- May 9, 2020
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I love your story-telling ability, and your ability to draw these beautiful (packin') ladies! Thanks GT <3
- Oct 4, 2022
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harsh criticism
it takes too much time for updates!
updates never deliver enough content!
the main character's penis is too long stop this stupidity! 33% SHORTENED!
the characters are not bad especially the main character family but the others have mediocre and exaggerated physical features! Organ for women I understand or for monster women but human women should be more acceptable physical features and being charismatic comes before being sexy!
it didn't taste like a visual novel with the updates so far! there are no animations and effects anyway, so at least visual novels should have more satisfying storytelling and stories!
I'm not interested in any extended story other than the main character, make sure to make updates with the main character in it!
I'm playing this game for two carrot haired chicks, one is a milf and the other a young character, the main character's family and the updates so far have always been disappointing!
if i look at the changelog in this update again disappointment! If it has not changed, I will not criticize this game again! and I will not consider this visual novel again!
Announced to the producer of the game! stop laziness! and be a little more resourceful or you'll keep counting where you are and those who start after you will make you swallow your dust!
it takes too much time for updates!
updates never deliver enough content!
the main character's penis is too long stop this stupidity! 33% SHORTENED!
the characters are not bad especially the main character family but the others have mediocre and exaggerated physical features! Organ for women I understand or for monster women but human women should be more acceptable physical features and being charismatic comes before being sexy!
it didn't taste like a visual novel with the updates so far! there are no animations and effects anyway, so at least visual novels should have more satisfying storytelling and stories!
I'm not interested in any extended story other than the main character, make sure to make updates with the main character in it!
I'm playing this game for two carrot haired chicks, one is a milf and the other a young character, the main character's family and the updates so far have always been disappointing!
if i look at the changelog in this update again disappointment! If it has not changed, I will not criticize this game again! and I will not consider this visual novel again!
Announced to the producer of the game! stop laziness! and be a little more resourceful or you'll keep counting where you are and those who start after you will make you swallow your dust!
- Aug 14, 2018
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Harsher criticism, this is a bullshit take. Have you ever tried to develop a game? I doubt it. You angry because the content isn't exactly what you want it to be? How entitled are you. This game is what it is, and it takes as long as it takes to develop. If you don't like it, leave. Go play any of the other thousands of games here. Move on and find a different game.
- Apr 26, 2020
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Not harsh, idiotic!
The dev is working on this alone and he has a real life besides this VN, updates will take as long as they take. Don't like it, play something else.
The whole game is based on characters with exaggerated features, don't like it, play something else.
Don't like that someone besides the MC have story, play something else.
Just played the game and I liked it especially the 2 gilfs the queen and Fiona. I hope that the MC ends up stealing the queen love for her son and ends with the MC. I hope in the near future the MC can have a threesome with the queen and Fiona as well with his mom and his sister.
- Nov 27, 2019
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Fiona’s Stories will have some scenes like that in a few updates. Mom, sister, and MC together won’t be for a while.
- Apr 26, 2020
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Do you have plans for the queen changing her love that she has for her son to the MC or will the MC have a some type of chance to steal the queen affection from her son to him?, etc.
- Nov 27, 2019
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I don’t want to give away any spoilers for future updates. But keep an eye out for change logs for Fiona’s Stories.
- Nov 27, 2019
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Something will happen with them! But considering where the story is now, it’ll take some time to get there.
- Nov 27, 2019
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I would never allow someone to alter my VN and/or change it. My story is told they way I want it to be told.
- Apr 21, 2018
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- Nov 27, 2019
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She’ll have scenes next update. Story and optional scenes. *nudge nudge wink wink.
- Oct 4, 2022
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mind your own business bagasta! Everyone has the freedom to express their opinion! I don't care how you comment on this visual novel, believe me! because your comment is your feeling! You are not my interlocutor! Also, it's fucked up with the last update! it's become a mess! It's not a visual novel anymore! I'M NOT FOLLOWING AND INTERESTED IN THIS GAME NOW!
- Oct 4, 2022
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a star! You ask why? nothing less!
This is a project that started as a visual novel and lost its visual novel feature with the latest update!
what i liked!
The mother and sister of the main character are both very attractive, charismatic and sexy the others are crap!
what i don't like!
fiction sucks!
the story sucks!
the characters are bad!
no music effects animations!
There is no need to write a much longer review, I already wrote it, if you read it, you know! no need to repeat!
an advice to you! If you are someone who is open to criticism without getting angry, always respectful of free ideas, read it or fuck it, don't pedestal any of them!
1-Write a story from start to finish! the end!
2- edit without haste through the eyes of a director!
3-avoid boring dialogues and repetitions!
4-Animation, effects, music will be worked on quality craftsmanship!
Don't make up the 5-characters out of your ass! What you really like is charismatic, handsome, beautiful, attractive, cute, scary, scary, unreliable, etc.
"The brave die one day, the cowards die EVERY DAY!" William Shakespeare!
I NO LONGER FOLLOW THIS PROJECT! I AM NOT INTERESTED! DISAPPOINTMENT!
This is a project that started as a visual novel and lost its visual novel feature with the latest update!
what i liked!
The mother and sister of the main character are both very attractive, charismatic and sexy the others are crap!
what i don't like!
fiction sucks!
the story sucks!
the characters are bad!
no music effects animations!
There is no need to write a much longer review, I already wrote it, if you read it, you know! no need to repeat!
an advice to you! If you are someone who is open to criticism without getting angry, always respectful of free ideas, read it or fuck it, don't pedestal any of them!
1-Write a story from start to finish! the end!
2- edit without haste through the eyes of a director!
3-avoid boring dialogues and repetitions!
4-Animation, effects, music will be worked on quality craftsmanship!
Don't make up the 5-characters out of your ass! What you really like is charismatic, handsome, beautiful, attractive, cute, scary, scary, unreliable, etc.
"The brave die one day, the cowards die EVERY DAY!" William Shakespeare!
I NO LONGER FOLLOW THIS PROJECT! I AM NOT INTERESTED! DISAPPOINTMENT!
Herro prease!
One update not being in the visual novel format doesn't mean the game lost its visual novel feature!
You need to take your medication!
- Sep 28, 2021
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- Dec 9, 2017
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