- Jun 15, 2022
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A sign of quality: the sister's name when she talks is "Jayne" but when other people talk about her, sometimes to her, the text uses "Jane." Yes, it is a simple error, but that means the dev isn't doing any proofreading or testing beyond "Yay! No Errors!"
Also, "Her sister giggled..." The MC is male, so this is another proofreading error. I'm only a few frames into this VN, and now I know what to expect. Plus, yep, those eyebrows!
Also, "Her sister giggled..." The MC is male, so this is another proofreading error. I'm only a few frames into this VN, and now I know what to expect. Plus, yep, those eyebrows!
