounds. I am adding this game to my watch list. Good luck.
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I'm not a fan of the bush, but at least it wasn't completely extreme and over the top.
It's like THE MILF model, so even if I do like her and her different iterations, something a little more diverse would have been nice.
Writing was fine as far as I can see, render quality as well.
I like that it's not incest. I mean, incest is great, but we have hundreds of incest games, so just a friend of the mother is a nice change of pace (again, not unique, but it is a rarer variety).
My main problem is that, yes, I get it is just a demo, but this really isn't enough to give a lot of feedback about.
We don't know if the decisions will continue to be just between doing nothing or being a little creep, we don't really get much of the personalities.
I can't really say anything bad, but I also can't say much good, with just this.
It does look promising, but any more detailed feedback, any more definitive statement will have to wait, until we have at least a bit of substance to play through.
Edited to add: The game was obviously NOT titled Nightmare with Mom, when I posted this comment.
It's like THE MILF model, so even if I do like her and her different iterations, something a little more diverse would have been nice.
Writing was fine as far as I can see, render quality as well.
I like that it's not incest. I mean, incest is great, but we have hundreds of incest games, so just a friend of the mother is a nice change of pace (again, not unique, but it is a rarer variety).
My main problem is that, yes, I get it is just a demo, but this really isn't enough to give a lot of feedback about.
We don't know if the decisions will continue to be just between doing nothing or being a little creep, we don't really get much of the personalities.
I can't really say anything bad, but I also can't say much good, with just this.
It does look promising, but any more detailed feedback, any more definitive statement will have to wait, until we have at least a bit of substance to play through.
Edited to add: The game was obviously NOT titled Nightmare with Mom, when I posted this comment.
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LOVE THE BUSH LOOK. NEED MORE OF IT IN GAMES
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How to do it technically?The dark red text is hard to see when entering your name; suggest either changing the colour or giving it an outline like so:
Wouldn't hurt giving the dialogue names outlines either;
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hello
i´m no developer, but maybe this mod shows you, how to make changes for your game.
https://f95zone.to/threads/renpy-transparent-text-box-mod-v2-6-3.11925/
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1. No need to shout.
2. Good for you, doesn't change my opinion about it one bit, though.
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I attach a file with the style settings in it. Colours can be three or six hex characters, with hash. Outlines are lists of outlines, from back to front, the four parts of an outline are size, colour, and x and y offsets.
I finally got around to play this and my feedback is this:
It's a little too short to give proper feedback. As it stands, this is gonna sound funny because it's so short, but I like the pacing.
I'm a fan of games that waste the players time in the CORRECT way. Let me explain, I love it when Dev's make simple moments like when MC is looking through every room. It might be important later to know each room, or it might not, but it puts people in a frame of mind that the MC not only did EXACTLY what his Aunt told him to do (showing loyalty and love) but also made it feel like it doesn't just move from scene to scene without LIVING in the world, which is what most VN's do. They skip the travel a lot of the time, they miss the small conversations people have with each other, and they miss the part where NOTHING has to happen for a bit before it builds up a tension so when something DOES happen, it's released in a satisfying way
As I said, it's too short to give you much feedback. BUT this is something I loved in this game.
The other critiques are that the Aunt looks like a lot of standard Milfs, she looks almost exactly like Mirror Mine's Mom. Though she does look great
I don't know exactly where you're going with the peeping and smelling panties options, but all I know is that if you DON'T do them there is zero content in this demo. In the future, give the other road a little content too, even if it's visiting a seperate room and finding something out about the story.
Hope this feedback was helpful! Have a fantastic day 17MOONKEYS
It's a little too short to give proper feedback. As it stands, this is gonna sound funny because it's so short, but I like the pacing.
I'm a fan of games that waste the players time in the CORRECT way. Let me explain, I love it when Dev's make simple moments like when MC is looking through every room. It might be important later to know each room, or it might not, but it puts people in a frame of mind that the MC not only did EXACTLY what his Aunt told him to do (showing loyalty and love) but also made it feel like it doesn't just move from scene to scene without LIVING in the world, which is what most VN's do. They skip the travel a lot of the time, they miss the small conversations people have with each other, and they miss the part where NOTHING has to happen for a bit before it builds up a tension so when something DOES happen, it's released in a satisfying way
As I said, it's too short to give you much feedback. BUT this is something I loved in this game.
The other critiques are that the Aunt looks like a lot of standard Milfs, she looks almost exactly like Mirror Mine's Mom. Though she does look great
I don't know exactly where you're going with the peeping and smelling panties options, but all I know is that if you DON'T do them there is zero content in this demo. In the future, give the other road a little content too, even if it's visiting a seperate room and finding something out about the story.
Hope this feedback was helpful! Have a fantastic day 17MOONKEYS
Thank you. I wonder what you will say about the next version - probably the release will be in next week.I finally got around to play this and my feedback is this:
It's a little too short to give proper feedback. As it stands, this is gonna sound funny because it's so short, but I like the pacing.
