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Advice for game developers... They can read people's confessions about their experiences and things they cannot explain and create a good scenario from them.
Ren'Py Independent Horizons [v0.3.1] [SwampyStudio]
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- Jan 2, 2018
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Done! I never thought that I could edit the tags at the top of the game title. Thank you for letting me know about this
- May 20, 2018
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what's the reason to call Mrs Cruz "Gracelyn" if she is called "Mrs Cruz" again after some lines?
This needs proofreading imho.
This needs proofreading imho.
- Oct 10, 2020
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good luck with your game.
unavoidable sex scenes are not my thing
unavoidable sex scenes are not my thing
Hmmm, maybe I'll try to add linux version soon.Linux version?
is there incest patch?
Oh really? Thanks for reporting. I'll proof read it and update it in the next update. Thanks!
- Jan 26, 2018
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Really love to see Devs not using the same models in their games. The girl is beautiful.
And I don't understand the people asking for incest patch if being adopted is part of the story lol incest patch will only be needed if MC ever finds his real family (ignore this if he found them in this v0.1 , I haven't played yet).
And I don't understand the people asking for incest patch if being adopted is part of the story lol incest patch will only be needed if MC ever finds his real family (ignore this if he found them in this v0.1 , I haven't played yet).
- May 20, 2018
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Another ESL dev? Needs to find a different noun than "childhood friend" because sentences like "I'll always be your childhood friend" would never be said by an English speaker.
- Jan 18, 2022
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Well this is on the more unique side.
Renders are nice and models are not of the kind you see everywhere else. Animations look good too.
Music is a bit of a backgrounder, but it doesn't disturb (at least me) - even if it's not always fitting to the scene. But that's so with most of the VNs here. As far as I know it's only one song played all the time.
The sound effect when someone comes is... a bit off in a funny way. Sounds more like a soft
or a stapler nailing some wood than actually coming.
Now the thing that might be a problem for many here:
The writing is a bit... lenghty. Not in a bad way, mind you - but as I always read complains on F95 about "not wanting to read a book" it could be a turn down for many. I enjoyed it though, because it's really good. High quality on this site even.
There are some little typos or "your" instead of "you're" stuff, but not so much that it really disturbs (again at least me).
Technical issue:
you might want to look in the preview of texting messages with the phone. It seems to be overlapping:
I would rate it 3/5 as of now, has a lot of potential and is a bit of a fresh breath here - but is still pretty short. Around half an hour if you read carefully. Only one foot job in until now so maybe not the best fapping material, be warned horny guys.
I will keep an eye on that one - good luck dev.
Renders are nice and models are not of the kind you see everywhere else. Animations look good too.
Music is a bit of a backgrounder, but it doesn't disturb (at least me) - even if it's not always fitting to the scene. But that's so with most of the VNs here. As far as I know it's only one song played all the time.
The sound effect when someone comes is... a bit off in a funny way. Sounds more like a soft
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Now the thing that might be a problem for many here:
The writing is a bit... lenghty. Not in a bad way, mind you - but as I always read complains on F95 about "not wanting to read a book" it could be a turn down for many. I enjoyed it though, because it's really good. High quality on this site even.
There are some little typos or "your" instead of "you're" stuff, but not so much that it really disturbs (again at least me).
Technical issue:
you might want to look in the preview of texting messages with the phone. It seems to be overlapping:
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I would rate it 3/5 as of now, has a lot of potential and is a bit of a fresh breath here - but is still pretty short. Around half an hour if you read carefully. Only one foot job in until now so maybe not the best fapping material, be warned horny guys.
I will keep an eye on that one - good luck dev.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts about the game. That's really helpful on how to improve it more in the future.
And thanks for reporting the issue, I'm going to find it and fix it.
- Jan 9, 2018
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swampystudio Maybe rework you OP/signature before some poor epileptic fucker bites off his tongue?
- Oct 1, 2019
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Just got caught up with the Dev on this game. So, when the Demo came out, I gave it a try, but was so little involved with it, wasn't even able to see if the Universal Walkthrough Mods would help with it or not, which is the biggest thing that has me decide to give a game a try. So, decided I would be fair to this game, put a note on it see when the next release came out, if it would help or not. Glad I did, because sure enough, they do.
Thank you so very much for this, and looking forward for more!!!
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Thank you so very much for this, and looking forward for more!!!
- Dec 12, 2021
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and im out..... When will you devs realise that a choose your own adventure tale (which essentially what a avn has evolved from) we dont want to play as your character.. let us have some immersion to try and lessen the blow if the writing is terrible lol
Look at the backlash Outlaws and ubisoft are getting for the same thing.. YES i know its the pricing too.. but the whole.. YOU WILL PLAY AS THIS CHARACTER UNDER THIS NAME is done with
The best solution is to leave the name to be filled in by the players entirely, rather than give options like the Dev did, this way they can set it up as it should be themselves based on their tastes. Pretty much any other options are problematic with Patreon, however the better option is just to not use that fucking service and instead go for one of the others that don't give a shit about that sort of details.
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