There's a surprise at the staff room
- Thread starter Fallen Eros
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- Apr 27, 2017
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Hey again Fallen Eros. I sent you a DM on Twitter about the proofreading. I'll also ask here though if it's easier for you to respond. I'd ask on Discord, but you only allow DMs from friends, and I refuse to link my phone to Discord for various reasons. I hope this works instead.
Started going through the game from the start to get everything, and was wondering how thorough you wanted me to be. I definitely mean no offense, and I do hope you don't take any from this. There are however are a lot of minor phrasing issues here and there. They don't really impact legibility, but they do definitely sound "odd" for a native English speaker. I also don't intend to "Put words in your mouth." so to speak. I was specifically asking if you would like suggestions for such errors, or to just fix the most egregious spelling and or grammar errors. One would obviously be a lot more work involved for both of us, and I'm not too keen on wasting either of our time. Let me know what you think. Having worked professionally as a proofreader I might be going way overboard. Occupational hazard. lol.
Started going through the game from the start to get everything, and was wondering how thorough you wanted me to be. I definitely mean no offense, and I do hope you don't take any from this. There are however are a lot of minor phrasing issues here and there. They don't really impact legibility, but they do definitely sound "odd" for a native English speaker. I also don't intend to "Put words in your mouth." so to speak. I was specifically asking if you would like suggestions for such errors, or to just fix the most egregious spelling and or grammar errors. One would obviously be a lot more work involved for both of us, and I'm not too keen on wasting either of our time. Let me know what you think. Having worked professionally as a proofreader I might be going way overboard. Occupational hazard. lol.
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- Dec 27, 2017
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Route 2? What rock have I been under.
Don't suppose you know which option leads to the second route?
- Apr 27, 2017
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Top option is route 1 and bottom option is route 2. So far anyways.
You can check your route status on the save screen info if you save after a choice.
Also, currently its just some minor differences, but with Version 0.15 onwards, will be the start of a branched path if I'm not mistaken.
- Apr 15, 2018
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- Jun 26, 2020
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Well, 0.14 was so.... disappointing. First, the option to go back home early was not available, then when the mc approached that bathroom door I thought the dev will make it up to us but it was skillfully ruined. See you in 5 or 6 updates, I am emotionally exhausted.
Hi. Send me what you think it's best. I'll see what fits.
- Apr 27, 2017
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I´m weak.. Just pledged again to spoil myself... xD King of teasing indeed <.<I guess i have to wait for about 2-3 Months to get a decent amount of Content.
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