Wait until next public versionCan anyone tell me if there's actually some new erotic contents ? Because for the last time i played was a complete waste of time since there's nothing, limited playable game content...v....v
Wait until next public versionCan anyone tell me if there's actually some new erotic contents ? Because for the last time i played was a complete waste of time since there's nothing, limited playable game content...v....v
Not the same lol.Only on Chapter 2 but is Petrius... Little Sally? The fucking painting he made? And eyepatch girl, is that the other painting from when MG and Snape were talking? Or am I delirious??
They have plans for new content, as addressed previously, the art takes the longest. There will also be new mechanics added to the game.This game has great art, shame that the content is a bit sparse on the sexual side. But the content that is there is pretty good. Not sure about replayability of the game from what we have now though.
Most glaring spelling and grammar errors have been removed, but that is proofreading, not editing. The dialogue is still wooden and just bad on many levels, there is way too much needless exposition, the characters - even the ones lifted from original HP - are all weird, none of the jokes are funny or follow any comedic structure and the overall concept of the story is confusing and poorly thought out. None of this would pass a proper round of editing.Considering how heavily edited the game has been on the writing side, I can't assume you have played it recently and actually read it.
I said the ero-content is not "worthwhile". Having a sexscene with the oldest witch in the fucking universe is not considered worthwhile, except for a select few deviants.You lie, we have at least one sex scene and full of eroticism both on a location, and with characters.
1. If you do not like the story, then most likely the game is not for you, many on the contrary note good jokes, perhaps some are lost in the translation into English, but it is already difficult to translate.Most glaring spelling and grammar errors have been removed, but that is proofreading, not editing. The dialogue is still wooden and just bad on many levels, there is way too much needless exposition, the characters - even the ones lifted from original HP - are all weird, none of the jokes are funny or follow any comedic structure and the overall concept of the story is confusing and poorly thought out. None of this would pass a proper round of editing.
I said the ero-content is not "worthwhile". Having a sexscene with the oldest witch in the fucking universe is not considered worthwhile, except for a select few deviants.
Player: "Oh, a game about corrupting innocent witches, lets check it out"
[1000 years of terrible exposition later]
Game: "Here, you can fuck the oldest hag available"
[10000 years of terrible writing later. Minor erotic teasers occasionally sprinkled in]
Game: "end of current version"
Check options before playNo save scumming? Right clicking doesnt bring up the save menu. Only way I've been able to save is through the blue barrel thing in the office?
In our game, a lot of branches of the passage and you do not even see halfI like the art and story but the grind is way too much.
Most frustrating the fact half the time you didn't learn something in class cus of some upskirt (you don't get to see) or something making it even harder and the walk back and forth to the bathroom to jack off or the library is useless due to too high arousal. 2 hours into the game and i saw 1 (man)boob and got a kiss. Sorry but i'm gonna waste my time on another game. I'll check back in a year or so. Best of luck to the dev.
1. The writing just ignores all the rules even a rookie author should follow to make a pleasant reading experience. For specifics, refer to the first post you quoted. There are good guides and references freely available on the internet for "Writing 101", please read them for the sake of your patreons. The same is true for the comedy. There are methods to make good jokes, but you never use even one of them. The stuff you improvise is just too tasteless and not witty at all.1. If you do not like the story, then most likely the game is not for you, many on the contrary note good jokes, perhaps some are lost in the translation into English, but it is already difficult to translate.
2.Compare 0.0.3 and 0.0.4 (the gap between them half a year) if this is not enought for you, there's nothing we can do for you.
If you are so naive and you have a unfortunately overexcited, forced to disappoint you, we have a slow corruption in the game and no one will let you fuck the main girls for 5 points or a handful of coins. If you need games just jerk off, go play other games, for example on a 3D render or honey select, there you will be able to quench his thirst.
In our game there is a lot of eroticism, and pornography will be at the final stages or in the middle, depending on the choice of a branch of communication of the character
Meh don't listen to us. Download and form your own opinion have funI was going to download, but after looking at the bun fight, I'll pass.
While I might have used harsh words to emphasize just how bad it is - in my opinion - I also pointed out the flaws and a possible solution.Constructive criticism of this game would maybe be the way to go?.
The dialogue is still wooden and just bad on many levels, there is way too much needless exposition, the characters - even the ones lifted from original HP - are all weird, none of the jokes are funny or follow any comedic structure and the overall concept of the story is confusing and poorly thought out. None of this would pass a proper round of editing.
The main problem of this game is the author, the strong points are the art and coding. Unless the author seriously steps up his game, there is little room for it to miraculously become good at the end of development.There are good guides and references freely available on the internet for "Writing 101", please read them for the sake of your patreons.