I'm a fan of games that waste the players time in the CORRECT way. Let me explain, I love it when Dev's make simple moments like when MC is looking through every room. It might be important later to know each room, or it might not, but it puts people in a frame of mind that the MC not only did EXACTLY what his Aunt told him to do (showing loyalty and love) but also made it feel like it doesn't just move from scene to scene without LIVING in the world, which is what most VN's do. They skip the travel a lot of the time, they miss the small conversations people have with each other, and they miss the part where NOTHING has to happen for a bit before it builds up a tension so when something DOES happen, it's released in a satisfying way
As I said, it's too short to give you much feedback. BUT this is something I loved in this game.
The other critiques are that the Aunt looks like a lot of standard Milfs, she looks almost exactly like Mirror Mine's Mom. Though she does look great
I don't know exactly where you're going with the peeping and smelling panties options, but all I know is that if you DON'T do them there is zero content in this demo. In the future, give the other road a little content too, even if it's visiting a seperate room and finding something out about the story.
Hope this feedback was helpful! Have a fantastic day 17MOONKEYS
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Gotta agree with Larry2000, it is pretty short. What I can give you off the cuff is decent writing.. decent renders.. BUT.. and it's a big but... the MC's pajamas were funny as hell.
Hard to take him seriously wearing those.. lol
edit: Also I gotta put out there.. from the limited quantity we are looking at.. the five star review is a bit premature. But not hitting it with a low rating.. just not enough yet to give it a fair one at the moment.
Hard to take him seriously wearing those.. lol
edit: Also I gotta put out there.. from the limited quantity we are looking at.. the five star review is a bit premature. But not hitting it with a low rating.. just not enough yet to give it a fair one at the moment.
I see that, it probably should have been closer to a 4 with the potential. I've already given it a 5, so I can't back down on it now. Haha! It would seem rude to the Dev
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But it's a good point, maybe after the next update I'll give it a more fair indication of content. That may mean the score goes down, but it'll be more accurate.
Edit: you're not gonna believe this, but I think alternate realities exist, cause I could have sworn that I reviewed the game! There was a Laryy2000 in some time zone or hyperdrive that definitely reviewed this game. Hahah! I'm a dumb dumb! Maybe I should post my comment as my review!
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Isn't that the doll from RE: Village? If so, I would add a Parody tag.
Maybe I'll change the doll.
I didn't know she was from Resident Evil.
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very good continues, a good tip is that an incest patch made by a fan helps a lot
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Looks promising.
I've seen the overhead viewing angles used to good effect before, and for me, the occasional use of these adds to the atmospheric nature of the story.
As an aside, please keep Auntie's bush - too many other VNs use the bald pussy format.
I've seen the overhead viewing angles used to good effect before, and for me, the occasional use of these adds to the atmospheric nature of the story.
As an aside, please keep Auntie's bush - too many other VNs use the bald pussy format.
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My thoughts:
1. Overall good music choices. Also nice SFX. It really helps. If you bought them in some online outlet, please say where!
2. Really good milf design. Better than your typical ones. Clearly a mature leady with wrinkles and such. Hair is not my cup of tea...
3. Nothing to say about MC. Pajama pants looks like out from a circus. I would have choosen something more typical.
4. Good grammar. Easy for me to read.
5. Storywise I would explain a bit better why MC decided to help auntie. Maybe also deep a bit more about the 'I was rarised here' joke or how auntie feels about the death in the family.
6. pornwise, I don't like that the only spicy bit it's peeking in the shower or sniffing -didn't even try that-. I really don't like the pervy route. A bit more of suggestive dialogue would be better IMO.
7. Render-wise, be careful with auntie skin. Try to make it a bit more clear if you want to keep using the same lights. Can't say anything about the scenary, usually I think the way daz deals with rooms really sucks...
by the way, is the scond floor camera angle an homage to original Alone in the darkness trademark camera angles?
1. Overall good music choices. Also nice SFX. It really helps. If you bought them in some online outlet, please say where!
2. Really good milf design. Better than your typical ones. Clearly a mature leady with wrinkles and such. Hair is not my cup of tea...
3. Nothing to say about MC. Pajama pants looks like out from a circus. I would have choosen something more typical.
4. Good grammar. Easy for me to read.
5. Storywise I would explain a bit better why MC decided to help auntie. Maybe also deep a bit more about the 'I was rarised here' joke or how auntie feels about the death in the family.
6. pornwise, I don't like that the only spicy bit it's peeking in the shower or sniffing -didn't even try that-. I really don't like the pervy route. A bit more of suggestive dialogue would be better IMO.
7. Render-wise, be careful with auntie skin. Try to make it a bit more clear if you want to keep using the same lights. Can't say anything about the scenary, usually I think the way daz deals with rooms really sucks...
by the way, is the scond floor camera angle an homage to original Alone in the darkness trademark camera angles?
Thank you for your helpful feedback!
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I didn't understand the question.
Can you explain please?
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I was asking if you were trying to make an homenage to classic game
Here's are a few screenshots:
Here's a gameplay:
Since the genre of your game is similar, and some camera angles you used felt reminiscent of those used in it, I thought it was an inspiration for your own work. I guess it was not.
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the first 3D survival horror published in 1992 and thus a total classic.Here's are a few screenshots:
Here's a gameplay:
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Since the genre of your game is similar, and some camera angles you used felt reminiscent of those used in it, I thought it was an inspiration for your own work. I guess it was not.