Youtiy

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I mean, let's talk about it. I'd love to go back and add a more dominating MC that can turn the tables on Kiaria. I love circling back and adding smaller details/more choices to previous content where able. I wanted to do it for Kiaria's scene from the moment we wrote it, but time hasn't really allowed the opportunity.

That said, I'll try to have a second look at it and see what can be done.
Personally I was very satisfied with how it was written since unlike most femdom it felt a lot more natural, like despite her actions there were still undertones of affection in them. At least that's what I felt.
 

TotattlyNOTfakeID

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Hey nice game... I didn't see anyone mention this but I kinda found a small bug (on the version you have here atleast)...
I was able to fix it after unpacking the archive in "E04/Day1/bridge[something].rpy" since it was a simple variable reference issue.
the bug is technically in this line as the temp variable is only defined once a bit before when we meet sonia the first time.

idk if you fixed it so I thought I'd just put a reply if you hadn't been notified yet.
 

infinitestarsdev

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Hey nice game... I didn't see anyone mention this but I kinda found a small bug (on the version you have here atleast)...
I was able to fix it after unpacking the archive in "E04/Day1/bridge[something].rpy" since it was a simple variable reference issue.
the bug is technically in this line as the temp variable is only defined once a bit before when we meet sonia the first time.

idk if you fixed it so I thought I'd just put a reply if you hadn't been notified yet.
I'll look into this! <3
 
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This is single-handedly one of the best projects on this site in spite of being a one person dev 'team' fueled more by passion than profit. The writing in here is quite frankly superior to 95% of the junk we're usually offered on "Adult visual novels" and shows a better grasp of actual human behavior than most stuff i've played, and i've played many VN's on here. All that to say, I like what I see, and i'm looking forward to seeing more of it as time permits. Been a solid year+ since I last played, but seeing it updated makes me smile.
 

portiamento

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Nice game but I'm wondering about the stats, do they really have any effect? In dialogue or the way the MC behaves or maybe other NPC's perception about the MC?
 

anonwk3

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Nice game but I'm wondering about the stats, do they really have any effect? In dialogue or the way the MC behaves or maybe other NPC's perception about the MC?
some dialogue options wont be available depending on your age personaility and training others will be slighty different thats what ive noticed
 

Queen in Yellow

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I mean, let's talk about it. I'd love to go back and add a more dominating MC that can turn the tables on Kiaria. I love circling back and adding smaller details/more choices to previous content where able. I wanted to do it for Kiaria's scene from the moment we wrote it, but time hasn't really allowed the opportunity.

That said, I'll try to have a second look at it and see what can be done.
I just played through her route for chapter 3 and though I don’t necessarily think giving her an alternative scene is “needed” I will agree that being “forced” into that scene felt really weird.

My mc was staking points in dominance, confidence and combativeness. So when I selected the option for intimacy and that led to basically multiple options that all meant complying in one way or another that felt totally out of character for my mc and a bit tonedeath. If anything I would have expected her to reject her outright at that point.

Another way around this could be to just have the content more clearly telegraphed beforehand though that comes with its own set of issues I suppose.
 
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I can't start episode 4? the game ends after talking to the chef guy.

EDIT:....nvm
 
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infinitestarsdev

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I just played through her route for chapter 3 and though I don’t necessarily think giving her an alternative scene is “needed” I will agree that being “forced” into that scene felt really weird.

My mc was staking points in dominance, confidence and combativeness. So when I selected the option for intimacy and that led to basically multiple options that all meant complying in one way or another that felt totally out of character for my mc and a bit tonedeath. If anything I would have expected her to reject her outright at that point.

Another way around this could be to just have the content more clearly telegraphed beforehand though that comes with its own set of issues I suppose.
Yeah, that's my biggest issue with the scene as it is right now, and also the biggest reason I want to change it. I also feel it should be telegraphed beforehand, but in addition to, not instead of. (I received one very heartfelt comment from a player who had been in a similar situation before in RL, which they did not enjoy and encountering it in the game again wasn't a pleasant experience, so I want to be sensitive to that also.)
 
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GokutheG

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Yeah, that's my biggest issue with the scene as it is right now, and also the biggest reason I want to change it. I also feel it should be telegraphed beforehand, but in addition to, not instead of. (I received one very heartfelt comment from a player who had been in a similar situation before in RL, which they did not enjoy and encountering it in the game again wasn't a pleasant experience, so I want to be sensitive to that also.)
Instead of changing content why not just make it obvious what a character's route will entail? I see a scenario where changing the scenes will just upset the people who already like the content as is instead.
 
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